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Some people think students should study together while others think they should be taught alone.Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In contemprorary society, students’ education becomes a problem while current society growing and developing rapidly day by day.Some people said it is nessary to put students tegether to study but the others said they should be taught alone, for both points of view
people hold diverse views towards it.

Put students study together is beneficial for their personality forming. It is true that majority youngsters to be educated and trained at school as school is well-accepted education place where is founded and ackownleged by government currently, because only in school students are possible to get a balanced development on themselves. Firstly the established school with good facilities and good enviroment can offer students a good atmosphere. In favor of inspire students get high scores.Secondly, students who study at school not only need to turn in high scores but also get well with other classmates. The activities organised by shool like parties, picnics,balls,football games offered students a great deal of oppertunities to get touch with people.Finally,school is safe and quiet place where cultivated(or shape) students a good personality and ego characteristics.

Accordingly when most people sending their children to school to get the entired education ,an increasing number of people keep their child alone and to be educated solely by non-schooling system, there are reasons for this phenomenon.first people worries about the stiff education styles and bored curriculums restricts the thoughts of student for their developments.moreover the baneful infuencing from unfavorable friends also need to be considered as a drawback of schooling system. However a great deal of free time can be given and a large number of interesting courses can be choosen without hesitating through non-shooling system to students, thus they have more times to relieve themselves and broaden their horizons.

In sum, I would say no matter with shooling or to be trained solely, different education system with different merits and drawbacks, the students who are able to motivate themselves well are likely to accept a non-schooling styple of training alone.the other students who are not had better go to school.

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Some people think students should study together while others think they should be taught alone.Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In contemprorary society, students’ education becomes a problem in current society with rapid development and growth,.Some people say it is nessary to put students tegether to study but the others say they should be taught alone. For both points of view people hold diverse views towards it.
For those people who think that students should be taught together, they have their grounded merits. Firstly it is beneficial for get high scores during exams. It is a fact that majority of youngsters are educated and trained at school because school is a commonly accepted educational place founded and acknowledged by government. The established school with good facilities and good enviroment will be possible to offer to students a good atmosphere. In favor of inspire students to get high scores. Secondly, Put students study together is beneficial for the cultivation of their personalities.Students who study at school not only need to turn in high scores but also get well with other peers. only in school will students be possible to get a balanced development on themselves. The activities organised by school like parties, picnics,balls,football games provide students with a great deal of oppertunities to get touch with people, which helps students to enhance their interpersonal skills.
Accordingly when most people are sending their children to school to get the entired education ,an increasing number of people keep their children alone and educated them solely by non-schooling system, there are reasons for this phenomenon.Firstly people concern about the stiff education styles and boring curriculums restrict the thought of students for their development.moreover the baneful infuencing from unfavorable friends also need to be considered. However a great deal of free time can be given and a large number of interesting courses can be choosen without hesitating through non-shooling system to students who is willing to accept this studying styles, thus they have more time to relieve themselves and broaden their horizons.
In sum, no matter what study style is, schooling or non-schooling, different education system with different merits and drawbacks.Nevertheless I would say schooling as a tranditional educational style, not only concentrating on study progressing,but also on further students whole career.thus go to school to get entired education would be a wise choice.

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