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发表于 2009-9-28 22:58:33 |显示全部楼层
旸旸 9.28作业


同意不同意:一个聪明的朋友比一个幽默的朋友重要

1 A humorous friend is easy to get along with.
2 A humorous friend can help me relax when I frustrated by problems.



"All splendor in the world is not worthy a good friend", the great voice of Voltaire can best illustrate the importance of a good friend. There are a mass of qualities to define a good friend, such as reliability, intelligence, humor, grave, generosity and so forth. However, if laying a priority, in my perspective, I really prefer to make a friend with those who are humorous instead of the ones who are smart. My reasons are as follows.

To begin with, a humorous friend is easy to get along with. Actually, in most cases, humorous people are usually extroverted, so we can talk with each other freely. When chatting with them, rarely will I worry about topics. As long as we have no words to say, an interesting story from a humorous friend will break the embarrassed situation. This quality is especially important at the early stage of making friends, because only conversation can help people to improve relationship when people have no deep understanding of each other. Once, I was introduced to a friend of my classmate. We hope to know each other for we will have a trip together. However, we even have no common words at first. Fortunately, that friend is so humorous that by talking a funny joke, we become the best friends. This example can appropriately illustrate my view. Besides, when there are conflicts between friends, humor also plays a significant role to slove problems. An interesting joke can help people shift their attention from the intensive argued issue to a relaxed one. So that is why I would like to make friends with those who have the personality of humor.

Furthermore, a humorous friend can help me relax when I am frustrated by problems. Good friends are those who can console us and offer us a help when we trap in trouble. A humorous friend is just such a friend. When I feel afraid of the tough study, my humorous friend can tell me a joke and all my unhappy thing will be all gone; a humorous friend can also help me be calm when I am nervous; still at the time that is boring, the first thing I can think of is to talk with a humorous friend. Thus, those humorous friends really help me a lot to address problems both with life and study.

In sum, since I can easily to get along with humorous friends and they can help me to solve problems when I am upset, I am supportive of the idea to make friend with humorous people.

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发表于 2009-9-29 11:18:03 |显示全部楼层
"All splendor in the world is not worthy a good friend", the great voice of Voltaire can best illustrate the importance of a good friend. There are a mass of qualities to define a good friend, such as reliability, intelligence, humor, grave, generosity and so forth. However, if laying a priority, in my perspective, I really prefer to make a friend with those who are humorous instead of the ones who are smart. My reasons are as follows.3 l; m1 {) i! p: q4 x

To begin with, a humorous friend is easy to get along with. Actually, in most cases, humorous people are usually extroverted, so we can talk with each other freely. When chatting with them, rarely will I worry about topics. As long as we have no words to say, an interesting story from a humorous friend will break the embarrassed situation. This quality is especially important at the early stage of making friends, because only (even a small) conversation can help people to improve(promote) relationship when people have no deep understanding of each other. Once, I was introduced to a friend of my classmate. We hope to know each other for we will have a trip together. However, we even have no common words at first. Fortunately, that friend is so humorous that by talking a funny joke, we become the best friends finally. This example can appropriately illustrate my view. (去掉)Besides, when there are conflicts between friends, humor also plays a significant role to slove problems. An interesting joke can help people shift their attention from the intensive argued issue to a relaxed one. So that(this) is why I would like to make friends with those who have the personality of humor.) B3 Y1 I# O+ |( S$ H. Z
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Furthermore, a humorous friend can help me relax when I am frustrated by problems(difficulty). Good friends are those who can console us and offer us a help when we trap in trouble. A humorous friend is just such a friend.(just meet this kind of needs)When I feel afraid of the tough study, my humorous friend can tell me a joke and all my unhappy thing(experiences) will be all (去掉)gone; a humorous friend can also help me be calm when I am nervous; still at the time that is boring, the first thing I can think of (appeared in my mind)is to talk with a humorous friend. Thus, those humorous friends really help me a lot (provide me a multitude of help) to address problems both with (from)daily life and study.

