旸旸 8.11 2009 作文小组 作业

goback211UID: 2419259

When it is rush hour, there are alwaystraffic jams in the busy streets or roads. People usually take more than onehour to drive only one kilometer long. So here comes to the issue whether it isnecessary to levy on drivers in the busy road sections at rush(我都没有想到这个词，汗) hour. In my perspective,it is not only important but also essentially necessary for local government tolevy on drivers in the busy road sections at rush hour and my reasons are asfollows.
To begin with, levying on drivers when thetraffic is busy could help to release the traffic jams. There is no doubt aboutthe fact that if there is tax at the busy road section, a majority of driverswould prefer to choose another way to their destination. Still some people aremore likely to travel by public transportations such as subways and buses. Inthis manner, fewer private vehicles will run at the busy road section andconsequently the traffic problems will be solved. Actually this method isreally acceptable because over a half number of automobiles in the busy roadsections are private transportations, and for most driverspaying for tax daily is a heavy burden on themselves(主语是paying吧). As a result, they would not intend to drive on the busy roadsections. Admittedly, some people will argue that the process of tax wastestime and aggravate traffic jams, yet since many vehicles will not exist in thebusy sections, as a matter of a fact, traffic jams can be controlled. Based onthe analysis above, I am highly supportive of the proposal that governmentshould levy on drivers in the busy road sections at rush hours.
Furthermore, if local government plans tolevy on drivers in the busy road sections at rush hours daily, the financialrevenue of the local government will increase. The benefits are manifest. Thebusy road sections need money to broad; local government can allocate morebudge to establish high ways and it can definitely release the traffic jams inthose busy sections; still it is the responsibility of the drivers, who usuallydrive in the busy road sections, to maintain the roads. Therefore, I amconvinced that drivers should be levied on in the busy road sections at rushhour.
In addition, another advantage of levyingon drivers in the busy road sections when there are massive traffics is that itcan help reduce the air pollution from vehicles. It is well known that wastegas is one of the major sources of green gases in the urban areas. Since newdriving taxes can limit the number of private cars and encourage more civiliansto take public transportations, the pollution from vehicles will besignificantly reduced. Thus it is more environment-friendly.
In sum, people can enjoy the benefitsresulting from new tax on drivers in the busy road sections at rush hour. Onone hand, it can greatly reduce traffic jams and air pollutions, which improvesdenizens' quality of life; On the other hand, more financial revenue can alsohelp solve traffic problems. Therefore, I totally agree that local governmentshould levy on drivers in the busy road sections at rush hour

还不错，没有例子，看起来很枯燥，所以我也没细看…当然，这篇感觉不好下手，我也没写例子…

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旸旸 9.11 作业


In the reading passage, the author explains how stripes of Zebras can protect them from predators with three reasons. However, the professor of the lecture totally disagrees with this contention.

Firstly, the professor casts doubt on the effect of optical illusion. Although optical illusion resulting from vertical stripes does make the distance smaller than it really is, yet it will not affect predators such as lions to attack zebras. Because those animals usually make zebras exhausted and predate zebras. So the optical illusion is not as useful as the author believes.

Secondly, the professor concedes that since zebras usually travel in large groups, their stripes will cause that predators cannot differ zebras from each other by eyes. However, actually predators of zebras do not rely on views to attack zebras but depends on their smell system. So even zebras travel in large groups, lions still can recognize which way each zebra is moving.

Finally, even it is true that zebras can hide in the tall grass because the wavy line of zebras blend in with the wavy lines of grass; nevertheless, the professor argues that zebras usually stay at open ground to spot predators, so if predators exist, zebras will as faster as they can. In this manner, vertical stripes make no sense to protect zebras from being attacked.

In conclusion, because of the doubts on optical illusion and camouflage theory, the professor could not agree with the perspective in the reading material.

gy0510150556UID: 2546647

In the reading passage, the author explains how stripes of Zebras can protect them from predators with three reasons. However, the professor of the lecture totally disagrees with this contention.

