Issue97 【METTLE小组】第2次作业 by supernihui

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   There is much controversy on whether politics influence people’s decisions and activities in all aspects .Admittedly politics plays an in momentous role in culture, economic and so on. It even impacted on science and arts as we have often seen in our daily life. However, doubts arise when it comes to the fact that it’ really unfortunate when politics connected so closely to our daily life. And politics is not omnipotent there is also something beyond the control of politics.
Admittedly, political decisions and activities have a crucial influence on culture and economy .For example, the Renascence in European which accelerates the flourish of European from varies aspects so greatly was caused by political reasons that people are not content with the federal foundation and are eagerly to rebuild a whole new regime.  The Great Culture Revolution in china which lasted a decade causing the whole nation great sufferings and formidable calamities admonished us that political decisions and activities is so vital that it allowed no mistakes.
Sensible political decisions make the community to become more harmony and the group cohesion will be stronger. To the contrary, unwisely or monarchy political resolutions will embroil us to a divergence and causes us into great contradiction.
      Political also influence on science and arts as we shouldn’t overlooked .If the country not only esteem science and arts but also issue many political  decrees encouraging people to devoted in science and arts, which will obviously boost the development of science and arts. However, it’s really hard to survive if policy was adopted to nip them in the bud, not to mention to flourish by leaps and bounds.  .
But it may be so arbitrary and slapdash to reach a conclusion that politics affect all aspects of people’s daily lives. What really matters are the values and our belief have for life. We will be certainly to be influenced by the trend it presents to us. But what we have though are what have been evolutes by the atmosphere which you have been fed up and couldn’t easily changed by other’s persuade or suborn. The ideology  which you come into being for the world and the value of life will determine what direction will you choose to large extend but not politics.
    And what’s more, what the aftermath political brings shouldn’t be just defined as limited as unfortunate things. Maybe you haven’t noticed that you also benefited from it .Sometimes people would complain about the endless hullabaloo political activities brings when two candidates fight each other for the leadership. Whereas we shouldn’t be so provincial to criticize things just like that. The fight against terrorism across the world also ensure us a more peaceful environment and check more people from injuring ,blooding and engulfed in war. The Red Cross was also founded by some politicians succored so many victims from all kinds of nature calamities or those who was tortured by famines or choleras and so on. The regulations and laws which maintain our stability and prosperity are implemented through the process of political decisions and activities.
     As long as we are social creatures, we will certainly be influenced by political activities. But we should be more rationally to emancipate our minds and think in dispensably rather than follow the trend which the politic predicted .Maybe we can’t change the outcome it brings but to be more optimism and we could alter our attitude to observing things, thus we would find it maybe not so unfortunate that we lived in a world full of politic activities as we had originally thought.



[ 本帖最后由 supernihui 于 2007-6-9 13:00 编辑 ]

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There is much controversy on whether politics influence people’s decisions and activities [daily lives?]in all aspects .Admittedly politics plays an in momentous role in culture, economic and so on. It even impacted on science and arts as we have often seen in our daily life. However, doubts arise when it comes to the fact that it’ really unfortunate when politics connected so closely to our daily life. And politics is not omnipotent there is also something beyond the control of politics.

Admittedly, political decisions and activities have a crucial influence on culture and economy .For example, the Renascence in European which accelerates the flourish of European from varies aspects so greatly was caused by political reasons that people are not content with the federal foundation and are eagerly to rebuild a whole new regime.  The Great Culture Revolution in china which lasted a decade causing the whole nation great sufferings and formidable calamities admonished us that political decisions and activities is so vital that it allowed no mistakes.
Sensible political decisions make the community to become more harmony and the group cohesion will be stronger. To the contrary, unwisely or monarchy political resolutions will embroil us to a divergence and causes us into great contradiction.
      Political also influence on science and arts as we shouldn’t overlooked .If the country not only esteem science and arts but also issue many political  decrees encouraging people to devoted in science and arts, which will obviously boost the development of science and arts. However, it’s really hard to survive if policy was adopted to nip them in the bud, not to mention to flourish by leaps and bounds. [没太明白要表达什么意思。。。sorry,水平有限] .
But it may be so arbitrary and slapdash to reach a conclusion that politics affect all aspects of people’s daily lives. [perfect sentence and perfect issue i think]What really matters are the values and our belief have for life. We will be certainly to be influenced by the trend it presents to us. But what we have though are what have been evolutes by the atmosphere which you have been fed up and couldn’t easily changed by other’s persuade or suborn. The ideology  which you come into being for the world and the value of life will determine what direction will you choose to large extend but not politics.[加个例子？]
    And what’s more, what the aftermath political brings shouldn’t be just defined as limited as unfortunate things. Maybe you haven’t noticed that you also benefited from it .Sometimes people would complain about the endless hullabaloo political activities brings when two candidates fight each other for the leadership. Whereas we shouldn’t be so provincial to criticize things just like that. The fight against terrorism across the world also ensure us a more peaceful environment and check more people from injuring ,blooding and engulfed in war. The Red Cross was also founded by some politicians succored so many victims from all kinds of nature calamities or those who was tortured by famines or choleras and so on. The regulations and laws which maintain our stability and prosperity are implemented through the process of political decisions and activities.
     As long as we are social creatures, we will certainly be influenced by political activities. But we should be more rationally to emancipate our minds and think in dispensably rather than follow the trend which the politic predicted .Maybe we can’t change the outcome it brings but to be more optimism and we could alter our attitude to observing things, thus we would find it maybe not so unfortunate that we lived in a world full of politic activities as we had originally thought.

哥们我觉得你写得挺好的，方向把握的很好，而且语言也不错，而且也没让我改错词，感激。。。
看看吧，我不知道应当提什么建议了。要不然多看看别人的吧，再提高。

[ 本帖最后由 holacola 于 2007-6-10 17:06 编辑 ]