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issue 88 难写  科技类的有点力不从心

In modern society, technologies, a singal of hunman progression, has palyed a more and more role. Generally speaking, technolgies influence all aspects of human society including our morality . Yet, the speaker maintain that technologies can detemime customs and ethics which I cannot totally agree.

Firstly, technologies surely influence customs and ethics in many ways. Before we take another step to clearify this statement, we need to answer the question that what is technologies? Russell, the most important philosopher in last  centry, onced said (and I paraphrase)"technologies,the outcome of human emprical world, is a kind of ambition of exploration of unknown for true answer". In this sense, technologies change our knowledge about outside world and therefore influence ethics. For example, the development of technologies create the means of mercy-killing which shake people's idea of morality. For a long time, we are discussing  if somebody choose to finish his or her own life, do we have the right to end up someone's life as that person' wish. We cannot imagine this discussion before technologies make such a progress. Another example is the problem of clone. Technologies of gene call for a new attidude to our human beings. Is it moral that I copy myself to do something I need? Will the clone bring a unimaginable aftermath to us? Discussions like these show a tremdency that technologie will play important part in our moral system.

On the other hand, technologies develop a rational spirit and critical think which has become customs of modern society.  Witchcraft used to dominate this world so long and people cannot think by themselvs because they need a explanation to all things, even it is a unjustifiable explanation. Yet, people in this time posses the spirit of rational analysis which is the core walue of science and technologies. Thus, technologies participate to construct our customs system and better human souls.

However, technologies cannot determime customs and ethics.  Even darwinism have many evidences to support its theory, religion field still resist the agressive entrance of darwinism. Because technologies is the outcome of our emprical world and we still know little about universe, that means all judgements from science and tecnologies may just historical judgement. Human beings need eternal faith to sustain our spiritual world. Moreover, technologies is not the only factor that influence our customs. Socrates, the famous philosopher of ancient Greece, used to ask questions such as what is beauty and what is justice. These problems encourage numerous philosophers to persue the truth. Socrates's critical thinking has became a good quality of human beings and a custom of our society. It is obvious that philosophy, politics,arts and so on are also the factors of influencing customs and ethics.

To sum up, technologies surely influence our customs and ethics, however, it is not the only factor. In fact, if technologies whic is artificial determime our spiritual world, then all the ethics and customs can be changed by people who change the technologies. The aftermath may dangerous for the reason that our thought and our spirit may be controled by people who possess technologies. For that matter, autocracy may be possible. To avoid this situation, we have to separate customs and ethics from technologies as Kant said "limit knowledge and left the field for our faith".
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In modern society, technologies(单数,和后面has一致), a singal of hunman progression, has palyed a more and more role(这个和上一篇一样,弱问一下是不是某模板). Generally speaking, technolgies influence all aspects of human society including our morality . Yet, the speaker maintain that technologies can detemime customs and ethics which I cannot totally agree.

Firstly, technologies surely influence customs and ethics in many ways. Before we take another step to clearify this statement, we need to answer the question that what is technologies? Russell, the most important philosopher in last centry, onced said (and I paraphrase)"technologies,the outcome of human emprical world, is a kind of ambition of exploration of unknown for true answer". In this sense, technologies change our knowledge about outside world and therefore influence ethics. For example, the development of technologies create 单数,主语是development)the means of mercy-killing which shake people's idea of morality. For a long time, we are discussing  if somebody 加个is free to会不会好点 choose to finish his or her own life, do we have the right to end up someone's life as that person' wish. We cannot imagine this discussion before technologies make such a progress. Another example is the problem of clone. Technologies of gene call for a new attidude to our human beings. Is it moral that I copy myself to do something I need? Will the clone bring a unimaginable aftermath to us? Discussions like these show a tremdency that technologie will play important part in our moral system.

On the other hand, technologies develop a rational spirit and critical think which has become customs of modern society.  Witchcraft In modern society, technologies, a singal of hunman progression, has palyed a more and more role. Generally speaking, technolgies influence all aspects of human society including our morality . Yet, the speaker maintain that technologies can detemime customs and ethics which I cannot totally agree.

Firstly, technologies surely influence customs and ethics in many ways. Before we take another step to clearify this statement, we need to answer the question that what is technologies? Russell, the most important philosopher in last  centry, onced said (and I paraphrase)"technologies,the outcome of human emprical world, is a kind of ambition of exploration of unknown for true answer". In this sense, technologies change our knowledge about outside world and therefore influence ethics. For example, the development of technologies create the means of mercy-killing which shake people's idea of morality. For a long time, we are discussing  if somebody choose to finish his or her own life, do we have the right to end up someone's life as that person' wish. We cannot imagine this discussion before technologies make such a progress. Another example is the problem of clone. Technologies of gene call for a new attidude to our human beings. Is it moral that I copy myself to do something I need? Will the clone bring a unimaginable aftermath to us? Discussions like these show a tremdency that technologie will play important part in our moral system.