In sum, since I can easily to get along with humorous friends and they can help me to solve problems when I am upset, I am supportive of the idea to make friend with humorous people.

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发表于 2009-9-29 11:30:09 |显示全部楼层
刚才粘上出了点问题。下面这篇是改好的。

"All splendor inthe world is not worthy a good friend", the great voice of Voltaire canbest illustrate the importance of a good friend. There are a mass of qualitiesto define a good friend, such as reliability, intelligence, humor, grave, generosityand so forth. However, if laying a priority, in my perspective, I really preferto make a friend with those who are humorous instead of the ones who are smart.My reasons are as follows.3 l; m1 {)i! p: q4 x

* D* k! p6 i, b! YTo begin with,a humorous friend is easy to get along with. Actually, in most cases, humorouspeople are usually extroverted, so we can talk with each other freely. Whenchatting with them, rarely will I worry about topics. As long as we have nowords to say, an interesting story from a humorous friend will break theembarrassed situation. This quality is especially important at the early stageof making friends, because only (even a small) conversationcan help people to improve
promote relationship when people have no deep understandingof each other. Once, I was introduced to a friend of my classmate. We hope toknow each other for we will have a trip together. However, we even have nocommon words at first. Fortunately, that friend is so humorous that by talkinga funny joke, we become the best friends finally. Thisexample can appropriately illustrate my view. (去掉)Besides, when there areconflicts between friends, humor also plays a significant role to sloveproblems. An interesting joke can help people shift their attention from theintensive argued issue to a relaxed one. So thatthis is why I would like to make friends with those whohave the personality of humor.) B3 Y1 I# O+ |( S$ H.Z
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Furthermore, a humorous friend can help me relax when I am frustrated by problems
difficulty.Good friends are those who can console us and offer us a help when we trap introuble. A humorous friend is just such a friend.just meet this kind of needsWhen I feel afraid of thetough study, my humorous friend can tell me a joke and all my unhappy thing(experiences) will be all(去掉)gone; a humorous friend can also help me be calm whenI am nervous; still at the time that is boring, the first thing I can think of appeared in my mindisto talk with a humorous friend. Thus, those humorous friends really help me a lot (provide me a multitude of help) toaddress problems both with (from)daily life and study.
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5 Q. N1 P4 C" k( u: M# Q! `Insum, since I can easily to get along with humorous friends and they can help meto solve problems when I am upset, I am supportive of the idea to make friendwith humorous people

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发表于 2009-9-29 11:40:38 |显示全部楼层
"All splendor inthe world is not worthy a good friend", the great voice of Voltaire canbest illustrate the importance of a good friend. There are a mass of qualitiesto define a good friend, such as reliability, intelligence, humor, grave, generosityand so forth. However, if laying a priority, in my perspective, I really preferto make a friend with those who are humorous instead of the ones who are smart.My reasons are as follows.

To begin with,a humorous friend is easy to get along with. Actually, in most cases, humorouspeople are usually extroverted, so we can talk with each other freely. Whenchatting with them, rarely will I worry about topics. As long as we have nowords to say, an interesting story from a humorous friend will break theembarrassed situation. This quality is especially important at the early stageof making friends, because only (even a small) conversationcan help people to improve(promote) relationship when people have no deep understandingof each other. Once, I was introduced to a friend of my classmate. We hope toknow each other for we will have a trip together. However, we even have nocommon words at first. Fortunately, that friend is so humorous that by talkinga funny joke, we become the best friends finally. Thisexample can appropriately illustrate my view. (去掉)Besides, when there areconflicts between friends, humor also plays a significant role to sloveproblems. An interesting joke can help people shift their attention from theintensive argued issue to a relaxed one. So that(this) is why I would like to make friends with those whohave the personality of humor.