Firstly, the professor casts doubt on the effect of optical illusion. Although optical illusion resulting from vertical stripes does make the distance smaller than it really is, yet it will not affect predators such as lions to attack zebras. Because those animals usually make zebras exhausted(by keep chasing them) and (then succeed in capturing)predate(predate是时间提前的意思) zebras(前面有zebra了，换them). So the optical illusion is not as useful as the author believes.总结的很好

Secondly, the professor concedes that since zebras usually travel in large groups, their stripes will cause that predators cannot differ zebras from each other by eyes. However, actually predators of zebras do not rely on views to attack zebras but depends on their smell system（是not only but also的关系）. So even zebras travel in large groups, lions still can recognize which way each zebra is moving.1 f* V2 {9 F8 U4 ^3 i; \4 z" b
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Finally, even it is true that zebras can hide in the tall grass because the wavy line of zebras blend in with the wavy lines of grass; nevertheless, the professor argues that zebras usually stay at open ground to spot predators, so if predators exist, zebras will （run）as faster as they can. In this manner, vertical stripes make no sense to protect zebras from being attacked.改句式改的很好

In conclusion, because of the doubts on optical illusion and camouflage theory, the professor could not agree with the perspective in the reading material.你只总结了两条

赫赫，要点都说到了，写的很不错，我就偷懒了，参照了reading passage的较多

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旸旸 9.12作业

speaking important or writing important?

In the modern society, the ability to speak and the ability to write are two important qualities to express people's ideas. However, when it comes to the question whether speaking is important or writing important, it becomes controversial. In my perspective, the ability to speak rather than that to write plays a more crucial role and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, in the era of rapidly advanced technology, it is becoming easier for people to communicate with each other by speaking. The invention of telephone enables people to talk with each other even though there is long distance between them. Even with the employment of video conference, people can make a face-to-face talk. All these changes indicate that speaking turns out a major form of communicate. Denizens need to call their families to express emotions of love; businessman contact with clients to negotiate and sell products by phone; Still Students usually meet professors or instructors to discuss difficulties with study or research. The communication mentioned above requires people's ability to speak, rather than the ability to write. In this manner, hardly could anyone deny speaking is more important. Therefore, I am supportive of the view that speaking plays a more important role in the modern society.

Furthermore, speaking takes less time to express ideas. Because of the rapid pace of current society, people prefer to save time, so speaking is more acceptable by most people. For example, a manager may spend more than one hour to read a plan; however, if a person can introduce the plan to the manager, maybe it takes only ten minutes. As a result, speaking are more possible to affect people's minds. A wonder speech will change the election; those who perform well in the interview have more advantages in the job hunting. The merits of speaking cannot be replaced by writing.

In sum, the ability to speak is more important. On one hand, the advanced technology makes it convenient to talk with each other; on the other hand, speaking is more widely used by people to express their ideas.

fish1044UID: 2190500

In the modern society, the ability to speak and the ability to（删掉） write are two important qualities(改成MEANS) to express people's ideas. However, when it comes to the question whether speaking is important or writing important（改成Which ability is more important）, it becomes controversial. In my perspective, the ability to speak rather than that to（删掉） write plays a more crucial role and my reasons are as follows./ v

    To begin with, in the era of rapidly advanced technology, it is becoming easier for people to communicate with each other by speaking. The invention of telephone enables people to talk with each other even though there is long distance between them. Even（删除） With the employment of video conference, people can even make a face-to-face talk. All these changes indicate that speaking turns out to be a major form of communicate(Communication). Denizens(这个词是不是不太合适？感觉有点夸张) need to call their families to express emotions of love; businessman contact with(删掉) clients to negotiate and sell products by phone; Still Students usually meet professors or instructors to discuss difficulties with study or research. The communication mentioned above requires people's ability to speak, rather than the ability to write. In this manner, hardly could anyone deny speaking is more important. Therefore, I am supportive of the view that speaking plays a more important role in the modern society.) B- V# Q+ m7 {& u3 ]



Furthermore, speaking takes less time to express ideas. Because of the rapid pace of current society, people prefer to save time, so（删掉） speaking is more acceptable by most people （due to its time-saving characteristic）. For example, a manager may spend more than one hour to read a plan; however, if a person can introduce the plan to the manager, maybe it takes only ten minutes. As a result, speaking are more possible to affect people's minds. A wonder speech will change the election; those who perform well in the interview have more advantages in the job hunting. The merits of speaking cannot be replaced by writing.(这几句陈述貌似跟本段主题不符。本段主题是说Speaking省时间，而不是说Speaking更能吸引人)) j" |7 N5 B5 e. Z

