旸旸 8.11 2009 作文小组 作业

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It is all people's-->most people就好吧 dream to find a good job in one's life because an ideal job means a well-paid salary and it provides an opportunity for people to fulfill their dreams in career. So when it comes to the question whether we should choose a small company or an international enterprise, it becomes controversial.很经典的扬扬式开头 A group of people are fond of small companies for they will have more opportunities to be promoted. However, in my perspective, I would like to work in a big enterprise rather than in a small one and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, in most cases, a big company has more chances to survive compared with those small companies. It is well known (to us)可略吧 that those national famous companies and even international enterprises have stable clients and advanced technologies. As a result, in the era with intensive competition, those big companies are not as easily bankrupt as those small ones-->谁说的,雷曼啊嘿嘿. According to a report, the average of a company is not beyond 10 years是说前面的小公司吧,我想在一起说比较好的,有点突然. Nevertheless, those big companies which enjoy a world-wide reputation usually have history even more than scores of years. Microsoft established in the 1960s; Channel has occupied one part of the world perfume markets since it was the 1920s;Ford started to manufacture automobiles one hundred years ago; Therefore, in a big company, it is less possible for people to lose their job because of being bankrupt caused by accidents such as financial crisis. Convinced by the benefits of lower possibility to lose job, I am supportive of working in a big company

Furthermore, a big company usually provides high salary and comfortable working environment. Since big companies have more budget than those small companies, they have enough finance to improve working conditions in the company. In contrast, the primary goal of a small company is to survive in the commercial realm (where is )full of competition, so rarely could a small company pay much attention to the salary and working environment of employees. I will take my experience for example. I used to have interns both in a small network company and an international company. In the small company, faculty begins their work in a small house and their average income is no more than 3,000 RMB per month. While in the international company, employees can have drinks and food freely. What is more, the average of salary is about 5,000 RMB per month. In this circumstance, hardly could we refute the enticing salary and comfortable environment to work in a big company. 我个人觉得不用说这样详细的数字吧, 不如说大公司的评价公司是小公司的2倍?

Finally, in a big company, faculty is more likely to open horizon. A big company has massive international business, so(the) faculty will have more opportunity-->opportunities to work abroad or to be trained in other places. In addition, because of the advanced technology and management, employees can become more professional in the devoted area. However, people cannot enjoy these advantages in a small company.

In sum, due to the high and stable salary, comfortable working environment, and opportunity to study abroad, I really prefer to work in a big especially an international enterprise rather than in a small one. 扬扬字数很多啊, 不愧是计算机的哦..我打字不行啊. 我比较喜欢第二段, 扬扬作文逻辑很好的, 2段正反写. 没什么大的语法问题

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9.22 作业
哎，纯属乱写的，写的烂死了

When people plan to find a job, they are usually confused by the question whether they choose a job which provides a high salary or just work according to their hobbies. In my perspective, I would rather choose a job for money than for fun and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, the primary goal of find a job is to survive. No one could deny the fact that money is not necessary but also essential to our lives. Without sufficient financial support, we cannot survive in the society never to say fulfill our dreams or enjoy a life. Denizens need to gain salary to raise families; making profits for a company is the top task to the manager because the money could be used to enlarge manufacturing; still scientists need to find finance source to support their research. All examples stated above indicate the magnitude of money. As a result, no matter what career a person is, earning money play a dominant role. Thus it is completely acceptable for people to work for money primarily.

Furthermore, with sufficient money, we can lead a happy life. Admittedly, never is money universal, yet we cannot neglect the fact that money can bring happiness to us. I will illustrate this point from two aspects. On one hand, money can help us to realize our dreams such as establishing a company and studying in abroad. On the other hand, money improves our life. If we can earn a large sum of money, we can have a trip to Hawaii to relax after a long time hard working; or buy a big and comfortable house to live. What is more, we can also use money to meet our desire because we have the ability to purchase what we want, including luxury. Convinced by the benefits resulting from high income, I am supportive of the idea, people should find a job for more money.

