ISSUE197 觉得可以润色的空间还很大~~泡面组8.21作业~~

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Issue197  第3篇
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：45分29秒     532 words
从2005年7月21日20时11分到2005年7月21日20时45分
------题目------
The material progress and well-being of one country are necessarily connected to the material progress and well-being of all other countries.
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During the process of globalization, the world is becoming smaller and smaller for the rapid development of the technology and economy, and the whole world is becoming a global visage, in which all nations are connected to each other. Some of the results of the connection are beneficial, while the others are detrimental to other countries.

Firstly, as David Ricardo, one of the most important Classical Political Economics, brilliantly illustrated ( and I paraphrase): It is the most economic and effective way of producing that every country produces those commodities which use the resources primarily, then exchange with other countries for the products. As a result, when a further technological improvement or a new resource finding occurs in one country, every country will benefit from the more sufficient supply and the lower price of the products. Thus the international trading are more and more prosperous year by year. More and more foreign products can be purchased in the domestic market, for example, the American CD, Japanese cars, and Italian costumes and so on. Our lives are becoming more and more polychrome, for staying in home, we can listen to the BBC and VOA and viewing the foreign programs. Additionally, we can buy hamburger and Coca Cola in China. At the first glance, these are all merits which the globalization brings to us, but the careful consideration reveals some potential determent under the surface.

Firstly, the development of one country does not necessarily mean other countries' welfare, oppositely, which may cause the declination of the others. For example, the development of the colony country is based on the plunder of the satellite countries. It is by plundering, the colony country acquire the abundant money and materials to development their country. What is more, the international trading may cause some countries relatively poor than ever before. Because of the high development of the countries which the raw material is imported, their development rate is more rapid than not-so-developed countries. In this case, the more they exported their raw materials, the needier they are.

Secondly, as the diffusion of the foreign culture products, the culture of one's own may be threaten. Now the films of Hollywood are popular all over the world, and one is easy to find the signal of Mc-Donald and KFC, what would you think about at the sight of it? It means that the American culture is invading into our own. More and more youths are fond of American pictures, and they are prone to accept so-called American products, like Jeans, Hip-Hop and so forth. This is a dangerous semaphore to a nation.

Last but not the least, the technology breakthrough of one country may threat another. An obvious example is nuclear weapon. Once a country creates the nuclear weapon, it means that this country is possible to ruin the whole world in a short time which may cause the whole human world in danger. And the popular use of the cars may cause accerate the population of the whole environment.

In sum, the material development of one country is connected to other which may cause the declination of the other countries for the unbalanced development.

PS：想要运用国际贸易的相对优势理论，想不起来该怎么表达；还有历史有哪些个殖民国家，怎么靠掠夺积攒财富的~~~写完查一查~~希望把这篇文章写好~~~

weiweiseuUID: 2121077

首先给点意见：看到两个firstly 虽然知道你是先赞同 然后把反对意见分了三层 但看起来好别扭
殖民国家就多了 England从印度和中国 通过鸦片走私 Spain Portugal 从非洲国家掠夺黄金
可不可以加上这个论点：发达国家利用不发达国家的原料和劳动力剥削了这些国家 加重其贫穷

硬柿子UID: 204138

看到两个firstly 虽然知道你是先赞同 然后把反对意见分了三层 但看起来好别扭

呵呵，两个firstly, 是笔误了~~改了帖出来~~

硬柿子UID: 204138

Issue197  第3篇
------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：45分29秒     532 words
从2005年7月21日20时11分到2005年7月21日20时45分
------题目------
The material progress and well-being of one country are necessarily connected to the material progress and well-being of all other countries.
------正文------
During the process of globalization, the world is becoming smaller and smaller for the rapid development of the technology and economy, and the whole world is becoming a global village, in which all nations are connected to each other. Some of the results of the connection are beneficial, while the others are detrimental to other countries.

As David Ricardo, one of the most important Classical Political Economics, brilliantly illustrated ( and I paraphrase): It is the most economic and effective way of producing that every country produces those commodities which use the resources primarily, then exchange with other countries for the products. As a result, when a further technological improvement or a new resource finding occurs in one country, every country will benefit from the more sufficient supply and the lower price of the products. Thus the international trading are more and more prosperous year by year. More and more foreign products can be purchased in the domestic market, for example, the American CD, Japanese cars, and Italian costumes and so on. Our lives are becoming more and more polychrome, for staying in home, we can listen to the BBC and VOA and viewing the foreign programs. Additionally, we can buy hamburger and Coca Cola in China. At the first glance, these are all merits which the globalization brings to us, but the careful consideration reveals some potential determent under the surface.

Firstly, the development of one country does not necessarily mean other countries' welfare, oppositely, which may cause the declination of the others. For example, the development of the colony country is based on the plunder of the satellite countries. It is by plundering, the colony country acquire the abundant money and materials to development their country. What is more, the international trading may cause some countries relatively poor than ever before. Because of the high development of the countries which the raw material is imported, their development rate is more rapid than not-so-developed countries. In this case, the more they exported their raw materials, the needier they are.

Secondly, as the diffusion of the foreign culture products, the culture of one's own may be threaten. Now the films of Hollywood are popular all over the world, and one is easy to find the signal of Mc-Donald and KFC, what would you think about at the sight of it? It means that the American culture is invading into our own. More and more youths are fond of American pictures, and they are prone to accept so-called American products, like Jeans, Hip-Hop and so forth. This is a dangerous semaphore to a nation.

Last but not the least, the technology breakthrough of one country may threat another. An obvious example is nuclear weapon. Once a country creates the nuclear weapon, it means that this country is possible to ruin the whole world in a short time which may cause the whole human world in danger. And the popular use of the cars may accelerate the pollution of the whole environment.

In sum, the material development of one country is connected to other which may cause the declination of the other countries for the unbalanced development.