issue108 （初步限时，1小时5分）

songwei1765UID: 202658

有目的限时写的，质量确实不能保证~~

issue108
"In many countries it is now possible to turn on the television and view government at work. Watching these proceedings can help people understand the issues that affect their lives. The more kinds of government proceedings—trials, debates, meetings, etc—that are televised, the more society will benefit." （四月：11次）
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提纲：
客观透明的报导政府工作和进程有助于民众与政府的理解和对政策的支持。
B1 在民主社会，政府行为报导的透明性是一个社会民主和程度的衡量。
B2 媒体帮助民众对政府工作者进行监督，对丑闻的曝光进一步限制政府的权力。
B3 尽管如此，国家的机密信息不应该被媒体报导，否则会导致民众无谓的担心和恐慌。


The government proceedings should be operated around a relative transparent circumstance, which can provide ordinary people more detailed information and procedure of government work. Society will benefit a lot by comprehending and supporting the tendency of government policy from citizens. As a matter of fact, convenient television and advanced network improve the availability televising or broadcasting government proceedings to public.

In democratic society, the transparence of government proceedings and policies is one of the most important degrees to evaluate the scale of democracy. Meanwhile, the task of media scrutiny is to try its best to provide information objectively and precisely, fulfilling its promise by creating relative objective media atmosphere. Undoubtedly, the assembly of government proceedings and media report will help commons understand the issues that government concerned and the tendency of its policies. And the process of transparent government policy can also improve the comprehension between citizens and government. There are more opportunities for commons to express their attitudes toward government policies by watching these proceedings on television. Immediate reflect and attitude of commons feedback governments to help them adjust or amend their decisions and policies. For instance, the presidency of America, provide a typical example of reporting government proceedings transparently and objectively. Candidates interpret their tendencies of operation and fulfilling obligations to supporters by media report, which can give voters more direct impression about their future leaders. In one hand, the competition between candidates can base on the principle of equality by objective media coverage. On the other hand, voters learn more about those candidates by watching live debate and statement on television and make more precise decision to support their favorite one with excellent leader mettle by contrast with others.

In addition, media scrutiny toward government proceedings supervises the whole process as well. According to its transparency of reporting, it can avoid corruption and unequal competition among those proceedings by commons' concerns. Furthermore, society can use media tools to evaluate government's works and fulfilled tasks, forcing them to carry on their responsibilities and obligations on behalf of the public unconditionally. Scandals will be soon uncovered by media coverage, which will restrict government's power beyond a relative legal area. For instance, the Watergate scandal in America, 1970s, reported by television and radio, directly forcing the president Nixon to claim abdication by taking charge of the whole event. And ex-president Bill Clinton had to admit his fault of sexual scandals during his career of president, because of transparent television report and media scrutiny. Apparently, transparent report does not only provide detailed information about government proceedings, but also give commons opportunity to recognize their government and leaders more objectively and precisely.

Admittedly, transparent media scrutiny can help improve the whole process of democracy. In some sense, it means not all government proceedings should totally be broadcasted for commons, especially confidential ones. As we know, the responsibility of government is not only to gain comprehension and support from commons, but also to maintain social balance and protect nation. Thus, some confidential proceedings or information should be kept secret, such as the policy toward military affairs, diplomatic affairs, and other significant policies, which are related to the destiny of this country. If all government policies and decisions were reported by media coverage transparently, it would definitely result in unnecessary anxious and fright among commons. Withholding crucial information and confidential proceedings is also one of the most dispensable and significant duties of government.

In sum, we can conclude that the media report introduced into government proceedings and policies has propelled the democracy forward. However, government should necessarily withhold some confidential information and crucial proceedings to avoid more nationwide scare and maintain the balance of social development.

分类别：1、政治、政府
相关题目：
政治：完全公开化 Vs 有选择的隐瞒
8、"It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public." （四月：11次）
167"It is impossible for an effective political leader to tell the truth all the time. Complete honesty is not a useful virtue for a politician." （四月：10次）
道德原则：政治 Vs 道德
43"To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards." （四月：13次）
审查制度
82"Government should never censor the artistic works or historical displays that a museum wishes to exhibit."（四月：2次）
224"Censorship is rarely, if ever, justified."（四月：0次）
政治 Vs 生活
97"It is unfortunate but true that political decisions and activities affect all aspects of people's lives."（四月：0次）
电子政务、公开透明化
108"In many countries it is now possible to turn on the television and view government at work. Watching these proceedings can help people understand the issues that affect their lives. The more kinds of government proceedings—trials, debates, meetings, etc—that are televised, the more society will benefit." （四月：11次）
人的政治倾向
123"It is possible to identify a person's politics within a very short time of meeting him or her. Everything about people—their clothes, their friends, the way they talk, what they eat—reflects their political beliefs."（四月：2次）
208"The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."（四月：17次）
政治VS道德
169"Those who treat politics and morality as though they were separate realms fail to understand either the one or the other."（四月：2次）
政治目标：理想 Vs 务实
195"The goal of politics should not be the pursuit of an ideal, but rather the search for common ground and reasonable consensus." （四月：7次）