Finally, what a person is paid is a useful way to evaluate how successful the person is to some extent. In most cases, the more a person contributes, the more the person will gain from a company or our society. Therefore, if people receive high award in career, it makes sense to conclude that they are really successful in their devoted field.

In sum, because of the purpose of work, the affect of money and success verified by a well-paid job, I am strong agree with the point that people really should work for money rather than for fun.

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When people plan to find a job, they are usually confused by the question--situation whether they choose a job which provides a high salary or just work according to their hobbies. In my perspective, I would rather choose a job for money than for fun and my reasons are as follows.开头很简洁很酷啊

To begin with, the primary goal of find a job is to survive. No one could deny the fact that money is not necessary but also essential to our lives.对 Without sufficient financial support, we cannot survive in the society never to say fulfill our dreams or enjoy a life. Denizens need to gain salary to raise families; making profits for a company is the top task to the manager because the money could be used to enlarge manufacturing; still scientists need to find finance source to support their research. All examples stated above indicate好的词 the magnitude of money. As a result, no matter what career a person is, earning money play a dominant role. Thus it is completely acceptable for people to work for money primarily.描述的情况很好很真实

Furthermore, with sufficient money, we can lead a happy life. Admittedly, never is money universal, yet we cannot neglect the fact that money can bring happiness to us. I will illustrate this point from two aspects. On one hand, money can help us to realize our dreams such as establishing a company and studying in abroad. On the other hand, money improves our life. If we can earn a large sum of money, we can have a trip to Hawaii to relax after a long time hard working; or buy a big and comfortable house to live. What is more, we can also use money to meet our desire because we have the ability to purchase what we want, including luxury. Convinced by the benefits resulting from high income, I am supportive of the idea, people should find a job for more money 语法结构很好, 语言用的也好. 容易理解又不都是简单句. 只是我写的也是类似的例子不过观点不一样.

Finally, what a person is paid is a useful way to evaluate how successful the person is to some extent. In most cases, the more a person contributes, the more the person will gain from a company or our society. Therefore, if people receive high award in career, it makes sense to conclude that they are really successful in their devoted field.这个也不一定吧..个人觉得上面2点说的不错, 这个没怎么展开说估计时间也有限. 倒不如不要也罢..

In sum, because of the purpose of work, the affect of money and success verified by a well-paid job, I am strong agree with the point that people really should work for money rather than for fun.扬扬字数一直多.很羡慕啊, 这个写的很好, 比上个好. 没有语法逻辑的问题

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旸旸 9.23 作业

把土地给人用是不是比给濒危动物用更重要

1 animals on the edge of extinction is very precious to our human beings and they really need land to survive.
2 compared with animals, we have a mass of approaches to meet the needs of land.

Land has been becoming a precious kind of resource on earth. People needs more land to expand cities by establishing shopping malls, departments and transportation systems. However, when we enjoy the prosperity of our culture, actually we should realize that we sacrifice the environment. As a consequence, in my perspective, it is the time for our mankind to protect those animals as well as environment not only for the survival of animals that is nearly extinct but also for the profits of our human beings. Therefore, I agree with the idea that it is not only important but also essentially necessary to leave land for animals on the edge of extinction. My reasons are as follows.

To begin with, those animals on the edge of extinction are important to our human beings and they really need lands to survive. If we develop those unutilized land, no one could deny the fact that it will impair environment of those animals that are in danger of extinction. We have lost many species of creature on earth mainly because of the activity of human being. According to report, the danger from human activities is more severe than causes resulting from natural accidents. The melting of Arctic iceberg, the deduction of tropic forests in South America and those animals on the edge of extinction warn that we face a vital environment problem caused by denizens on this planet. As a result, if we cannot stop over-develop land resources, there is no doubt that it will speed the extinction of more species. Hardly could we image that how can we survive there is only human on earth. Convinced by the importance of other creature, I am supportive the idea that we should keep land unutilized for animals that are going to be extinct.

Furthermore, compared with animals, we have many approaches of solving our desire to lands. Since we have advanced technology, we can establish more skyscrapers that have more spaces for human beings; buildings and facilities underground is another choice that can make full use of cherish land resources; still stop wasting is the most important and effective way to solve land problems. If there are fewer luxurious houses which take large area of lands, never would we so intensively frustrated by the problem with lack of lands. Therefore it is our responsibility to find other solutions to address the problem with insufficient lands.

