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Agree or disagree ：advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy（07.12.8传媒类）

Weather the advertisement is a waste of the company’s resource such as money and time is a controversial issue. Advertisement, from which both the service provider and customer were benefited, did play an important role in the past decades. Nevertheless, it will function continuously or even more effective than ever before.

To begin with, do all the customers know what they really want to buy? Not exactly! This is especially true for a new brand which almost no one knows about. For instance, when people shopping in a super market, he/she may just pick out the products whose brands they are already familiar with and will neglect the products with a brand they never heard of. Therefore, the customer loses the chance of getting to know another kind of product which may be more likely to meet his/her needs. However, advertisement would be the most effective method to solve this problem by providing customers with the latest information of their product. Attracted by good features of the products, the customer may decide to have a try when they meet with this brand next time. Apparently, the customer will benefit from the AD by having more choices.

Furthermore, does it a waste of money and time for the company to spend money in AD? The answer is no. On the contrary, making money for the company is the most important function of the AD. For example, if a brand invites a pop star as the spokesman of its products, it will definitely attract certain customer groups especially the young generation. Then, if they get the chance of choosing one product among the many brands, He/she will undoubtedly choose the brand by his favorite pop star. Another example is that……(感觉字数已经太多了，不想再写例子了,但感觉不写内容还不够)The company does benefit from the AD by making more profit and gaining more advantage over the rivals.

Someone may argue that, some ad rather exaggerate the function or even provide false information of certain product and I admit that this will bring inconvenience to the customers. However, these problems could be solved by the enforcement of certain laws by the legislation institution and by the awareness of people to filter the information according to their own needs.

In sum, the AD has a significant positive impact on the life. The advantages of AD outweigh the disadvantages, although there might some minor negative effect the AD brings. However, nobody should neglect the significance of the AD which benefits us for many years and it is no doubt that AD mechanism will be perfected and continues to be an indispensable tool in business.




AD= advertisement, 考试的时候不会这样的。

[ 本帖最后由 candicehe 于 2008-9-8 16:23 编辑 ]

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Someone may argue that, some ad rather exaggerate the function or even provide false information of certain product and I admit that this will bring inconvenience to the customers. However, these problems could be solved by the enforcement of certain laws by the legislation institution and by the awareness of people to filter the information according to their own needs.
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In sum, the AD has a significant positive impact on the life. The advantages of AD outweigh the disadvantages, although there might some minor negative effect the AD brings. However, nobody should neglect the significance of the AD which benefits us for many years and it is no doubt that AD mechanism will be perfected and continues to be an indispensable tool in business.

结构清晰,论证完整,是篇不错的文章.不过感觉LZ的例子说的有点太详细,而且缺点总结性的支撑句.