[ Last edited by songwei1765 on 2005-6-15 at 10:19 ]

circlezhUID: 186128

楼主的文章写的好啊，至少在用词精细方面我无法望其向背。我也不好多做评论了。
很有兴趣的想知道楼主写文章的过程，怎么样才叫”先提质后提速“：是不是先写个大概轮廓，再对词进行精雕细琢。（呵呵，偶就是这么干的，先写个大体，再抱本字典慢慢查）

songwei1765UID: 202658

主要偶是先慢慢写，尽量认真写，之后再慢慢加快速度。
这是第一篇初步限时的，但效果还不太明显~~
BTW，尼克松怎么拼的？偶按发音拼了一个，多半错的~~

逗逗UID: 173558

The government proceedings should be operated around a relative transparent circumstance, which can provide ordinary people more detailed information and procedure of government work. Society will benefit a lot by comprehending and supporting the tendency of government policy from citizens. As a matter of fact, convenient television and advanced network improve the availability televising or broadcasting government proceedings to public.

In democratic society, the transparence of government proceedings and policies is one of the most important degrees to evaluate the scale of democracy. （观点很好）Meanwhile, the task of media scrutiny is to try its best to provide information objectively and precisely, fulfilling its promise by creating relative objective media atmosphere. Undoubtedly, the assembly of government proceedings and media report will help commons understand the issues that government concerned and the tendency of its policies. And the process of transparent government policy can also improve the comprehension（用understanding好些，个人觉得comprehension重在说对事物理解能力） between citizens and government. There are more opportunities for commons to express their attitudes toward government policies by watching these proceedings on television. Immediate reflect and attitude of commons feedback governments to help them adjust or amend（用一个好了，发现全篇用and和or 连接的词有点多，有时确实觉得很饱满，但是用多了读起来略显繁复） their decisions and policies. For instance, the presidency of America, provide a typical example of reporting government proceedings transparently and objectively. Candidates interpret their tendencies of operation and fulfilling obligations to supporters by media report, which can give voters more direct impression about their future leaders. In one hand, the competition between candidates can base on the principle of equality by objective media coverage. On the other hand, voters learn more about those candidates by watching live debate and statement on television and make more precise decision to support their favorite one with excellent leader mettle by contrast with others. (楼主关于这段竞选期间媒体作用的论证是很清晰有条理的，不过我受过一篇托福阅读的影响，也是讲媒体对当代总统选举造成的影响，因为以前候选人都是到各地在“trunk”上演说，和选民面对面的接触使公众更易于了解他们的人格魅力，而以电视为主导的宣传失去了这种传统的优点，候选人还可能通过制造公益事件吸引媒体，骗取选民的好感，因此要求选民在看电视时要有更强的 辨别力。关于这一点，可以多探讨一下。)


In addition, media scrutiny toward government proceedings supervises the whole process as well. According to its transparency of reporting, it can avoid corruption and unequal competition among those proceedings by commons' concerns. Furthermore, society can use media tools to evaluate government's works and fulfilled tasks, forcing them to carry on their responsibilities and obligations on behalf of the public unconditionally. Scandals will be soon uncovered by media coverage, which will restrict government's power beyond a relative legal area. For instance, the Watergate scandal in America, 1970s, reported by television and radio, directly forcing the president Nixon to claim abdication by taking charge of the whole event. And ex-president Bill Clinton had to admit his fault of sexual scandals during his career of president, because of transparent television report and media scrutiny. Apparently, transparent report does not only provide detailed information about government proceedings, but also give commons opportunity to recognize their government and leaders more objectively and precisely.（不错，语言很清晰。例子很恰当的，好象水门事件最开始就是由华盛顿邮报的两名记者揭露的）

Admittedly, transparent media scrutiny can help improve the whole process of democracy.（觉得照以下的思路用转折开头比让步好） In some sense, it means not all government proceedings should totally be broadcasted for commons, especially confidential ones. As we know, the responsibility of government is not only to gain comprehension and support from commons, but also to maintain social balance（stability） and protect nation. Thus, some confidential proceedings or information should be kept secret, such as the policy toward military affairs, diplomatic affairs, and other significant policies, which are related to the destiny of this country. If all government policies and decisions were reported by media coverage transparently, it would definitely result in unnecessary anxious（anxiety） and fright(panic更常见) among commons. Withholding crucial information and confidential proceedings is also one of the most dispensable and significant duties of government.