In sum, because of the urgent needs of protecting animals on the edge of extinctions and the solution to the limited land resources to human beings, I maintain the view that we should leave lands for those precious but nearly extinct animals who highly depends on lands.

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Land has been becoming a precious kind of resource on earth. People needs more land to expand cities by establishing shopping malls, departments and transportation systems. However, when we enjoy the prosperity of our culture-->resource吧, actually we should realize that we sacrifice-->already sacrificed the environment. As a consequence, in my perspective, it is the time for our mankind to protect those animals as well as environment题目没说环境最好开头时候不提 not only for the survival of animals that is nearly extinct but also for the profits of our human beings. Therefore, I agree with the idea that it is not only important but also essentially necessary to leave land for animals on the edge of extinction. My reasons are as follows.头段没有以前的简洁, 首段稍长

To begin with, those animals on the edge of extinction哎..我怎么没想起来用这个 are important to our human beings and they really need lands to survive. If we develop those unutilized-不确定是这用的 land, no one could deny the fact that it will impair environment of those animals that are in danger of extinction. We have lost many species of creature on earth mainly because of the activity of human being. According to the report, the danger from human activities is more severe than causes resulting from natural accidents(我觉得disaster比较合适). The melting of Arctic iceberg, the deduction of tropic forests in South America and those animals on the edge of extinction warn that we face a vital environment problem caused by denizens??什么意思 on this planet. As a result, if we cannot stop over-developed land resources, there is no doubt that it will speed the extinction of more species. Hardly could we image that how can we survive there is only human on earth. Convinced by the importance of other creature, I am supportive the idea that we should keep land unutilized for animals that are going to be extinct.

Furthermore, compared with animals, we have many approaches of solving our desire to lands. Since we have advanced technology, we can establish more skyscrapers that have--provide more spaces for human beings; buildings and facilities underground头回听说.. is another choice that can make full use of cherish land resources; still(will) stop wasting is the most important and effective way to solve land problems. If there are fewer luxurious houses which take large area of lands, never would we so intensively frustrated by the problem with lack of lands. Therefore it is our responsibility to find other solutions to address the problem with insufficient lands. 前后反写很好. 有倒装值得学习, 我也想用就是怕用的不对i

m, because of the urgent needs of protecting animals on the edge of extinctions and the solution to the limited land resources to human beings, I maintain the view that we should leave lands for those precious but nearly extinct animals who highly depends on lands.结尾很简洁的, 文章很清晰. 结构也好. 没了以前的4段文,嘿嘿

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旸旸 9.24 作业


On vocation, people usually prefer to have a trip to relax. In recent years, more people choose to enjoy a happy journal with friends and families. However, here comes to the problem whether it is better to travel in a group or by themselves. This question is controversial because if travelling alone, people can visit any places they are interested in; while when in a group led by the guide people can worry nothing. In my perspective, if putting a priority, I really prefer to travel in a group with a guide and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, the guide knows detailed information about the local tourism resources. So the guide can better know where is worthy to visit. On the contrast, in most cases it is the first time for visitors to arrive at the city. Thus rarely will be they familiar with this new place. As a result, they can hardly know the transportation and culture of the destination, never to mention have an enjoyable journal. I will illustrate this point with following example. One of my friends planned a trip to Shanghai, and he insisted on playing alone instead of participating in a group. Because of no guide, when he came to Shanghai, he was completely confused by the complicated transportation system in Shanghai. What is worse, when he arrived at Shanghai, it was evening. Nevertheless, it was too difficult for him to find a hotel whose fees he could afford because he knew nothing about that city. Eventually, his holiday was ruined by the unsuccessfully trip just because he did not take part in a group and there was no guide. Therefore, if travelling to a new city, especially a city with complicated transportation system and huge area, it is more acceptable to travel in a group led by a guide.