Furthermore, a humorous friend can help me relax when I am frustrated by problems(difficulty).Good friends are those who can console us and offer us a help when we trap introuble. A humorous friend is just such a friend.(just meets this kind of needs)When I feel afraid of thetough study, my humorous friend can tell me a joke and all my unhappy thing(experiences) will be all(去掉)gone; a humorous friend can also help me be calm whenI am nervous; still at the time that is boring, the first thing I can think of (appeared in my mind)is to talk with a humorous friend. Thus, those humorous friends really help me a lot (provide me a multitude of help) toaddress problems both with (from)daily life and study.
In sum, since I can easily to get along with humorous friends and they can help meto solve problems when I am upset, I am supportive of the idea to make friendwith humorous people

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发表于 2009-9-29 11:43:06 |显示全部楼层
不好意思,第一次改作文,粘到WORD上了,出现乱码,看最后一篇就行。

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发表于 2009-9-30 00:11:47 |显示全部楼层
旸旸 9.29作业

是应该放更多的钱在access internet 上,而不是public transportation 同意还是不要?

agree

1 it is not essentially necessary for my country to improve access to internet.

2 Compared with the demands of accessing internet,
it is more important to allocate money on public transportation, which plays a crucial role to propel the development of economy and improve the quality of people's life in my country.

The aim of government is to allocate budge to various fields to maintain the society and improve people's life. These aspects involve education, national security, medical, technology, public transportation and so forth. Because of the limited financial budget, it becomes a controversial issue whether government should spend money on accessing internet or the public transportation. A group of people believe the enhancement of accessing internet can lead to the development of technology. Nevertheless, in my perspective, it is not only important but also necessary to allocate money in public transportation and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, it is not essentially necessary for my country to spend extra money on people accessing internet. Admittedly, the condition of people accessing internet can both affect the development of technology
and people's life, yet I would argue that there is not need for our Chinese government to spend an excessively great sum of money on the internet. Actually, our government has plunged massive money, energy and resources to improve the quality of service of internet in the past decades. As a result, many people can have opportunity to access internet and the price to use internet maintains a relatively low level that most people can afford it. In this circumstance, it is unacceptable for government to spend limited but precious finance on people accessing internet.

However, Compared with the demand of accessing internet,
it is more important to allocate money on public transportation, which plays a crucial role to propel the development of economy and to improve the quality of people's life in my country. Actually the task to improve the public transportation is especially urgent in my country. Since China has the largest population in the world, the problem with public transportation is severe. Buses are usually so crowded that passengers even cannot nearly take a breath; Even in those major cities such as Beijing and Shanghai, there are only several subway routines, never to mention numerous cities locating in the middle and west region of China. In the rural, people have no opportunity to travel to another village just because of the poor condition of transportation and lack of money. Therefore, it is quite necessary for government to spend money in improving the public transportation in China.

In sum, because of the comparatively advanced development of internet and poor condition of public transportation in China, it is more acceptable for government on public transportation.

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发表于 2009-9-30 00:58:44 |显示全部楼层
"All splendor in the world is not worthy a good friend", the great voice of Voltaire can best illustrate the importance of a good friend. 很漂亮的句子哇!There are a mass of qualities to define a good friend, such as reliability, intelligence, humor, grave, generosity and so forth. However, if laying a priority, in my perspective, I really prefer to make a friend with those who are humorous instead of the ones who are smart. My reasons are as follows.开头不错很好.


To begin with, a humorous friend is easy to get along with. Actually, in most cases, humorous people are usually extroverted, so we can talk with each other freely. When去掉. chatting with them, rarely will I worry about topics--rarely have i worried about the topic. As long as we have no words to say, an interesting story from a humorous friend will break the embarrassed situation. This quality is especially important at the early stage of making friends, because only conversation can help people to improve relationship when people have no deep understanding of each other. Once, I was introduced to a friend of my classmate. We hope to know each other for we will have a trip together. However, we even have no common words at first. Fortunately, that friend is so humorous that by talking--like to talk a funny joke, we become the best friends. This example can appropriately illustrate my view. Besides, when there are conflicts between friends, humor also plays a significant role to slove problems. An interesting joke can help people shift their attention from the intensive argued issue to a relaxed one. So that is why I would like to make friends with those who have the personality of humor 例子很贴近生活的说.