    In sum, the ability to speak is more important. On one hand, the advanced technology makes it convenient to talk with each other; on the other hand, speaking is more widely used by people to express their ideas.（前面重心不是说time-saving吗？）

文章的语言上没有什么大问题，表达也比较好。但是文章的内容上还要多注意一下连续性的问题，很可能是你在写文章的时候写到后面忘了前面写了什么内容了。

纯属个人意见，楼主不要介意哈。

加油

goback211UID: 2419259

In the modern society, the ability to speakand the ability to write are two important qualities to express people's ideas.However, when it comes to the question whether speaking is important or writingimportant, it becomes controversial. In my perspective, the ability to speakrather than that to write plays a more crucial role and my reasons are asfollows.
To begin with, in the era of rapidlyadvanced technology, it is becoming easier for people to communicate with eachother by speaking. The invention of telephone enables people to talk with each other even though there is long distance between them（太罗嗦了，othersfar away from them）. Even with the employment(感觉用这个词不太好) of video conference, people can make aface-to-face talk. All these changes indicate that speaking turns out a majorform of communicate. Denizens need to call their families to express emotionsof love; businessman contact with clients tonegotiate and sell products by phone; Still Students usually meet professors orinstructors to discuss difficulties with study or research. The communicationmentioned above requires people's ability to speak, rather than the ability towrite. In this manner, hardly could anyone deny speaking is more important.Therefore, I am supportive of the view that speaking plays a more importantrole in the modern society.(看到这话我还以为到结尾了…这种总结类的句子还是不要放到中间比较好)

Furthermore, speaking takes less time toexpress ideas. Because of the rapid pace of current society, people prefer tosave time, so speaking is more acceptable by most people. For example, amanager may spend more than one hour to read a plan; however, if a person canintroduce the plan to the manager, maybe it takes only ten minutes. As aresult, speaking are more possible to affectpeople's minds（这个因果关系好牵强啊…片面）. A wonder speech will change the election; those who perform wellin the interview have more advantages in the job hunting. The merits ofspeaking cannot be replaced by writing.

In sum, the ability to speak is moreimportant. On one hand, the advanced technology makes it convenient to talkwith each other; on the other hand, speaking is more widely used by people toexpress their ideas.

语言很好，句式不少，呵呵，值得学习

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旸旸 9.15 作业
10.22现在这个年代，一个人想一辈子呆在一个单位工作是不可能的，是不现实的。你是否同意这个观点？

In the modern, it is very difficult and important for people to find a satisfying job. So when here comes to the question whether people can work in a certain company for the whole life, it becomes controversial. A group of people prefer and insist that they can work in a good company forever. In my perspective, however, I am not supportive of such idea and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, in most cases, hardly can a company survive more than thirty years. There are various factors leading to the consequence. Although there are a mass of opportunities and chances for companies because of the enhancement of communication technology, transportation and globalization, yet integrated markets also brings risks especially for small companies which make up most number of enterprises in the world. More opportunities also mean more challenges. So if there is any vital mistake on decisions, it possibly traps company into trouble or even be bankrupt. Even if the international enterprises equips with the most advanced equipment, top excellent researchers and most smart managers, they could not avoid such tragedy. Still the changes of customers’ consumption taste and the improvement of new technology also put companies into history. In this situation, people working at those companies have to take part in the group of job hunting. Actually according to a report, the average age of a company is not beyond ten years, so people should prepare for changing jobs in their lives. I will illustrate my view with the following example. Porsche has purchased Volkswagen and some works are forced to look for jobs in other companies; Convinced with the analysis above, I really disagree with the idea that a person can work in a company for life.

Furthermore, the development of technology will also compel to change their jobs. While we enjoy the benefits resulting from the improvement of technology, we also have to face the problem that it also changes our working methods. For example, the employment of automatic technology such as robots and machines has a great impact to the traditional manufacturing. Many occupations and work are replaced by machines. As a result, many people lose their jobs and they have to change or improve skills to find another job in order to raise their families. The following example can best verify my point. Once four companies producing photographic film share the whole market of the world; nevertheless, with the introduction of digital cameras, those who worked on producing photographic films encounter unemployment, so the engineers and works should change their careers. Therefore, I cannot accept that a person can work in a company eternally.