Furthermore, since guides are professional in the field of tourism and they always possess massive experiences, they can have a more careful plan than those who travel individually. Consequently, two advantages are manifest. On one hand, the plan designed by a guide can save a great amount of time. It is well known to us that if we travel in group and led by a guide we can visit more places of interests in a shorter time than we travel by ourselves. On the other hand, since we travel in a group, the expenditure of hotels and ticket fees are lower than several persons, it is more economical to travel in a group.

In sum, because of lack of information to an unfamiliar city, low expenditure of a trip, and professional skills plus experience of guides, I strongly incline to travel in a group led by a guide.

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On vocation拼写呵呵, people usually prefer to have a trip to relax. In recent years, more people choose to enjoy a happy journal with friends and families. However, here comes to the problem whether it is better to travel in a group or by themselves. This question is controversial because if travelling alone, people can visit any places they are interested in; while when in a group led by the guide people can worry nothing..?. In my perspective, if putting a priority..?, I really prefer to travel in a group with a guide and my reasons are as follows.今天写的有几处不很明白

To begin with, the guide knows detailed information用一个就行吧 about the local tourism resources. So the guide can better know where is worthy to visit. On the contrast, in most cases it is the first time for visitors to arrive-travel in that city( at the city). Thus rarely will be they..?the..or what? familiar with this new place. As a result, they can hardly know the transportation and culture of the destination, never to mention have an enjoyable journal. I will illustrate this point with following example. One of my friends planned a trip to Shanghai, and he insisted on playing-visiting by himself( alone) instead of participating in a group. Because of no guide, when he came to Shanghai, he was completely confused by the complicated transportation system in Shanghai--there. What is worse, when he arrived at Shanghai, it was evening--it was the evening that he arrived there, which made thing worse. Nevertheless, it was too difficult for him to find a hotel whose fees he could afford--with limited expense ( because he knew nothing about that city)这个貌似前后不搭配. Eventually, his holiday was ruined by the unsuccessfully trip just because he did not take part in a group and there was no guide. Therefore, if travelling to a new city, especially a city with complicated transportation system and-in huge area, it is more acceptable to travel in a group led by a guide.


Furthermore, since guides are professional in the field of tourism and they always possess massive experiences, they can have a more careful plan than those who travel individually--you are kidding..see how long is your topic sentence, punish you. Consequently, two advantages are manifest. On one hand, the plan designed by a guide can save a great amount of time. It is well known to us that if we travel in group and led by a guide we can visit more places of interests--you know how to write in a shorter time than we travel by ourselves. On the other hand, since we travel in a group, the expenditure of hotels and ticket fees are lower than several persons, it is more economical to travel in a group. # v, g' E2 W/ W& w5 p* z
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In sum, because of lack of information to an unfamiliar city, low expenditure of a trip, and professional skills plus experience of guides, I strongly incline to travel in a group led by a guide.整体水平下降..是别人替你写的吧(with more details by QQ)

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On vocation -> vacation, people usually prefer to have a trip to relax. In recent years, more people choose to enjoy a happy journal->journey with friends and families. However, here comes to(to 不需要吧) the problem whether it is better to travel in a group or by themselves. This question is controversial because if travelling(traveling) alone, people can visit any places they are interested in; while when in a group led by the guide people can worry nothing(do not need to worry anything 要好点). In my perspective, if putting a priority, I really prefer to travel in a group with a guide and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, the guide knows detailed information about the local tourism resources. So the guide can better know where is worthy to visit. On the contrast, in most cases it is the first time for visitors to arrive at the city. Thus rarely will be they familiar with this new place. As a result, they can hardly know the transportation and culture of the destination, never to mention have（mention和have 连用好像语法不对吧） an enjoyable journal（journey）. I will illustrate this point with following example. One of my friends planned a trip to Shanghai, and he insisted on playing alone instead of participating in a group. Because of no guide, when he came to Shanghai, he was completely confused by the complicated transportation system in Shanghai. What is worse, when he arrived at Shanghai, it was evening. Nevertheless（转折的意思好像不重）, it was too difficult for him to find a hotel whose fees he could afford because he knew nothing about that city. Eventually, his holiday was ruined by the unsuccessfully(unsuccessful) trip just because he did not take part in a group and there was no guide(had no guide 会不会好点, 整句感觉有点罗嗦). Therefore, if travelling（traveling） to a new city, especially a city with complicated transportation system and huge area, it is more acceptable to travel in a group led by a guide.