On the other hand, technologies develop a rational spirit and critical think which has become customs of modern society.  Witchcraft used to dominate this world so long and people cannot think by themselvs because they need a explanation to all things, even it is a unjustifiable explanation. Yet, people in this time posses the spirit of rational analysis which is the core walue of science and technologies. Thus, technologies participate to construct our customs system and better human souls.

However, technologies cannot determime customs and ethics.  Even darwinism have用provides更好 many evidences to support its theory, religion field still resist the agressive entrance of darwinism. Because technologies is the outcome of our emprical world and we still know little about universe, that means all judgements from science and tecnologies may just historical judgement. Human beings need eternal faith to sustain our spiritual world. Moreover, technologies is not the only factor that influence our customs. Socrates, the famous philosopher of ancient Greece, used to ask questions such as what is beauty and what is justice. These problems encourage numerous philosophers to persue the truth. Socrates's critical thinking has became a good quality of human beings and a custom of our society. It is obvious that philosophy, politics,arts and so on are also the factors of去掉吧 influencing customs and ethics.

To sum up,你结尾了? technologies surely influence our customs and ethics, however, it is not the only factor. In fact, if technologies whic is artificial determime our spiritual world, then all the ethics and customs can be changed by people who change the technologies. The aftermath may dangerous for the reason that our thought and our spirit may be controled by people who possess technologies. For that matter, autocracy may be possible. To avoid this situation, we have to separate customs and ethics from technologies as Kant said "limit knowledge and left the field for our faith". dominate this world so long and people cannot think by themselvs because they need a explanation to all things, even it is a unjustifiable explanation. Yet, people in this time posses the spirit of rational analysis which is the core walue of science and technologies. Thus, technologies participate to construct our customs system and better human souls.


最后一段不如单独说一段,给个例子,这样比较好。毕竟最后的结论段不是关键。大家都写得差不多

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In modern society, technologies, a singal of hunman progression, have played a more and more important role. Generally speaking, technolgies influence all aspects of human society including our morality. Yet, the speaker maintains that technologies can detemime customs and ethics which I cannot totally agree.

Firstly, technologies surely influence customs and ethics in many ways. Before we take another step to clearify this statement, we need to answer the question what is technologies? Russell, the most important philosopher in last centuary, onced said (and I paraphrase)"technologies, the outcome of human emprical world,
are a kind of ambition of exploration of unknown for true answer". In this sense, technologies change our knowledge about outside world and therefore influence ethics. For example, the development of technologies creates the means of mercy-killing which shake people's idea of morality. For a long time, we are discussing if somebody choose to finish his or her own life, do we have the right to end up someone's life as that person' wish. We cannot imagine this discussion before technologies make such a progress.
这句话不错,学习了Another example is the problem of clone. Technologies of gene call for a new attidude to our human beings. Is it moral that I copy myself to do something I need? Will the clone bring a unimaginable aftermath to us? Discussions like these show a tremdency that technologie will play important part in our moral system.

On the other hand, technologies develop a rational spirit and critical think which has become customs of modern society.  Witchcraft used to dominate this world so long and people cannot think by themselvs because they need a explanation to all things, even it is a unjustifiable explanation. Yet, people in this time posses the spirit of rational analysis which is the core walue of science and technologies. Thus, technologies participate to construct our customs system and better human souls.

However, technologies cannot determime customs and ethics.  Even Darwinism have many evidences to support its theory, religion field still resist the agressive entrance of Darwinism. Because technologies are the outcome of our emprical world and we still know little about universe, which means all judgements from science and tecnologies may just historical judgement. Human beings need eternal faith to sustain our spiritual world. Moreover, technologies are not the only factor that influences our customs. Socrates, the famous philosopher of ancient Greece, used to ask questions such as what beauty is and what justice is. These problems encourage numerous philosophers to persue the truth. Socrates's critical thinking has become a good quality of human beings and a custom of our society. It is obvious that philosophy, politics, arts and so on are also the factors of influencing customs and ethics.

To sum up, technologies surely influence our customs and ethics; however, it is not the only factor. In fact, if technologies whic
actually determine our spiritual world, then all the ethics and customs can be changed by people who change the technologies. (
此句和后一句control tech 的意思类似了 )The aftermath may dangerous for the reason that our thought and our spirit may be controled by people who possess technologies. For that matter, autocracy may be possible. To avoid this situation, we have to separate customs and ethics from technologies as Kant said "limit knowledge and left the field for our faith".
我觉得最后一段里面的这个说法很好的,可以另外写一段,也作为反证法,给我很多的启发。

总体来说,论述的比较全面了,加油

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..不是模板啊,上回一同学帮我改的,我懒得再想了..就用了

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