In sum, because of the possibility that the company will be bankrupt and the changes of occupation caused by enhancement of technology, rarely could a person work in a company all through life. Both of the two factors will lead to people to change their jobs.

luke_003UID: 2660230

In the modern, it is very difficult and important for people to find a satisfying job. So when here comes to the question whether people can work in a certain company for the whole life, it becomes controversial. A group of people prefer and insist that they can work in a good company forever. In my perspective, however, I am not supportive of such idea and my reasons are as follows.: Y, W2 U# o; r3 j
To begin with, in most cases, hardly can a company survive more than thirty years. There are various factors leading to the consequence. Although there are a mass of opportunities and chances for companies because of the enhancement of communication technology, transportation and globalization, yet integrated markets also brings (bring)risks especially for small companies which make up most number of enterprises in the world. More opportunities also mean more challenges. So if there is any vital mistake on decisions, it possibly traps company into trouble or even be bankrupt(用名词好一些). Even if the international enterprises equips with the most advanced equipment, top excellent researchers and most smart（smartest） managers, they could not avoid such tragedy. Still the changes of customers’ consumption taste and the improvement of new technology also put companies into history(有点片面了，与时俱进的company不会走进history吧，不过句子很好). In this situation, people working at those companies have to take part in the group of job hunting. Actually according to a report, the average age of a company is not beyond ten years(平均年龄才10？？), so people should prepare for changing jobs in their lives. I will illustrate my view with the following example. Porsche has purchased Volkswagen and some works are forced to look for jobs in other companies; Convinced with the analysis above, I really disagree with the idea that a person can work in a company for life.% Y+ `2 |/ D9 L( r

Furthermore, the development of technology will also compel (compel sb to)to change their jobs. While we enjoy the benefits resulting from the improvement of technology, we also have to face the problem that it(去it) also changes our working methods. For example, the employment of automatic technology such as robots and machines has a great impact to(on) the traditional manufacturing. Many occupations and work are replaced by machines（机器代替的是工人或劳动力而不是职业吧）. As a result, many people lose their jobs and they have to change or improve skills to find another job in order to raise（raise是抚养张大的意思，family里还有年长的吧。个人觉得support更好一点） their families. The following example can best verify my point. Once four companies producing photographic film share the whole market of the world; nevertheless, with the introduction of digital cameras, those who worked on producing photographic films encounter unemployment, so the engineers and works（workers） should change their careers. Therefore, I cannot accept that a person can work in a company eternally.

In sum, because of the possibility that the company will be bankrupt and the changes of occupation caused by enhancement of technology, rarely could a person work in a company all through life. Both of the two factors will lead to people to change their jobs.
写作功力很强，用词句和新颖，个别小错误需注意一下。题目是说一个人该不该在一个单位待一辈子（个人理解是一种职业的意思。可以是公司，工厂，政府部门，个体户等，可以把范围放宽）你主要围绕公司在写，会显得说服力不够。

gy0510150556UID: 2546647

In the modern, it is very difficult and important for people to find a satisfying job. So when here comes to the question whether people can work in a certain company for the whole life, it becomes controversial. A group of people prefer and insist that they can work in a good company forever. In my perspective, however, I am not supportive of such idea and my reasons are as follows.(用job代替company好一些)

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To begin with, in most cases, hardly can a company survive more than thirty years.（很多家族企业都有百年历史吧，这个有些偏颇，可以说除了一些大企业...） There are various factors leading to the consequence. Although there are a mass of opportunities and chances for companies because of the enhancement of communication technology, transportation and globalization, yet integrated markets also brings risks especially for small companies which make up most number(the majority) of enterprises in the world. More opportunities also mean more challenges. So if there is any vital mistake on decisions, it possibly traps company into trouble or even be bankrupt(bankrupt主语不是it). Even if the international enterprises equips with the most advanced equipment, top excellent(top excellent重复了) researchers and most smart managers, they could not avoid such tragedy. Still the changes of customers’ consumption taste and the improvement of new technology also put companies into history（history含蓄了，可以说be eliminated）. In this situation, people working at those companies have to take part in the group of job hunting. Actually according to a report, the average age of a company is not beyond ten years, so people should prepare for changing jobs in their lives. I will illustrate my view with the following example. Porsche has purchased Volkswagen and some workers are forced to look for jobs in other companies; Convinced with the analysis above, I really disagree with the idea that a person can work in a company for life.感觉讲理有些多，有些绕，可以少说些理，用例子说明，比如，小company生存难，金融危机了，甚至大公司都被破产重组，因此，这个说法不现实。