hermore, a humorous friend can help me relax when I am frustrated by problems貌似跟上个例子很像. Good friends are those who can console us and offer us a help when we trap in trouble. A humorous friend is just such a friend. When I feel--am/was afraid of the tough study, my humorous friend can tell me a joke and all my unhappy thing will be all gone; a humorous friend can also help me be calm when I am nervous; still at the time that is boring, the first thing I can think of is to talk with a humorous friend. Thus, those humorous friends really help me a lot to address problems both with life and study.跟上段区别不很大,不像你风格啊
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In sum, since I can easily to get along with humorous friends and they can help me to solve problems when I am upset, I am supportive of the idea to make friend with humorous people.

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发表于 2009-9-30 12:40:19 |显示全部楼层
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TheOne aim of government is to allocate budge to various fields to maintain the society and improve people's life. These aspects involve education, national security, medical, technology, public transportation and so forth. Because of the limited financial budget, it becomes a controversial issue whether government should spend money on accessing internet or the public transportation. A group of people believe that the enhancement of accessing internet can lead to contribute (lead to多用于不好的结果) the development of technology. Nevertheless, in my perspective, it is not only important but also necessary to allocate money in public transportation and my reasons are as follows(for following reasons).

To begin with, it is not essentially necessary for my country to spend extra money on people accessing internet. Admittedly, the favorable condition of people accessing internet can both affectimprove(affact也是坏词,用于不好的结果) the development of technology and people's life, yet I would argue that there is not need for our Chinese government to spend an excessively great sum of money on the internet. Actually, our government has plunged massive money, energy and resources to improve the quality of service of internet in the past decades. As a result, many people can have opportunity to access internet and the price to use internet maintains a relatively low level that most people can afford it. In this circumstance, it is unacceptable for government to spend limited butand(此处虽然中文是转折的意思,但在英文中是递进) precious financefunds on people accessing internet.

HoweverWhat's more, Compared with the demand of accessing internet, it is more important to allocate money on public transportation, which plays a crucial role to propel the development of economy and to(可省略) improve the quality of people's life in my country. Actually the task to improve the public transportation is especiallyseriously urgent in my country. Since China has the largest population in the world, the problem withof poor public transportation is severe.(problem肯定是不好的,最好用否定词把他表达出来) Buses are usually so crowded that passengers even cannot nearlycan merely take a breath; Even in those major cities such as Beijing and Shanghai, there are only several a few of subway routines, never to mention numerous cities locating in the middle and west region of China. In the rural, people have no opportunity to travel to another village just because of the poor condition of transportation and lack of money. Therefore, it is quite necessary for government to spend money inon improving the public transportation in China.

In sum, because of the comparatively advanced development of internet and poor condition of public transportation in China, it is more acceptable for government to spend money on public transportation.

写的很不错。观点明确,但是我觉得有些表达过于中国化,以至于在英语里的意思变得模棱两可,虽然读者能清楚你要表达的意思,但是似乎没有把关键的词说出来。一家之言,仅供参考。

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发表于 2009-9-30 20:29:27 |显示全部楼层
The aim of government is to allocate budge to various fields to maintain the society and improve people's life. These aspects involve education, national security, medical, technology, public transportation and so forth. Because of the limited financial budget, it becomes a controversial issue whether government should spend money on accessing internet or the public transportation. A group of people believe the enhancement of accessing internet can lead to the development of technology. Nevertheless, in my perspective, it is not only important but also necessary to allocate money in public transportation and my reasons are as follows.


To begin with, it is not essentially necessary--不用吧2个??一个就好.虽然一副词一形容词 for my country to spend extra money on people accessing internet. Admittedly, the condition of people accessing internet can both affect the development of technology and people's life, yet I would argue that there is not--No need for our Chinese government to spend an excessively great sum of money on the internet. Actually, our government has plunged massive money, energy and resources to improve the quality of service of internet in the past decades. As a result, many people can have opportunity to access internet and the price to use internet maintains a relatively low level that most people can afford it. In this circumstance, it is unacceptable for government to spend limited but precious finance on people accessing internet. 是从这里分段不, 也看不清楚..