In sum, we can conclude that the media report introduced into government proceedings and policies has propelled the democracy forward. However, government should necessarily withhold some confidential information and crucial proceedings to avoid more nationwide scare and maintain the balance of social development.（这一句还应该要提到向媒体保密，因为题目湖要还是说电视的影响）

第一篇限时写的很不错了哈，思维逻辑都清晰，语言方面用词还是比较贴切，就是有的地方句子需要简洁一些。
谢谢你对我文章的修改，大家一起加油哈！

ZEALPALADINUID: 192560

The government proceedings should be operated aroundunder? a relative transparent circumstance, which can provide ordinary people more detailed information and procedure of government work. Society will benefit a lot by comprehending and supporting为什么要用这个词？ the tendency of government policy from citizens. As a matter of fact, convenient television and advanced network improve the availability televising or broadcasting government proceedings to public.感觉开头有点长，最后一句不知道要表达什么

In democratic society, the transparence of government proceedings and policies is one of the most important degreesstandards? to evaluate the scale of democracyscale?. Meanwhile, the task of media scrutiny is to try its best to provide information objectively and precisely, fulfilling its promise by creating relative objective media atmosphere. Undoubtedly, the assembly of government proceedings and media report will help commons understand the issues that government concerned and the tendency of its policies. And the process of transparent government policy can also improve the comprehension between citizens and government. There are more opportunities for commons to express their attitudes toward government policies by watching these proceedings on television. Immediate reflect and attitude of commons feedback governments to help them adjust or amend their decisions and policies. For instance, the presidency of America, provide a typical example of reporting government proceedings transparently and objectively. Candidates interpret their tendencies of operation and fulfilling obligations to supporters by media report, which can give voters more direct impression about their future leaders. In one hand, the competition between candidates can base on the principle of equality by objective media coverage. On the other hand, voters learn more about those candidates by watching live debate and statement on television and make more precise decision to support their favorite one with excellent leader mettle by contrast with others. 这段中心是媒介对政府的公开是民主的标准，但中间一段论述的却是可以加强人们与政府的沟通，总统竞选的例子笼统了点，其实小布什竞选期间不是给媒介曝光好多事情吗，不是可以让人们更好的认识他们的领导吗？

In addition, media scrutiny toward government proceedings supervises the whole process as well. According to？ its transparency of reporting, it can avoid corruption and unequal competition among those proceedings by commons' concerns. Furthermore, society can use media tools to evaluate government's works and fulfilled tasks, forcing them to carry on their responsibilities and obligations on behalf of the public unconditionally. Scandals will be soon uncovered by media coverage, which will restrict government's power beyond a relative legal area. For instance, the Watergate scandal in America, 1970s, reported by television and radio, directly forcing the president Nixon to claim abdication by taking charge of the whole event. And ex-president Bill Clinton had to admit his fault of sexual scandals during his career of president, because of transparent television report and media scrutiny. Apparently, transparent report does not only provide detailed information about government proceedings, but also give commons opportunity to recognize their government and leaders more objectively and precisely.水门事件的例子老了点，今天新闻中刚报了水门事件泄密者现身了，如果能把时事新闻放进写作应该可以增加说服力，另transparent report是否可以这样用，“公正的报道”不是更好吗

Admittedly, transparent media scrutiny can help improve the whole process of democracy. In some sense, it means not all government proceedings should totally be broadcasted for commons, especially confidential ones. As we know, the responsibility of government is not only to gain comprehension and support from commons, but also to maintain social balance and protect nation. Thus, some confidential proceedings or information should be kept secret, such as the policy toward military affairs, diplomatic affairs, and other significant policies, which are related to the destiny of this country. If all government policies and decisions were reported by media coverage transparently, it would definitely result in unnecessary anxious and fright among commons. Withholding crucial information and confidential proceedings is also one of the most dispensable and significant duties of government.

