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woaichixiguaUID: 2450470

8月31日
新能源（sun, wind, water）will be soon replace 旧能源fossil fuels (oil, gas)， agree or disagree? 2006 年10 月28日技术进步类

There is no doubt that more economical and environmental energy will ultimate replace present fossil fuels. However, I am not such a Pollyanna to say that this change will come quickly and smoothly, instead, I believe this will be a long and arduous task.

First of all, our present major energy “consumers” --- vehicles, machines, house equipments and etc --- are all designed and manufactured to take advantage of fossil fuels. It means that perhaps all these facilities need to be renovated or even rebuilt in order to make them productive for the new energy source. One good example is the application of hydrogen energy in Japan. Approximately five years ago, scientists found that hydrogen extracted from water can be use as fuel and this would be a perfect substitute of petroleum in vehicles since water is cheaper and plentiful and its combustion will not generate harmful or contaminative elements. However, until today, this new energy still cannot be put into application. Why? Since a desirable automobile that is capable to carry a big “water fuel tank” still cannot be figure out.

A second reason this will be a long process to scientists, manufacturers and also government to persuade the public of accepting the concept of new energy and build up faith on it. Just like the very time that people doubt the safety and feasibility of fossil oil, they also need time to trust a water-driven car won’t be conked in the middle of highway.

Last but not least is the expense involved in the application of new energy. Long before the world wide research in new energy, American government had already begun to set up panels in the dessert. However, solar energy only plays a subordinate role in America today. One major reason is the solar panels are too expensive. Just as one citizen said when interviewed by CNN, “not until the day solar electricity can be my most economical choice, it will even be on considering list.”

In sum, new energy is sure enough a promissory energy that will finally replace our present traditional fossil ones. However, we also need to be objective and dispassionate that this renovation will be a time consuming process.

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david.lUID: 2503791

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chineseladyUID: 2403976

There is no doubt that more economical and environmental energy will ultimate replace present fossil fuels. However, I am not such a Pollyanna to say that this change will come quickly and smoothly, instead, I believe this will be a long and arduous task.First of all, our present major energy “consumers” --- vehicles, machines, house equipments and etc --- are all designed and manufactured to take advantage of fossil fuels. It means that perhaps all these facilities need to be用need doing是表达被动 renovated or even rebuilt in order to make them productive for the new energy source. One good example is the application of hydrogen energy in Japan. Approximately five years ago, scientists found that hydrogen extracted from water can be use as fuel and this would be a perfect substitute of petroleum in vehicles since water is cheaper and plentiful and its combustion will not generate harmful or contaminative elements. However, until today, this new energy still cannot be put into application. Why? Since a desirable automobile that is capable to carry a big “water fuel tank” still cannot be figure out. bbs.gter.net-d(f"A
H1ao/MA second reason this will be a long process to scientists, manufacturers and also government to persuade the public of accepting the concept of new energy and build up faith on it. Just like the very time that people doubt the safety and feasibility of fossil oil, they also need time to trust a water-driven car won’t will not 更正式be conked in the middle of highway.
Last but not least is the expense involved in the application of new energy. Long before the world wide research in new energy, American government had already begun to set up panels in the dessert. However, solar energy only plays a subordinate role in America today. One major reason is the solar panels are too expensive. Just as one citizen said when interviewed by CNN, “not until the day solar electricity can be my most economical choice, it will even be on considering list.”In sum, new energy is sure enough a promissory energy that will finally replace our present traditional fossil ones. However, we also need to be objective and dispassionate that this renovation will be a time consuming process.



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可爱，我很喜欢！内容很清晰，很容易理解！如果结尾再多几句就跟好了。这样文章中的论点就更加深了，好啊文章！没什么大毛病我读的挺顺。

chineseladyUID: 2403976

刚才看了一下124的作业，因为昨天他改我的，我觉得你们的观点和用的词汇 短语都有相似的地方，不知道如果一起考试的话会不会被误会呢。因为以前听说有的作文被CANCEL了，如果你有时间欢迎看看我的 你的点平很条理 很清晰 Chineselady

yuanhu124UID: 2444317

我刚才也读了LZ的作文，和我写的的确一点点相似，不过，俺自叹没有LZ写得好啊。LZ的例子更多，这很好，我的干瘪瘪的，都是说理了。
至于CANCEL，我像倒是不至于。像今天的这个题目，其实很容易大家就写到一起去了。