Furthermore, since guides are professional in the field of tourism and they always possess（have 会不会好点）massive（这个词好像不合适） experiences, they can have a more careful plan than those who travel individually. Consequently, two advantages are manifest. On one hand, the plan designed by a guide can save a great amount of time. It is well known to us that if we travel in group and led by a guide we can visit more places of interests in a shorter time than we travel by ourselves. On the other hand（并列的情况用这两个链接好像不太好）, since we travel in a group, the expenditure of hotels and ticket fees are lower than several persons（those of ）, it is more economical to travel in a group.

In sum, because of lack of information to an unfamiliar city, low expenditure of a trip, and professional skills plus experience of guides, I strongly incline to travel in a group led by a guide.

感觉单句表达不错，但是整体组织的不是很好，两点理由有点不平衡，有些地方有点前言不搭后语的感觉。结尾感觉比较单薄。

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旸旸 9.25  作业

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1 The employment of Internet promotes the development of our society.
2 when it comes to our daily life, it bring convenience to us.

It is probably that Internet is one of the most significant inventions in the last century. The introduction of Internet greatly changes our life. Nowadays, Internet has pervaded into all aspects of our life. While we enjoy the benefits resulting from Internet, we are also frustrated by the problems caused by Internet such as security, information explosion, and even some diseases caused by long term accessing Internet. So the issue of Internet becomes controversial and a group of people hold negative attitude to Internet. In my perspective, however, Internet plays a crucial role in modern society and it should be further developed. My reasons are as follows.

To begin with, the employment of Internet largely promotes the development of our society. Since Internet intensively shrinks our world, we can have a better understanding to our world. Information transmits so quickly on the Internet that we can learn the latest news as soon as it happens. The advantages are manifest. New generation of technology can spread into all parts of the world easily; researchers have an opportunity to know other's progress; video conference makes it possible for businessman in different regions to trade with each other. As a result, employment of new technology is accelerated; academic level improved; economy boosted; All these facts indicate the magnitude of Internet in the development of our society. Convinced by the benefits above, I highly agree that Internet brings a mass of profits to us.

Furthermore, when it comes to our daily, Internet brings convenience to us. Actually, no one could deny the fact that our lifestyle has been changed by Internet more or less. In most cases, those changes are positive. When we cheat with our friends by instant communication software, never can we neglect that it is the Internet that makes us to talk with friends thousands of miles away; When we plan to purchase goods, the first thing we usually do is opening computers and visiting Amazon to search products that we need. Still, students use Internet to hand in homework to professors and download lecture slides. Hardly could anyone imagine that if one day there is no Internet, how tough terrible life is. Besides, I concede that there are some side effects of Internet, yet many scientists and organization have allocated abundant money and energy to address these problems. Anti-virus program, firewall and anti-spam system has greatly improved the environment of Internet. Therefore, we will never need to worry excessively about problems caused by Internet.

In sum, because of the advantages of Internet such as promotion to our society, convenience to our life as well as new technology aim to figure out problems derived from Internet, I am supportive of the great use of Internet

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It is probably that Internet is one of the most significant inventions in the last century. The introduction of Internet greatly changes our life. Nowadays, Internet has pervaded好词 into all aspects of our life. While we enjoy the benefits resulting from Internet, we are also frustrated by the problems caused by Internet such as security, information explosion, and even some diseases caused by long term accessing Internet--有这严重?. So the issue of Internet becomes controversial and a group of people hold negative attitude to Internet. In my perspective, however, Internet plays a crucial role in modern society and it should be further developed. My reasons are as follows 长

