[彼岸之梦]备考小组——之 难句帖

玲珑四犯UID: 2655925

[小组成员] 彼岸之梦小组全体?3 O
- d' b9 B1 D+ w& f/ G
[小组计划]0 d1 c3 E
1、按照小组既定计划——杨鹏难句5句/天，研究or背下来，anyway研习之。
2.每人每天在参考资料中（economists,nature,gre真题。。。不限）自行选择分析长难句。
   数量：1-正无穷
   周末除外。届时可将疑问跟帖提出，大家一起讨论解决。, `4 H( V; a2 Y+ Y1 L, [) v
3、每周会安排一次小组内部讨论，分享难句阅读心得，互相答疑解惑，6次集体讨论中会不定期请到资深神秘嘉宾为大家解除疑惑，请大家务必每次按时参加~（这一句是拿来主义 ）    ) G; P: f0 y+ D) Q

X! C  h' [. b& P) @
1 F3 |  E: u3 y7 o+ T( g( U' x
[奖惩制度]
每天分析3个难句积15分，少于3个难句积5分，多于3个难句者每多分析1句加5个积分作为奖励, 周积分最高者将获得100寄托币+10声望奖励；6周总积分最高者可获得备考先锋勋章并将成为版主候选人。无故缺席2次者警告一次，警告两次自动退出小组。（这个。。。在请教斑竹批准中。。。）

完成既定目标的手段就是：细化细化再细化
加油！！


工具箱：
1.杨鹏难句下载：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-184271-1-1.html
2.杨鹏难句纠错
m7
（ N, K) P& P5 C% f0 G

crazyconyUID: 2281869

yes, let us do it :)

cuteberryUID: 2401378

:)let's start...

cuteberryUID: 2401378

Although these observations are true, Pessen overestimates their importance by concluding from them that the undoubted progress toward inequality in the late eighteenth century continued in the Jacksonian period and that the United States was a class-ridden,plutocratic society even before industrialization.
第一次找句子，可能这个句子不够难吧。
主干是 Pessen overestimates their improtance by concluding (that the undoubted.... and that the United States)from them.
这里的concluding的两个宾语从句并列且置于from them后面，但结构还算清晰。
说的不对就尽管指出来啦~哈

aliciawjUID: 2568531

嘻嘻 刚看到 吼吼 回家去跟帖啦~~

玲珑四犯UID: 2655925

7.16
1.
Although several molecules that inhibit cell cycle kinases have been developed and clinically screened as potential anticancer agents, none of these has been approved for commercial use and an effective strategy to specifically control malignant cell proliferation has yet to be established.
难句类型：复杂修饰+ 专有名词
[Although several molecules 从句主语(that inhibit cell cycle kinases) 第二层定语从句 have been developed 并列谓语and clinically screened并列谓语 as potential anticancer agents]（让步从句）, none of these has been approved for commercial use and an effective strategy to specifically control malignant cell proliferation( 省略which) has yet to be established.
翻译：[尽管几个（抑制细胞激酶循环的）分子已经被发展和临床筛选为有潜力的抗癌试剂]，但是这其中没有一个通过检验为商业所用，而且还没有一个有效而明确的控制恶性细胞增生的策略被确立。

玲珑四犯UID: 2655925

这个貌似找得不难也不长。。。失败

玲珑四犯UID: 2655925

一会儿再来！！

missingusaUID: 2625832

报告组长:
这是我的长难句贴,请检阅:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=984387

玲珑四犯UID: 2655925

9# missingusa
看过了，得向你学习，加油

玲珑四犯UID: 2655925

We saw that a simulation, carried out using sequences that meet similar quality criteria as those derived from experimental (LM-PCR/LAM-PCR) analysis, results in a more accurate insertion site distribution than a calculation, although random set sizes of 1000 to 10 000 sequences are not reliable to detect preferred or non-preferred features, regardless of which approach, simulated or calculated, was used.
难句类型：复杂修饰+ 插入语+多层从句
分析：
1层主句We saw {2层宾语从句that a simulation, [3层分词结构修饰宾语从句中的主语carried out using sequences(4层定语从句修饰分词中的宾语that meet similar quality criteria as those derived from experimental (LM-PCR/LAM-PCR) analysis),] 回归2层宾语从句的谓语rults in a more accurate insertion site distribution than a calculation}, although random set sizes of 1000 to 10 000 sequences are not reliable to detect preferred or non-preferred features, regardless of which approach, simulated or calculated, was used.
解释：
1+2层：我们可以看到一种模拟方式带来了比计算方式更准确的关于插入式页面的分配。
3层讲什么样的模拟方式：实施使用序列的模拟方式
4层讲什么样的序列：与实验性分析所得出来的质量准则一致的序列
那么，连起来就是
我们可以看到，一种实施使用与实验性分析所得质量标准一致的序列的模拟方式带来了比计算方式更准确的关于插入式页面的分配，尽管，1000-10000的随机样本数量序列并不能确保发觉优先或者不优先的形态，无论运用模拟方式还是计算方式。

