Issue136 泡面8.14作业，这次没限时，狂扯一通

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Issue136, The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
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In modern society, we can often hear that many people complain about the life is too hard for there are no choice for them. Is the fact is that case? My answer is clearly "NO". In most of the circumstance during our lives, there are many choices for us. I will discuss this issue as follows.

Firstly, I would take the education for example to illustrate my point. As we know, there are many kinds of subjects in school. When we enter universities, we can choose the fields which most attract us as our majors, such as physics, maths, literacy, arts and so on so forth. How can one say there is no choice? We may make the decision according to our interests; we also can choose the majors according to the potential incoming after graduating from school. Moreover, even after we have selected the major for ourselves, there are still many subjects available for us to select. Universities provide a lot of course for the students coming from every major. One can choose some course in arts even one's major is maths. Also, one can select computer technology even one's major is literacy. In a word, in the field of education there are many choices available for us.

Another area may also prove my point is the area of science and technology research. Along with the rapid development of science and technology in today's word, the influence of modern scientific and technological results has played a quite important role in our life. We have many choices when confronted with these results. A representative case illustrates this point is the discovery of nuclear energy. We could use the vast energy in atoms to produce weapons which could bring great damage to our society even destroy the whole human world. On the other hand, we can also make best use of the energy hidden in the atoms to benefit us, such as for medical use to cure certain diseases and a solution to the crisis energy. We can see that in the research area, there are also many choices waiting for to choose.

Additionally, there are also many choices for us to choose in our daily life. An apt illustration of this point involving in finding a job. When we enter the job market to pursuit a job, there are many kinds of works there waiting for us to try. What we should to do is to find one that can mostly agree with our ability and demand. On the other hand, we may need to learn some new knowledge to improve ourselves to reach the necessary standard of that job. If one could not find a job for himself, the most possible reason maybe him laziness and unwillingness to improve himself.

Finally, some detractors may argue that there are still many circumstances that we have no choice. In order to prove their opinion, one’s parents and one’s country may become their evidences. When it comes to such cases, I admit that we really have no choice. The objective circumstance around us cannot be chosen, but we should also bear in mind that human being are the most brilliant kind of animal in the world. Therefore, we can use our powerful wisdom to solve the problems facing us in our objective world. For this case, we could say that the situation of no choice is quite rare.

In summary, in most parts of our lives, choices are always existing around us. The situation of no choice is quite rare. What we should do is to consider all the possible choices and select the best one to develop ourselves and our society into a better situation.

[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-8-16 at 11:35 ]

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Issue136, The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
------正文------
In modern society, we can often hear that many people complain about the life is too hard for there are no choice for them. Is the fact is that case? My answer is clearly "NO". In most of the circumstances during our lives, there are many choices for us. I will discuss this issue as follows.

Firstly, I would take the education for example to illustrate my point. As we know, there are many kinds of subjects in school. When we enter universities, we can choose (the fields which most attract us as our ) 我觉得直接用 our favorite 是不是好些majors, such as physics, maths, literacy, arts and so on so forth两个删掉一个. How can one say there is no choice? We may make the decision according to our interests; we also can choose the majors according to the potential incoming after graduating from school. Moreover, even after we have selected the major for ourselves, there are still many subjects available for us to select. Universities provide a lot of courses for the students coming from every major. One can choose some courses in arts even (one's major is maths) she or he majors in mathematics . Also, one can select computer technology even one's major is literacy. In a word, in the field of education there are many choices available for us. 这边应该补充下，为什么人们还是complain about having no choice

Another area thatmay also prove my point is the area of science and technology research. Along with the rapid development of science and technology in today's word, the influence of modern scientific and technological results has played a quite important role in our lifelives. We have many choices when confrontedconfronting with these results. A representative case illustrates illustrating this point is the discovery of nuclear energy. We could use the vast energy in atoms to produce weapons which could bring great damage to our society even destroy the whole human world. On the other hand, we can also make best use of the energy hidden in the atoms to benefit us, such as for medical use to cure certain diseases and  serve asa solution to the crisis energy. We can see that in the research area, there are also many choices waiting for to choose.

Additionally, there are also many choices for us to choose in our daily life. An apt illustration of this point involving in finding a job. When we enter the job market to pursuit a job, there are many kinds of works there waiting for us to try. What we should to do is to find one that can mostly agree with our ability and demand. On the other hand, we may need to learn some new knowledge to improve ourselves to reach the necessary standard of that job. If one could not find a job for himself, the most possible reason maybe him laziness and unwillingness to improve himself.

Finally, some detractors may argue that there are still many circumstances that we have no choice. In order to prove their opinion, 是要说人不能选择自己的父母和国籍吧?one’s parents and one’s country may become their evidences. When it comes to such cases, I admit that we really have no choice. The objective circumstance around us cannot be chosen, but we should also bear in mind that human being are the most brilliant kind of animals in the world. Therefore, we can use our powerful wisdom to solve the problems facing us in our objective world. For this case, we could say that the situation of no choice is quite rare.这一段应该放在首段，表示一个让步；或者在这一段开头来个过度的句子，说明确实存在没有选择的时候，因为你的中心还是要放在缺乏选择的情况很少~~~

In summary, in most parts of our lives, choices are always existing around us. The situation of no choice is quite rare. What we should do is to consider all the possible choices and select the best one to develop ourselves and our society into a better situation.这句话很象我小时侯在写作文，结尾总是为社会主义现代化建设而努力~~~anyway, 多看看范文，和精华里的好东东，我们起步都是一样的~~
Hold, never give up~~~~
全文还是有表达出自己的想法，但是给人感觉论证不够紧凑，而且一直举例子，缺乏说明~~