Furthermore, the development of technology will also compel workers to change their jobs. While we enjoy the benefits resulting from the improvement of technology, we also have to face the problem that it also changes our working methods. For example, the employment of automatic technology such as robots and machines has a great impact to the traditional manufacturing. Many occupations and work（work 和occupation重复了） are replaced by machines. As a result, many people lose their jobs and they have to change or improve skills to find another job in order to raise their families. The following example can best verify my point. Once four companies producing photographic film share the whole market of the world; nevertheless, with the introduction of digital cameras, those who worked on producing photographic films encounter unemployment, so the engineers and works should change their careers. Therefore, I cannot accept that a person can work in a company eternally.这个思路很棒，嘿嘿，也开阔了我的思路

In sum, because of the possibility that the company will be bankrupt and the changes of occupation caused by enhancement of technology, rarely could a person work in a company all through life. Both of the two factors will lead to people to change their jobs.
咱俩写的角度还是不太一样，你写的是客观大环境，我写的是主观的改变，应该都可以的，嘿嘿
说理再少一些，最好用生动的例子来说明你的观点就更好了

ly8768UID: 2452066

旸旸 9.17作业


All mankind in the world want to lead a good life and it is the essential requirement of us to enjoy the life. So when it comes to the question whether young people enjoy a life better or the older people, it becomes controversial. A group of people believe that aged people can better have the enjoyment of life because they rarely have any burden of life. However, in my perspective, young people rather than older people can enjoy life better and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, since young people are likely to try new things, it is more possible for them to enjoy happiness resulting from exploring new things. No one could deny the fact that young people are more willing to take new things. Consequently young people can better enjoy the life from two aspects. On one hand, in the current era with the rapid improvement of new technology, young people can take better use of those new inventions and technology. It is well known to us that young people are the majority of customers who purchase products developed based on advanced technology. It is the young people not the older people who usually use Facebook to make friends and to communicate with each other; Young people more prefer to buy i-phones than older people; still it is more possible for young people to try new concept of automobiles. While on the other hand, young people also have the advantage of taking new things in daily life. For example, I am fond of tasting new types of courses especially food from foreign countries; nevertheless, when we have a dinner in a restaurant, my parents usually book courses they have had for many times. Therefore, I have more opportunity to enjoy new taste of food and that is one kind of enjoyment of life. Based on the analysis above, I am supportive of the idea that young people are more likely to enjoy life better.

Furthermore, admittedly it is true that older people have fewer burden on life than young people, yet in most cases, young people have better physical condition to enjoy life. Hardly could we neglect the truth that most older people are not as healthy as young people and even some of them suffer from fatal diseases such as heart attack and cancer. Therefore, even if they have the intention to travel or enjoy delicious food, yet their body condition never permit them. I will take my grandmother for example. One of her dream is to have a journal to Beijing, the capital of China. Unfortunately, she could just travel in her dream because she has no energy to fulfill such a travel, which makes me really pity. Therefore, I would maintain that young people enjoy life better than older people.

In sum, because of young people's open mind and poor physical condition of older people, I am justified that young people enjoy life better than older people.

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older people are not as healthy as young people and even some of them suffer from fatal diseases such as heart attack and cancer. Therefore, even if they
是真的..但怎么听着有点残酷..

