【辉太郎杀G大队】7/11作业 Issue11 by MC dragonfly

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TOPIC: ISSUE11 - "All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."

The speaker claims that all nations should help to establish a global university designed to turn out graduates for the resolution of most persistent social problems worldwide. Some difficulties may be faced with, as far as I' concerned, it is really a good step towards the final success.

Nowadays, many global issues we have faced and will face need to solve make it a necessary to set the global university for talented graduates with global view. The influences of many global problems such as global warming, lack of natural resources, poverty and famine, ranges from place to place. If they are not resolved properly, we human beings will not enjoy a safe future.
There will be increasingly need for experts in proper fields with international view and international academic cooperation. The foundation of the global university will certainly be a good way approaching the final resolution as discussed below.

One compelling reason in favor of the conclusion has to do with the fact that its faculty and students would bring diverse cultural background and educational perspectives, which will help a lot to establish the global view of the students. Some problems really have global impact, like the greenhouse effect If the experts fight against with the persistent problems are in absence of the global view, considering problems within a narrow mind, the effectiveness of the actions they take will be highly suspicious. Considering the plan of resists the output of greenhouse gas, it will be of little use if the countries involved are limited. If more people are equipped with the global and long term view, instead of concentrations on the regional and short term profits, there will be more chances that the Kyoto Protocol will be signed by more countries, especially the U.S.A.

Another compelling reason in favor of a global university is its good basis for international academic cooperation. Some problems such as lack of nature resources, can be more easily solved through the cooperation. For instance, a lot of countries cooperate with the controlled thermonuclear fusion, which if succeed, will almost thoroughly solve the energy problem of human beings. The global university is set up by all nations and it is a good platform for the cooperation like this as a matter of course.

Moreover, we cannot deny the privilege that the schoolmates from all over the world will better bind the world together in face of some social problems like wars and conflicts. The global university will accelerate the culture communication and improve the trust of each other, which make things easier.

However, although it is really positive to build such a global university, it doesn't means we have no problems to consider. How shall we deal with the possible existing culture conflicts? It also remains a question how to handle the problems raised by the difference of the economy development of all regions. Taking all the possible difficulties into account, we then have the right to say the global university will enjoy a safe success and leads to the result we have expected.

In sum, it is a rather good advice to build the global university. Without the ignorance of the problems possibly existing, the global university will finally do us a favor on solving the world's most persistent social problems. （547 words）

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The speaker claims that all nations should help to establish a global university designed to turn out graduates for the resolution of most persistent social problems worldwide. Some difficulties may be faced with, as far as I' concerned, it is really a good step towards the final success.

Nowadays, many global issues we have faced and will face need to solve make it a necessary to set the global university for talented graduates with global view. The influences of many global problems such as global warming, lack of natural resources, poverty and famine, ranges (range) from place to place. If they are not resolved properly, we human beings will not enjoy a safe future. There will be increasingly need for experts in proper fields with international view and international academic cooperation. The foundation of the global university will certainly be a good way approaching the final resolution as discussed below.

One compelling reason in favor of the conclusion has to do with the fact that its faculty and students would bring diverse cultural background and educational perspectives, which will help a lot to establish the global view of the students. Some problems really have global impact, like the greenhouse effect. If the experts fight against with the persistent problems are in absence of the global view, considering problems within a narrow mind, the effectiveness of the actions they take will be highly suspicious.(好长哦，真不容易) Considering the plan of resists the output of greenhouse gas, it will be of little use if the countries involved are limited. If more people are equipped with the global and long term view, instead of concentrations on the regional and short term profits, there will be more chances that the Kyoto Protocol will be signed by more countries, especially the U.S.A.

Another compelling reason in favor of a global university is its good basis for international academic cooperation. Some problems such as lack of nature resources, can be more easily solved through the cooperation. For instance, a lot of countries cooperate with the controlled thermonuclear fusion,(你学什么的，怎么都知道，哈哈) which if succeeded, will almost thoroughly solve the energy problem of human beings. The global university is set up by all nations and it is a good platform for the cooperation like this as a matter of course.

Moreover, we cannot deny the privilege that the schoolmates from all over the world will better bind the world together in face of some social problems like wars and conflicts. The global university will accelerate the culture communication and improve the trust of each other, which make things easier.


However, although it is really positive to build such a global university, it doesn't means we have no problems to consider. How shall we deal with the possible existing culture conflicts? It also remains a question how to handle the problems raised by the difference of the economy development of all regions. Taking all the possible difficulties into account, we then have the right to say the global university will enjoy a safe success and leads to the result we have expected.

In sum, it is a rather good advice to build the global university. Without the ignorance of the problems possibly existing, the global university will finally do us a favor on solving the world's most persistent social problems.

评语：
行文非常流畅，层次分明，明显是经过润色的（希望没有猜错，不然会有藐视作者的嫌疑）

有一点，我不明白，你说建立大学很有必要，但是跟开头和结尾提到的困难有什么联系。我觉得是建立这样的大学是来解决问题的，但是开头和结尾给人感觉是，困难是建立大学的阻力。。。。不知道有没有理解错，你就莫笑话我了，哈哈