To begin with, the employment of Internet largely promotes the development of our society主题句写的好. Since Internet intensively shrinks..?不合适吧 our world, we can have a better understanding to our world. Information transmits so quickly on the Internet that we can learn the latest news as soon as it happens. The advantages are manifest. New generation of technology can spread into all parts of the world easily; researchers have an opportunity to know other's progress; video conference makes it possible for businessman in different regions to trade with each other. As a result, employment of new technology is accelerated; academic level improved; economy boosted; All these facts indicate the magnitude of Internet in the development of our society. Convinced by the benefits above, I highly agree that Internet brings a mass of profits to us.很抽象的写

Furthermore, when it comes to our daily Life, Internet brings convenience to us. Actually, no one could deny the fact that our lifestyle has been changed by Internet more or less. In most cases, those changes are positive. When we cheat-chat这不是成了骗了么 with our friends by instant communication software, never can we neglect that it is the Internet that makes us to talk with friends thousands of miles away; When we plan to purchase goods, the first thing we usually do is opening computers and visiting Amazon to search products that we need. Still, students use Internet to hand in homework to professors and download lecture slides. Hardly could anyone imagine that if one day there is no Internet, how tough terrible life is. Besides, I concede that there are some side effects of Internet, yet many scientists and organization have allocated abundant money and energy to address these problems. Anti-virus program, firewall and anti-spam system has greatly improved the environment of Internet. Therefore, we will never need to worry excessively about problems caused by Internet.这段写了网络的方便之处, 题目应该是信息..这里很不好写的, 我也是

In sum, because of the advantages of Internet such as promotion to our society, convenience to our life as well as new technology aim to figure out problems derived from Internet, I am supportive of the great use of Internet
结尾和简练的, 比昨天的好. 第三段你再看看的

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旸旸 9.26作业

It is better to broad knowledge of many academic subjects than specialize on one specific subject.

1 there are many subjects that are essentially important to the development of students.

2 subjects are related to each other, so it is necessary to study broad knowledge of many academic subjects.

When studying in a university, students are obliged to take a great mass of subjects. A group of students complain that they have so many courses and even some of courses have no relationship to their majors. So those students claim that they should specialize on one specific subject related to their majors. In my perspective, however, I strongly recommend that it is better for students to broad knowledge of extra academic subjects and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, there are many subjects that are essentially important to the development of students. Such subjects as mathematics, philosophy, and history play a significant role when students shape their personalities. This reminds me of the great voice of Francis Bacon, who is a famous expertise at education. "Histories make man wise; poets, witty; the mathematic, subtle; philosophy, deep; moral, grave; logic and rhetoric, able to contend." I think it is the best words to illustrate the importance of basic subjects to human. Therefore, how can students miss the precious opportunity in university to learn the useful courses?

Furthermore, subjects have bonds with each other, so it is necessary for students to broad knowledge of many academic subjects. There are some basic courses on which other subjects are based. An excellent economist usually excels in mathematics because many theories in the field of economy highly rely on the verification and deduction based on mathematic. Actually, more than half of experts on economy who receive Nobel Prize are masters of mathematic or famous mathematic professors. Still, knowledge of geology is also fatal to history. For example, when historians trace the Maya temples which have the same shape with pyramid in Egypt, they need to locate position and orientation using geology knowledge. What is more, the appearance of some subjects is because of connections of two or more subjects. E-commerce are interwoven with both computer of economy; Deep Blue designed by Inter Corporation defeated Kasparov - who is the best champion of chess in the world - due to the joint of knowledge about chess and computer science. Since interdiscipline is verified to have a promising future, it is acceptable for students to broad knowledge of other subjects.

In sum, because of the importance of many essential subjects to the development of students, connection among various subjects and prosperity of interdiscipline, I am supportive of the idea that students should broad their knowledge of many subjects.