goback211UID: 2419259

All mankind in the world want to lead agood life(lead life怪怪的…) and it is the essential requirement of us(直接用our不行么) to enjoy the life. So when it comes to the question whether youngpeople enjoy a life better or the older people, it becomes controversial. Agroup of people believe that aged people can better have the enjoyment of lifebecause they rarely have any burden of life. However, in my perspective, youngpeople rather than older people can enjoy life better and my reasons are asfollows."
To begin with, since young people arelikely to try new things, it is more possible for them to enjoy happinessresulting from exploring new things. No one could deny the fact that youngpeople are more willing to take new things. Consequently young people canbetter enjoy the life from two aspects. On one hand, in the current era withthe rapid improvement of new technology, young people can take better use ofthose new inventions and technology. It is well known to us that young peopleare the majority of customers who purchase products developed based on advancedtechnology. It is the young people not the older people who usually useFacebook to make friends and to communicate with each other; Young people moreprefer to buy i-phones than older people; still it is more possible for youngpeople to try new concept of automobiles. While on theother hand(有on the other hand就不用while了), young people also have the advantage of taking new things in dailylife. For example, I am fond of tasting new types of courses especially foodfrom foreign countries; nevertheless, when we have a dinner in a restaurant, myparents usually book courses they have had for many times. Therefore, I havemore opportunity to enjoy new taste of food and that is one kind of enjoymentof life. Based on the analysis above, I am supportive of the idea that youngpeople are more likely to enjoy life better.(例子过多了，而且多是小例子，比较分散，最好写个详细的例子)
Furthermore, admittedly it is true thatolder people have fewer burden on life than young people, yet in most cases,young people have better physical condition to enjoy life. Hardly could weneglect the truth that most older people are not as healthy as young people andeven some of them suffer from fatal diseases such as heart attack and cancer.Therefore, even if they have the intention to travel or enjoy delicious food,yet their body condition never permit them(感觉有点问题). I will take my grandmother for example. One of her dream is tohave a journal to Beijing, the capital of China.Unfortunately, she could just travel in her dream because she has no energy tofulfill such a travel, which makes me really pity. Therefore, I would maintainthat young people enjoy life better than older people.
In sum, because of young people's open mindand poor physical condition of older people, I amjustified(justify) that young people enjoy life better than olderpeople.
我觉得每段的最后即使要写主题句，换个形式比较好

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旸旸 9.17作业 T3 Z3 a1 t# o1 e2 G% g All mankind in the world want to lead a good life and it is the essential requirement of us to enjoy the life. So when it comes to the question whether young people enjoy a life better or the older people (do)我觉得这是不是应该加个动词, it becomes controversial. A group of people believe that aged people can better have the enjoyment of life because they rarely have any burden of life. However, in my perspective, young people rather than older people can enjoy life better, and my reasons are as follows.0 d. P3 B0 {' X& W8 f; b To begin with, since young people are likely to try new things, it is more possible for them to enjoy happiness resulting from exploring new things. No one could deny the fact that young people are more willing to take new things. Consequently young people can better enjoy the life from two aspects. On one hand, in the current era with the rapid improvement of new technology, young people can take better use of those new inventions and technology. It is well known to us that young people are the majority of customers who purchase products developed based on advanced technology. It is the young people not the older people who usually use Facebook to make friends and to communicate with each other; Young people more prefer to buy i-phones (哈哈应该是iPhone)than older people; still it is more possible for young people to try new concept of automobiles. While on the other hand, young people also have the advantage of taking new things in daily life.（这句话不是特别明白） For example, I am fond of tasting new types of courses especially food from foreign countries; nevertheless, when we have a dinner in a restaurant, my parents usually book courses（原来点菜时这样说的？） they have had for many times. Therefore, I have more opportunity to enjoy new taste of food and that is one kind of enjoyment of life. Based on the analysis above, I am supportive of the idea that young people are more likely to enjoy life better.; x  _/ p0 i: t% K0 u: a. K: w Furthermore, admittedly it is true that older people have fewer burden on life than young people, yet in most cases, young people have better physical condition to enjoy life. Hardly could we neglect the truth that most older people are not as healthy as young people and even some of them suffer from fatal diseases such as heart attack and cancer. Therefore, even if they have the intention to travel or enjoy delicious food, yet their body condition never permit them.（我觉得这个表述很中国，再想想看有没有别的表达方式） I will take my grandmother for example. One of her dream is to have a journal to Beijing, the capital of China. Unfortunately, she could just travel in her dream because she has no energy to fulfill such a travel, which makes me really pity. Therefore, I would maintain that young people enjoy life better than older people. In sum, because of young people's open mind and （这个and连接有点奇怪）poor physical condition of older people, I am justified that young people enjoy life better than older people.

