issue103 [米国有米］bailamo27第八次作业

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issue103. "The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."
(只有研究和我们日常生活相关的历史才有价值。)
提纲：
1。社会发展之迅速是难以预测的。虽然，今天和过去的情况早已是不同而语，科技的发达，交通的便利等是过去难及的，回顾历史并不能直接解决今天社会问题，如全球气温变暖，克隆人的伦理道德等，但可以借鉴。
2。任何事物都其历史，而且这些历史或多或少都与我们的生活相联系。如，思想，道德规范，种族等都间接与我们生活相关；钢笔，电脑的发明和发展等，这些都与我们的生活相关。历史研究是我们了解一切的基础。它不仅对于我们人类认识自身有巨大帮助，同时，对我们现在的生活及未来的发展方向都有极重要的参考和指导价值。
3。对社会而言：社会发展有规律可循。历史是一面镜子，虽然过去不一定在今天会重演，但类似的情况是完全可能发生的。如，战争。经历了一战后，战争给人们带来的伤害并没有4。让好战份子死心，而二战又上演。战争的残酷（atrocious）再一次给人类一重击。对个人成长而言：学习过去的成功人士的经验尤为重要。如，希波克拉底。
5。总之，历史其实就是我们生活的记录和写照，与我们的生活方方面面都有关，但其研究的价值远不如此。它是对过去的反映，对现代的启示和对未来的指导。人类的和平，进步与发展都需要不段了解学习历史，从中吸取教训，积累经验。

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It is incredible to anticipate the fast developing pace of our society. Although, today is quite different with days of before, science has changed our life so significantly; transportation is such convenient today which is hard to imagine in the old days. History study is an interesting field, though it cannot solve all the problems of today, such as, the ethical problem evolved by human clone, the green-house effect and so on. It does not mean that it’s nonsense when history study is not related to our daily life.

From the very beginning, everything has its own history, which more or less has something to do with our daily life. Kinds of think, ethic and so on are indirect with our life; pen and computer also have their history that is direct to our daily life. History study is the fundamental base of understanding everything in the world. It is not only helpful to understand our own process of development, but also has great significance in guiding our life of today and future.

Secondly, to the whole society, during the process of its development, history pole an important role as a mirror, which tells us that things of the past may not repeat now, but similar things will happen if we don’t learn from history. War is one of the best examples. The nightmare of World War I has repeated after only 25years. Atrocious of the war has heat fatally people’s heart and mind once again; and more people and countries have been evolved in this disaster that made by human beings. Supposing we don’t learn history, our society won’t have bright future, and even today is covered in the sunshine. The youth of Japan don’t understand the past; what’s worse, they even don’t know how great disaster that their ancients have imposed to people in our country and other Asian countries and also the USA. If they can’t remember the nightmare, one day, the horrible war would come again. So learning form history is extremely important to avoid taking the same disastrous road.

Furthermore, to the culture of individual, it’s quite important to learn experiences of those successful figures. Since I’m a student in medical field, I’d like to take Hippcrates，the most significant Greek physician, who known as “ the Father of Medicine”， for instance. Hippcrates held the belief that the body must be treated as a whole and not just a series of parts. He was also the first physician that held the belief that thoughts, ideas, and feelings come from the brain and not the heart as others of him time believed. He wrote the famous “the Oath” which is appreciated as Bible of medical students. His theory shed greatly influence on the medical development of today. Though numerous theories have changed today, the essence of medicine that to heal people’s life and mind has never altered. To retrospect the history of medical development, we inherited the spirits of the great doctors. What’s more important, it’s illuminated to create new ideas and innovated technologies.

All in all, history is a pier glass of our daily life and the process of society’s every steps of development. But the value of studying history does not only lie in here. History is a living book of the past, a guiding book of today and an enlighten book of future. The peace and development of the world depend on what we gain from the past, and how we apply these experiences and processions that precedents left to us.


[ 本帖最后由 bailamo27 于 2007-1-6 12:35 编辑 ]

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It is incredible to anticipate the fast developing pace of our society. Although, today is quite different with[from] days of before[换成old days会不会好点？], science has changed our life so significantly; t[T]ransportation is such[such后加名字，改成so，后面的which也可适当改成that] convenient today which is hard to imagine in the old days. History study is an interesting field, though it cannot solve all the problems of today[改成current problem], such as, the ethical problem evolved by human clone, the green-house effect and so on.， It does not mean that it’s nonsense when history study is not related to our daily life. 例子很好，快速点题。

From the very beginning, everything has its own history, which more or less has something to do with our daily life. Kinds of think[thoughts], ethic and so on are indirect with our life; pen and computer also have their history that is direct to our daily life. History study is the fundamental base of understanding everything in the world. It is not only helpful to understand our own process of development, but also has great significance in guiding our life of today and future. 例子很好

Secondly, to the whole society, during the process of its development, history pole an important role as a mirror, which tells us that things of the past[foregone affairs] may not repeat now, but similar things will happen if we don’t learn from history. War is one of the best examples. The nightmare of World War I has repeated after only 25 years. Atrocious[这个是形容词，改成Atrocity] of the war has[had] heat[heated] fatally people’s heart and mind once again, and more people and countries have been evolved in this disaster that made by human beings. Supposing we don’t learn history, our society won’t have bright future, and even today is covered in the sunshine[是被阳光覆盖的意思吗？要么干脆直接写成today is under the sunshine，像里根的就职演说中就说 a nation under god]. The youth of Japan don’t understand the past; what’s worse, they even don’t know how[what a ] great disaster that their ancients[觉得这个古人不是很好，改成forefathers？] have imposed to people in our country and other Asian countries and also the USA. If they can’t remember the nightmare, one day, the horrible war would come again. So learning form history is extremely important to avoid taking the same disastrous road[way]. 作者很擅长举例，但用词尤其是词的形式还要再讲究一些。

Furthermore, to the culture of individual, it’s quite important to learn experiences of those successful figures. Since I’m a student in medical field, I’d like to take Hippcrates，the most significant Greek physician, who known as “ the Father of Medicine” for instance. Hippcrates held the belief that the body must be treated as a whole and not just a series of parts. He was also the first physician that held the belief that thoughts, ideas, and feelings come from the brain and not the heart as others of him[his] time believed. He wrote [the去掉] famous “the Oath” which is appreciated as Bible of medical students. His theory shed greatly influence on the medical development of today. Though numerous theories have changed today, the essence of medicine that to heal people’s life and mind has never altered. To retrospect the history of medical development, we inherited the spirits of the great doctors. What’s more important, it’s illuminated to create new ideas and innovated technologies. 提及自己的专业，作者的语言立刻就不同了，让我觉得举例子还是真是要找自己熟悉的例子，看来的容易忘容易表达不好。

All in all, history is a pier glass of our daily life and the process of society’s every steps of development[every steps of social development就好了，就有社会发展过程中的每一步的意思，还有我们的作文肯定会经常用到社会发展，所以记住social development^&^]. But the value of studying history does not only lie in here. History is a living book of the past, a guiding book of today and an enlighten book of future. The peace and development of the world depend on what we gain from the past, and how we apply these experiences and processions that precedents left to us. 总段很精彩，尤其是最后的排比句，很喜欢。

看出来作者在努力限时，所以部分语句就没法那么精雕细琢，部分用词有点汉语英语。提纲很细，大大小小的例子对论证都很充分。这样写不出新意的题目还是主要抓内部吧。加油！共勉！