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When studying in a university, students are obliged to take a great mass of subjects. A group of students complain that they have so many courses and even some of courses可以不用 have no relationship--connection to their majors. So those students claim that they should specialize on one specific subject related to their majors. In my perspective, however, I strongly recommend that it is better for students to broad knowledge of extra academic subjects and my reasons are as follows.8 ]) V) ^" K3 D! Z' K3 \' C& x
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To begin with, there are many subjects that are essentially important to the development of students--总感觉不合适的样子.. Such subjects as mathematics, philosophy, and history play a significant role when students shape their personalities--manthematics, philosophy and hsitory play significant role for students' personality. This reminds me of the great voice of Francis Bacon, (who is)去掉 a famous expertise at education. "Histories make man wise; poets, witty; the mathematic, subtle; philosophy, deep; moral, grave; logic and rhetoric, able to contend." I think it is the best words to illustrate the importance of basic subjects to human. Therefore, how can students miss the precious opportunity in university to learn the useful courses?

Furthermore, subjects have bonds with each other, so it is necessary for students to broad knowledge of many academic subjects. There are some basic courses on which other subjects are based--courses based on other programs. An excellent economist usually excels in mathematics because many theories in the field of economy highly rely on the verification and deduction based on mathematic. Actually, more than half of experts on economy who receive Nobel Prize are masters of mathematic or famous mathematic professors. Still, knowledge of geology is also fatal to history. For example, when historians trace the Maya temples which have the same shape with pyramid in Egypt, they need to locate position and orientation using geology knowledge. 例子时态是用过去不.What is more, the appearance of some subjects is because of connections of two or more subjects.??. E-commerce are interwoven with both computer of economy; Deep Blue designed by Inter Corporation defeated Kasparov - who is the best champion of chess in the world - due to the joint of knowledge about chess and computer science. Since interdiscipline is verified to have a promising future, it is acceptable for students to broad knowledge of other subjects.

n sum, because of the importance of many essential subjects to the development of students, connection among various subjects and prosperity of interdiscipline, I am supportive of the idea that students should broad their knowledge of many subjects. more details later by internet

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9.26

It is better to broad knowledge of many academic subjects than (to) specialize on one specific subject.

1 there are many subjects that are essentially important to the development of students.
2 subjects are related to each other, so it is necessary to study broad knowledge of many academic subjects.

When studying in a university, students are obliged to take a great mass of subjects. A group of students complain that they have so many courses and even some of (the) courses have no relationship to their majors. So those students claim that they should specialize on one specific subject related to their majors. In my perspective, however, I strongly recommend that it is better for students to broad knowledge of extra academic subjects and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, there are many subjects that are essentially important to the development of students. Such subjects as mathematics, philosophy, and history play a significant role when students shape their personalities. This reminds me of the great voice of Francis Bacon, who is a famous expertise at education. "Histories make man wise; poets, witty; the mathematic, subtle; philosophy, deep; moral, grave; logic and rhetoric, able to contend."(佩服了，竟然还能记得名言？！) I think it is the best words to illustrate the importance of basic(觉得用various好些，因为着重讨论的还是多样性嘛) subjects to human. Therefore, how can students miss the precious opportunity in university to learn the useful courses?

Furthermore, subjects have bonds with each other, so it is necessary for students to broad knowledge of many academic subjects. There are some basic courses on which other subjects are based(这句赞！). An excellent economist usually excels in mathematics because many theories in the field of economy highly rely on the verification and deduction based on mathematic. Actually, more than half of experts on economy who receive Nobel Prize are masters of mathematic or famous mathematic professors(例子不错，可以说下John Nash). Still, knowledge of geology is also fatal to history. For example, when historians trace the Maya temples which have the same shape with pyramid in Egypt, they need to locate position and orientation using geology knowledge. What is more, the appearance of some subjects is because of(这里这个of感觉跟前面那个of太近了，换成due to) connections of two or more subjects. E-commerce are interwoven with both computer of(应该是and吧？) economy; Deep Blue designed by Inter Corporation defeated Kasparov - who is the best champion of chess in the world - due to the joint of knowledge about chess and computer science. Since interdiscipline(学到了一个词) is verified to have a promising future, it is acceptable for students to broad knowledge of other subjects.(这一段的例子都很赞，最后一句也很赞！)

In sum, because of the importance of many essential subjects to the development of students, connection among various subjects and prosperity of interdiscipline, I am supportive of the idea that students should broad their knowledge of many subjects.(这个总结句式不错，学习了)

恩恩，的确是NB水平~~