思路还是一如既往地清晰和有深度，加油！

fish1044UID: 2190500

All mankind in the world want to lead a good life and it is the essential requirement of us to enjoy the life. So when it comes to the question whether young people enjoy a life better or the older people, it becomes controversial. A group of people believe that aged people can better（删掉，放后面） have the（better） enjoyment of life because they rarely have any burden of life. However, in my perspective, young people rather than older people can enjoy life better and my reasons are as follows.9 a0 A9 P/ c" p. r8 W2 x


To begin with, since young people are likely to try new things, it is more possible for them to enjoy happiness resulting from exploring new things. No one could deny the fact that young people are more willing to take new things.（这句有点多余） Consequently young people can better enjoy the life from two aspects. On one hand, in the current era with the rapid improvement of new technology, young people can take better use of those new inventions and technology. It is well known to us that young people are the majority of customers who purchase products developed based on advanced technology. It is the young people not the older people who usually use Facebook to make friends and to communicate with each other; Young people more（prefer本来就有比较级的含义，more用在这有点奇怪） prefer to buy i-phones than older people; still it is more possible for young people to try new concept of automobiles. While on the other hand, young people also have the advantage of taking new things in daily life. For example, I am fond of tasting new types of courses especially food from foreign countries; nevertheless, when we have a dinner in a restaurant, my parents usually book courses they have had for many times. Therefore, I have more opportunity to enjoy new taste of food and that is one kind of enjoyment of life. Based on the analysis above, I am supportive of the idea that young people are more likely to enjoy life better.

    Furthermore, admittedly it is true（这个可以不要） that older people have fewer burden on life than young people, yet in most cases, young people have better physical condition to enjoy life. Hardly could we neglect the truth that most older people are not as healthy as young people and even some of them suffer from fatal diseases such as heart attack and cancer. Therefore, even if they have the intention to travel or enjoy delicious food, yet their body condition never permit them. I will take my grandmother for example. One of her dream is to have a journal to Beijing, the capital of China. Unfortunately, she could just travel in her dream because she has no energy to fulfill such a travel, which makes me feel really pity. Therefore, I would maintain that young people enjoy life better than older people.  f/ {6 O3 W4 {; v8 `; i
   
    In sum, because of young people's open mind and poor physical condition of older people（我觉得用better physical condition of them会比较好，能保持结构一致性）, I am justified that young people enjoy life better than older people.

非常好的一篇文章，语言顺畅，思路清晰，我要好好学习一下。

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旸旸 9.19 作业

It is all people's dream to find a good job in one's life because an ideal job means a well-paid salary and it provides an opportunity for people to fulfill their dreams in career. So when it comes to the question whether we should choose a small company or an international enterprise, it becomes controversial. A group of people are fond of small companies for they will have more opportunities to be promoted. However, in my perspective, I would like to work in a big enterprise rather than in a small one and my reasons are as follows.

To begin with, in most cases, a big company has more chances to survive compared with those small companies. It is well known to us that those national famous companies and even international enterprises have stable clients and advanced technologies. As a result, in the era with intensive competition, those big companies are not as easily bankrupt as those small ones. According to a report, the average of a company is not beyond 10 years. Nevertheless, those big companies which enjoy a world-wide reputation usually have history even more than scores of years. Microsoft established in the 1960s; Channel has occupied one part of the world perfume markets since it was the 1920s;Ford started to manufacture automobiles one hundred years ago; Therefore, in a big company, it is less possible for people to lose their job because of being bankrupt caused by accidents such as financial crisis. Convinced by the benefits of lower possibility to lose job, I am supportive of working in a big company.

Furthermore, a big company usually provides high salary and comfortable working environment. Since big companies have more budget than those small companies, they have enough finance to improve working conditions in the company. In contrast, the primary goal of a small company is to survive in the commercial realm full of competition, so rarely could a small company pay much attention to the salary and working environment of employees. I will take my experience for example. I used to have interns both in a small network company and an international company. In the small company, faculty begins their work in a small house and their average income is no more than 3,000 RMB per month. While in the international company, employees can have drinks and food freely. What is more, the average of salary is about 5,000 RMB per month. In this circumstance, hardly could we refute the enticing salary and comfortable environment to work in a big company.

Finally, in a big company, faculty is more likely to open horizon. A big company has massive international business, so faculty will have more opportunity to work abroad or to be trained in other places. In addition, because of the advanced technology and management, employees can become more professional in the devoted area. However, people cannot enjoy these advantages in a small company.

In sum, due to the high and stable salary, comfortable working environment, and opportunity to study abroad, I really prefer to work in a big especially an international enterprise rather than in a small one.