However, Compared with the demand of accessing internet, t is more important to allocate这个不错的 money on public transportation, which plays a crucial role to propel the development of economy and to improve the quality of people's life in my country.不长啊头句 Actually the task to improve the public transportation is especially urgent in my country. Since China has the largest population in the world, the problem with public transportation is severe赞个. Buses are usually so crowded that passengers even cannot nearly take a breath; Even in those major cities such as Beijing and Shanghai, there are only several subway routines, never to mention numerous--the rest of cities locating in the middle and west region of China. In the rural, people have no opportunity to travel to another village just because of the poor condition of transportation and lack of money. Therefore, it is quite necessary for government to spend money in去掉 improving the public transportation in China.

In sum, because of the comparatively advanced development of internet and poor condition of public transportation in China, it is more acceptable for government on public transportation 这个写的好, 比上几次都好.很快就回归了嘿嘿

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发表于 2009-9-30 22:47:50 |显示全部楼层
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serious movie 和 amusing movie哪个更好?
serious movie
1. serious movie can reveal social problems and promote people to solve them.
2. serious movies usually touch the soul of people, and we can have a better understanding of human beings and our society.
3. people can also enjoy a happy time when watching a serious movie.

Serious movies reveal human natures and touch mankind's soul; while amusing movie can release people' pressure resulting from rapid pace of life. Nevertheless, when it comes to the question which sort of movies would I have more interest in, I would prefer serious movies and my reasons are as follows.

Firstly, serious movies can reveal social problems and promote people to solve these problems. Virtually a variety of serious movies focus on social problems of world involving justice, morality. These serious films, just like a wise canon, cause people to have a deep though of our society and human natures. This reminds me of the movie The Shawshank Redemption, which depicts a banker - who was unfairly thrown into prison - broke prison after having seen the darkness and evils of the prison. After watching the movie, hardly could we escape from the fact of the injustice and evils in prisons and accordingly public would appeal to government for solving this problem. Therefore, no one can deny the role that serious movies play in solving social problems.

Furthermore, majority of serious movies usually touch the soul of people, and consequently we can have better understanding of human beings as well as our society. The movie Forrest Gump encourage civilians when we are frustrated; Braveheart arouse people's patriotism; and rarely could we be impassive when we hear the song, My hart will go on, and we help appreciating the perpetual love between Lucy and Jack. These examples indicate that serious movies can express our soul and calls us of resonance.

Admittedly, amusing movies can release people's pressure for their humor, yet neither could it conclude serious movies' incapability to release pressure, nor deny their entertainment. Actually serious movies as one kind of films lead people to enjoy a happy time even though they allocate more time and energy on human's inner world. Audiences can release their pressure by crying when they watch a touched movie and we feel released when characters of movies have a romantic love. In this manner, impossible is it that we neglect the entertainment of serious movies.

In sum, deep thoughts, touched plot are the reasons that cause me have a special preference on serious movies.

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Serious movies reveal human natures and touch mankind's soul; while amusing movie can release people' pressure resulting from rapid pace of life. Nevertheless, when it comes to the question which sort of movies would I have more interest in, I would prefer serious movies and my reasons are as follows.开头不错的很简洁也很直白

Firstly, serious movies can reveal social problems and promote people to solve these problems. Virtually a variety of serious movies focus on social problems of world 不用也行吧 involving justice, morality. These serious films, just like a wise canon, cause people to have a deep though of our society and human natures这个好. This reminds me of the movie The Shawshank Redemption, which depicts a banker - who was unfairly thrown into prison - broke prison after having seen--knowing the darkness and evils of the prison. After watching the movie, hardly could we escape from the fact of the injustice and evils in prisons and accordingly public would appeal to government for solving this problem. Therefore, no one can deny the role that serious movies play in solving social problems.很有启发性

