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TOPIC: ISSUE87 - "In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries."

WORDS: 465    TIME:50  DATE: 2006-7-31

Nowadays, our society is pregnant with experts, erudite scholars engaged in a specific field. It is undoubted that experts have played a key role in advancing the world for they make quantities of discoveries as well as make precise and numerous measurement. However beginners, who are more curious than mavens about the fields they are devoted to, can also accelerate the course of some important discoveries.

First of all, experts possess abundant experiences as well as laudatory knowledge, leading to their skillful and authoritative discoveries. In a certain field of inquiry may it be astronomy, geography, arts, or psychoanalysis etc, experts as they were nominated can be more insightful and shrewd than beginners as a result of their expertise, including it so inspiring and objective knowledge that makes it easier for them to analyze any phenomenon to put forward a new proposition and a far-reaching theory. As can be seen from so numerous scientists, for instance, Newton, Albert Einstein, Gauss, who dip deeply into the fields they are engaged in, their discoveries are absolutely not derived from a sudden inspiration or capricious ideas which on the contrary features beginners, but are natural results determined by their insight and skill. Therefore, experts, as they possess broadened horizon, is more likely than beginner to make important discoveries.

Furthermore, being erudite and honorable, experts can absorb more information and expertise than beginners, determined by the depth of their researches. So tremendous, complex information and knowledge are there in contemporary globe that sciolism curbs further cognizance of plentiful fields of inquiry of beginners. In other words, only being more experienced and erudite can a scholar further their research in the area he or she is devoted to.

However, beginner is certainly more curious than experts for curiosity, which though play a important role in discovering, will not last for long for any person. As a renowned psychologist in Qinghua University, most prominent in China and also influential in Asia, once states  (And I paraphrase) : " When one was standing at the foot of a mountain, he would guess how far can the scenery be on the top of  the mountain, elicited by its novelty , but when he climb to the peak , he would not linger on the question brought forward below, but would measure with acquired experience the time and energy needed for arrival to the next but higher acme." This words illustrates a logic: When one begin, one grope with curiosity; notwithstanding, when one was involved, one forge ahead with obtained knowledge toward the truth.

     In summary, the probable wide acknowledged saying that the beginner is prone to make important discoveries is groundless, for the reasons mentioned above. To elevate the amount of discoveries, more experience and information as well as expertise are obviously favorable.
   
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[ 本帖最后由 morallrey 于 2006-8-1 00:08 编辑 ]

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TOPIC: ISSUE87 - "In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries."

WORDS: 465    TIME:50  DATE: 2006-7-31

Nowadays, our society is pregnant居然还可以这么用，第一次知道 with experts, erudite scholars engaged in a specific field. It is undoubted that experts have played a key role in advancing the world for they make quantities of discoveries as well as make precise and numerous measurement.后面的这个明显是在找话说， However beginners, who are more curious than mavens about the fields they are devoted to, can also accelerate the course of some important discoveries.

First of all, experts possess abundant experiences as well as laudatory knowledge, leading to their skillful and authoritative discoveries. In a certain field of inquiry may it be astronomy, geography, arts, or psychoanalysis etc, experts as they were nominated can be more insightful and shrewd than beginners as a result of their expertise, including it so inspiring and objective knowledge that makes it easier for them to analyze any phenomenon to put forward a new proposition and a far-reaching theory. As can be seen from so numerous scientists, for instance, Newton, Albert Einstein, Gauss, who dip deeply into the fields they are engaged in, their discoveries are absolutely not derived from a sudden inspiration or capricious ideas which on the contrary features beginners, but are natural results determined by their insight and skill. Therefore, experts, as they possess broadened horizon, is more likely than beginner to make important discoveries.（这段还行吧，长句我也没看出什么问题，长的长的我都有点晕呼了。。。句子变化也不错，用词上面厉害了，不象我，都是些4 6 级的水平的词汇）
Furthermore, being erudite and honorable, experts can absorb more information and expertise than beginners, determined by the depth of their researches. So tremendous, complex information and knowledge are there in contemporary globe that sciolism curbs further cognizance of plentiful fields of inquiry of beginners. （这句没看懂啊，里面的词汇还厉害）In other words, only being more experienced and erudite can a scholar further their research in the area he or she is devoted to.

However, beginner is certainly more curious than experts for curiosity, which though play an important role in discovering, will not last for long for any person. As a renowned psychologist in Qinghua University（Tsinghua好象两种都可以，但是前面的不知道外国人看的懂吗？后面的好象在国际上比较通用）most prominent in China and also influential in Asia, once states  (And I paraphrase) : " When one was standing at the foot of a mountain, he would guess how far can the scenery be on the top of  the mountain, elicited by its novelty , but when he climb to the peak , he would not linger on the question brought forward below, but would measure with acquired experience the time and energy needed for arrival to the next but higher acme." This words illustrates a logic: When one begin, one grope with curiosity; notwithstanding, when one was involved, one forge ahead with obtained knowledge toward the truth.（引用的名言似乎也可以的出这样的结论，至少是好奇心把他给带到山顶的吧，这段应该是要讲初学者光有好奇心并不能有什么巨大的发现是吧，是很难论证，我也没想出什么好办法）
     In summary, the probable wide acknowledged saying that the beginner is prone to make important discoveries is groundless, for the reasons mentioned above. To elevate the amount of discoveries, more experience and information as well as expertise are obviously favorable.
1写了个不同与其他的文章，果然有勇气，完全把新人的创造性给否定了
2 讲专家的还好，说人家有经验和丰富的知识，所以更能够发现问题，但是新人的论证不够，只说了光有好奇心的是不能够发现问题，不过这个确实很难写，找出反驳的观点能有一大堆，
3 建议可以按别人的思路吧，专家也是从新人过来的，新人的发现也是建立在其有了一定的经验和知识的基础上的。
4 文章的词句用的不错，不过也是长句太多，有的看得看得我都晕了，建议还是应该长短想结合着来，词语方面，可厉害了，很多我根本就不会用的。
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