玲珑四犯UID: 2655925

Through experiments and modelling, we demonstrate the potency of this approach for enabling highly versatile solar modules on both rigid and flexible substrates with enhanced carrier collection efficiency arising from the geometric configuration of the nanopillars.
难句类型：结构不难，各种分词短语太搞了
分析
主干：we demonstrate the potency of this approach 我们证明了这个方法的潜力
接下来就好像是打破沙锅问到底的追问
1层，什么样子的approach
this approach for enabling highly versatile solar modules
确保太阳能模数多样化的approach
2层，什么样的modules
modules on both rigid and flexible substrates
确立在精确不是灵活的基础上的modules
3层，什么样的substrates
substrates with enhanced carrier collection efficiency
有增大的携带者收集效率的substrates
4层，什么样的efficiency
efficiency arising from the geometric configuration of the nanopillars
从纳米柱（不晓得直译对不对）的几何化架构得到提升的efficiency

这个句子的主干不必提炼，但是修饰宾语的4层短语和分词却携带了大量的主要信息。
这算是众多难句的一种吧，意思难以理解，但结构很清晰

玲珑四犯UID: 2655925

12# Bela1229

个人觉得as far as 这里就是until的意思吧。。。
刚又有结合上下文，把那篇文章看了一遍，
看得比较粗也许有遗漏，没有发现什么悬念，不知道困扰你的地方是什么呢？

玲珑四犯UID: 2655925

Our findings indicate that, although a few local adults seem to play an important role in the colonization process at treeline, large levels of gene flow from outside were maintained, suggesting that the potential advantages of local adults (such as local adaptation, proximity to the colonization area, phenological synchrony) did not prevent a large gamete immigration.
刚一看挺长，后来发现不难，但还是简单分析一下吧
主干：
our findings indicate that large levels of gene flow from outside were maintained
我们研究发现大规模的外来基因流入（本地区）还在继续
分词从句：
suggesting that the potential advantages of local adults did not prevent a large gamete.
并且联想到当地成年人的潜在有点并没有预防大规模的婚配
让步：
although a few local adults seem to play an important role in the colonization process at treeline
尽管一些当地的成年人看似在殖民化的过程中扮演了重要的角色

这里不太明白treeline 应该怎样解释
开始我把它理解成了family tree的意思
后来发现好像不太对
如果是tree line的话，应该是木林线的意思
也就是一片树林，树木停止生长的那条线
但看似与本文无关，
后来我猜想，是不是次调查中有个类似柱状图的表格
那么，柱状图的顶端连成的线就好像是tree line 呢
无从考证，正文要收费
麻烦高手解答下，谢谢了

玲珑四犯UID: 2655925

Earlier studies have focused on the dynamic interactions between the neurohormonal systems and molecular pathways that underlie myocardial contractility and heart rate,and our understanding of the pathway has benefited significantly from this earlier work.
分析：
1.主句
earlier studies have focused on the dynamic interaction(状语修饰interaction: between the neurohormonal systems and molecular pathways)
翻译：早期的研究已经在关注神经性的激素系统和分子路径间的动态互动
3.and连接并列句
and our understanding of the parthway has benefited significantly from this earlier work
翻译：并且我们的理解很大程度上得益于这种早期的研究工作
2.从句修饰状语中的pathway
...molecular pathways that underlie myocardial contractility and heart rate...
翻译：在心脏收缩功能和心跳速率衰弱的情况下的molecular pathay

则原文按顺序理解
早期的研究已经在关注神经性的激素系统和在心脏收缩功能和心跳速率衰弱的情况下分子路径间的动态互动，并且，我们的理解很大程度上得益于这种早期的研究工作