Furthermore, majority of serious movies usually touch the soul of people, and consequently we can have better understanding of human beings as well as our society. The movie Forrest Gump encourage civilians when we are frustrated; Braveheart arouse people's patriotism; and rarely could we be impassive when we hear the song, My hart-heart不? will go on, and we help appreciating the perpetual love between Lucy and Jack.商业爱情片也是属于这个电影? These examples indicate that serious movies can express our soul and calls us of resonance.

dmittedly, amusing movies can release people's pressure for their humor, yet neither could it conclude serious movies' incapability to release pressure, nor deny their entertainment. Actually serious movies as one kind of films lead people to enjoy a happy time even though they allocate more time and energy on human's inner world. Audiences can release their pressure by crying when they watch a touched movie-听着不很合适但是我也不知道怎么说 and we feel released when characters of movies have a romantic love. In this manner, impossible is it that we水平不佳没理解哇 neglect the entertainment of serious movies.

In sum, deep thoughts, touched plot are the reasons that cause me have a special preference on serious movies. 围绕中心句子写很值得学习我就不知道我写哪里了...开头比后面好. 有个别表达理解费劲

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发表于 2009-10-1 23:40:22 |显示全部楼层
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It is all people's goal to succeed in their specialized career. However, it becomes controversial when it comes to the issue which quality is the most significant. Probably there are various attributes such as courage, innovation, generosity, intelligence, good looks, beautiful dresses, and so forth. In my perspective, good ideas are the most important quality for people to success rather than good looks and dresses.

To begin with, Good looks and dresses never play key roles when people pursue success. Admittedly, a good look and dresses can give a delightful impression to others at first glance, yet it is impossible for people to succeed only depending on an attractive impression. Actually, a good impression is useful to attract attention from others and have an opportunity to express ideas; nevertheless, at the following stage people need good ideas to solve problems. The common sense tells us that only relying first impression makes no sense. Even though we have an opportunity to get good first impression in a job interview, yet if we lack specialized skills and prospective ideas to address problems, still we cannot get the job.

Furthermore, a good idea is important to solve problems and usually causes legends. It is the innovative ideas not good looks accounting for solution to problems when people strive for success. Let us have a look at those great successes in history. Wright Brother designed the first plane in the world due to dream of flying like birds; Edison invented electrical lights because of idea to provide lights to human; Still submarine came into fact led by the idea of travelling under water. Planes bring us to the sky; electrical lights lighten us; Submarines make it possible for us to explore areas deep in the ocean. All these distinctive contribution

In sum, good ideas provide people with methods to solve problems. While hardly can a good look have any effect on the process of addressing problems, I am deeply supportive of the idea that good ideas are more important for success than good looks and dresses.

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It is all people's goal to succeed in their specialized career. However, it becomes controversial when it comes to the issue(我要学习介个句子) which quality is the most significant. Probably there are various attributes such as courage, innovation, generosity, intelligence, good looks, beautiful dresses, and so forth. In my perspective, good ideas are the most important quality for people to success rather than good looks and dresses

To begin with, Good looks and dresses never play key roles when people pursue success. Admittedly, a good look and dresses can give a delightful impression to others at first glance, yet it is impossible for people to succeed only depending on an attractive impression. Actually, a good impression is useful to attract attention from others and have an opportunity to express ideas; nevertheless, at the following stage people need good ideas to solve problems. The common sense tells us that only relying first impression makes no sense. Even though we have an opportunity to get good first impression in a job interview, yet if we lack specialized skills and prospective ideas to address problems, still we cannot get the job.

Furthermore, a good idea is important to solve problems and usually causes legends. It is the innovative ideas not good looks accounting for solution to problems when people strive for success. Let us have a look at those great successes in history. Wright Brother designed the first plane in the world due to dream of flying like birds; Edison invented electrical lights because of idea to provide lights to human; Still submarine came into fact led by the idea of travelling under water. Planes bring us to the sky; electrical lights lighten us; Submarines make it possible for us to explore areas deep in the ocean. (这几个很有说服力哦)All these distinctive contribution(没贴完?)