In sum, we can conclude that the media report introduced into government proceedings and policies has propelled the democracy forward. However, government should necessarily withhold some confidential information and crucial proceedings to avoid more nationwide scare and maintain the balance of social development.

总体感觉文章结构清晰，论证及语言方面都有提高的空间。

songwei1765UID: 202658

由于在限时，语言方面没怎么想过就写上了，效果不是太好。
谢谢~~

conquer0824UID: 2102638

The government proceedings should be operated around a relative transparent circumstance, which can provide ordinary people more detailed information and（换成on能否更好一些？） procedure of government work. Society will benefit a lot by comprehending and supporting the tendency of government policy from citizens. （这句话什么意思？怎么偶看不懂？from是什么意思？）As a matter of fact, convenient television and advanced network improve the availability of televising or broadcasting government proceedings to public.（观点不明确，最后一句本来应该给出观点的，但好像你也只是陈述了题目的前提，即电视和网络便利了人们观看政府事务，而没有明确给出你的观点）

In democratic （为什么强调民主社会？任何一个社会都是如此）society, the transparence of government proceedings and policies is one of the most important degrees to evaluate the scale of democracy. Meanwhile, the task of media scrutiny is to try its best to provide information objectively and precisely, fulfilling its promise by creating relative objective media atmosphere. Undoubtedly, the assembly of government proceedings and media report will help commons understand the issues that government concerned and the tendency of its policies. And the process of transparent government policy can also improve the comprehension between citizens and government. There are more opportunities for commons to express their attitudes toward government policies by watching these proceedings on television. (有点逻辑错误,何以见得观看政府事务就有更多的机会表达自己的思想?)Immediate reflect and attitude of commons feedback governments to help them adjust or amend their decisions and policies. For instance, the presidency of America, provide a typical example of reporting government proceedings transparently and objectively. Candidates interpret their tendencies of operation and fulfilling obligations to supporters by media report, which can give voters more direct impression about their future leaders. In one hand, the competition between candidates can base on the principle of equality by objective media coverage. On the other hand, voters learn more about those candidates by watching live debate and statement on television and make more precise decision to support their favorite one with excellent leader mettle by contrast with others.

In addition, media scrutiny toward government proceedings supervises the whole process as well. According to its transparency of reporting, it can avoid corruption and unequal competition among those proceedings by commons' concerns. Furthermore, society can use media tools to evaluate government's works and fulfilled tasks, forcing them to carry on their responsibilities and obligations on behalf of the public unconditionally. Scandals will be soon uncovered by media coverage, which will restrict government's power beyond a relative legal area. For instance, the Watergate scandal in America, 1970s, reported by television and radio, directly forced the president Nixon to claim abdication by taking charge of the whole event. And ex-president Bill Clinton had to admit his fault of sexual scandals during his career of president, because of transparent television report and media scrutiny. Apparently, transparent report does not only provide detailed information about government proceedings, but also give commons opportunity to recognize their government and leaders more objectively and precisely.

Admittedly, transparent media scrutiny can help improve the whole process of democracy. In some sense, it means not all government proceedings should totally be broadcasted to commons, especially confidential ones. As we know, the responsibility of government is not only to gain comprehension and support from commons, but also to maintain social balance and protect nation. Thus, some confidential proceedings or information should be kept secret, such as the policy toward military affairs, diplomatic affairs, and other significant policies, which are related to the destiny of this country. If all government policies and decisions were reported by media coverage transparently, it would definitely result in unnecessary anxierty and fright among commons. Withholding crucial information and confidential proceedings is also one of the most dispensable and significant duties of government.

In sum, we can conclude that the media report introduced into government proceedings and policies has propelled the democracy forward. However, government should necessarily withhold some confidential information and crucial proceedings to avoid more nationwide scare and maintain the balance of social development.

楼主写的好强的,思路比较清晰,限时能写这么好很不错了阿,还要努力向楼主学习,本来说拍practicality那篇的,不过思路还是与楼主不同,就拍了这片了.

songwei1765UID: 202658

恩，谢过~~
思路不同也可谈谈你的观点，有空也可以帮忙看看的~~
一限时了就有点慌，第一段写的时候就是有点混乱，语句都没怎么组织过~~

songwei1765UID: 202658

归类~~~

eileen8172UID: 202314

搂主好强！
我怎么第一篇就是写不出来啊？

fys18UID: 2112304

楼主所说的，四月：2次之类的作文，是6g已考过的作文，在10g中就不考了，已经删除了的吧？