In sum, good ideas provide people with methods to solve problems. While hardly can a good look have any effect on the process of addressing problems, I am deeply supportive of the idea that good ideas are more important for success than good looks and dresses.

我改不出来啥问题,尽管我尽量去看了。 逻辑很清晰。我怎么就总也作不到这点呢?
If you don't try,light won't hit your eyes.

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It is all people's goal to succeed in their specialized career. However, it becomes controversial when it comes to the issue which quality好词 is the most significant. Probably there are various attributes such as courage, innovation, generosity, intelligence, good looks, beautiful dresses, and so forth. In my perspective, good ideas are the most important quality for people to success rather than good looks and dresses.很直接

To begin with, Good looks and dresses never play--have never played key roles when people pursue success. Admittedly, a good look and dresses can give a delightful impression to others at first glance, yet:victory: it is impossible for people to succeed only depending on an attractive impression. Actually, a good impression is useful to attract attention from others and have an opportunity to express ideas(人不可貌相); nevertheless, at the following stage people need good ideas to solve problems. The common sense tells us that only relying first impression makes no sense. Even though we have an opportunity to get good first impression in a job interview, yet if we lack specialized skills and prospective ideas to address problems, still we cannot get the job.

Furthermore, a good idea is important to solve problems and usually causes legends. It is the innovative ideas not good looks accounting for好 solution to problems when people strive for success. Let us have a look at those great successes in history. Wright Brother designed the first plane in the world due to dream of flying like birds; Edison invented electrical lights because of idea to provide lights to human; Still submarine came into fact led by the idea of travelling under water. Planes bring us to the sky; electrical lights lighten us; Submarines make it possible for us to explore areas deep in the ocean. All these distinctive contri 例举都很酷啊

um, good ideas provide people with methods to solve problems. While hardly can a good look have any effect on the process of addressing problems, I am deeply supportive of the idea that good ideas are more important for success than good looks and dresses挺好这篇..跟你以前不限时的有一拼.

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to solve the problems present and future is it necessary to understand the past
yes

1 Lessons and faults in the past can prevent people from making mistakes
2 It is not only important but also necessary for people to refer to experience of past.

History plays a crucial role in the development of current society. Actually, history is a great treasure to human being, not only because of the success but also failure. Probably, a group of people will cast doubt on the practical use of history, since it is out of date and what happened cannot be changed. Admittedly, it is true that regarding history as a story makes no sense to solve problems; however, if having a deep look at the history, we can discover that what are created and proposed is still valuable whenever in the current day or future.

To begin with, lessons and faults in the past can prevent people from making mistakes. Just as stated by Francis Bacon that history makes people wise, by having lessons from the past, people become mature. If we neglect tragedies happening in the past, hardly could mankind make such a further progress in the development of our society. The disaster of Chernobyl, occurred in the former Soviet Union gives an example to us when we establish nuclear power now; the decreased tropic forests, detrimental acid rains, and ice-berg melting in Arctic warn human the importance of environment protection; economic crisis makes people to realize the harm of avarice in commercial activities. All of these lessons play a significant role in the further development of our society.

Furthermore, it is not only important but also necessary for people to refer to experience of past. This reminds of me a great voice of Newton (and I paraphrased) that Standing on the shoulder of giant I can succeed. In the field of research, scientists should conclude related work accomplished by previous researchers, otherwise repeating same topic never enable us make further progress. Besides, many significant legends result from previous experience. Spurred by the former idea of flying Brother Wright invent the first plane in 1903; Inspired by the scientific fiction of Jule Verne, human design the first submarine; Based on the experience of thousands of failure, Edison invent lights. Lights lighten us; submarine enables us to explore area deep in the ocean; planes carry people to the sky. Nevertheless, without ideas and experiences from forerunners, we never have possibility to enjoy the benefits from those devices.

In sum, because of both successful and failed experiences enlightening us to solve problem, I am supportive of the idea that o solve the problems present and future is it necessary to understand the past.

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