issue150 Fantasy 8.27作业(+提纲)

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Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.

提纲:
1.不同意
2.旅游的意义是对困难的征服感和满足感,而非仅仅是观光
3.有的风景地不是自然观,人文文化风景照片和录象是不能显示的
4.当然,电视和电脑给旅游业带来一定的影响
5.总结

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With the occurrence of television and worldwide computer connections, famous interests and places that attract thousands of people to visit, could be fully viewed easily and more conveniently. Consequently, some asserted that tourism would lost its popularity in the near future. As far as I am concerned, I strongly disagree the statement above.

To begin with, the spirits of traveling is more than seeing unforgettable sights, which could not obtained from pictures or imagines provided by electronic screen. This is the essential point for my propensity. True indeed, with the help of advanced technology many beautiful sights are vivid on television or computers, some of them are even more significant than one can see by himself. However, tourism could never be as simple as just seeing the scene. In my point of view, it involves the fulfillment of conquest, the process of overcoming difficulties, and the spirit of never give up. Take the great wall for example. Chairman Mao, the great politician, artist, poet, and first president in P. R. China ( People's Republic of China) once remarked and I paraphrased: "A man could hardly be a real man unless he comes to the Great Wall." However marvelous it is, untill you come there by yourself not will you feel its attraction. Because before you climb to the most significant place of the Great Wall, exhaustion, thirst, hunger and a great number of obstacles would appear in front of you. It is rarely a single task to see the place whereas the satisfaction of accomplishment weighing more in the purpose of visiting. This is the reason why tourism would not be replaced by the connected computers and other media.

Another subtle factor is many tour sites fascinated to travelers largely because of the local culture rather than sights. In some parts of the world, great places are something like the ancient temples, the mysterious pyramids, and the antic palaces that sometimes involve most of the traditional cultures in that place. In some degree, they seldom own much art but culture values.(这几个简单例子支持我的这个论点合适么?) As a result, pictures and films, no matter how attractive they are, could barely present what people longing for. For example, people rushed for Xizhang, a undeveloped district in China in the recent years to experience the atmosphere of FO JIAO within a severe environment in deserts.  Hardly may you find anything interesting or beautiful only from the electronic screens. It is the invisible culture, rather than natural sights, bring the mystery to that ground.

Admittedly, developed technologies contribute a lot in the field of tourism. They helped to cut down the high costs for traveling especially for those who are not afford to make a journey, and provide nicer views from certain altitudes where ordinary people could not easily get to. By the assistance of those helpful tools, people nowadays can travel around world without a further step outside the house.

Considering all the points made above, the joy of travel could never be degenerated and replaced by other forms of traveling, however advanced technologies in making vivid pictures are.

[ Last edited by flealda on 2005-8-27 at 22:43 ]

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With the occurrence of television and worldwide computer connections, famous interests and places that attract thousands of people to visit, could be fully viewed easily and more conveniently. Consequently, some asserted that tourism would lost its popularity in the near future. As far as I am concerned, I strongly disagree the statement above.让的有点多

To begin with, the spirits of traveling is more than seeing unforgettable sights, which could not obtained from pictures or imagines provided by electronic screen. This is the essential point for my propensity. True indeed, with the help of advanced technology many beautiful sights are vivid on television or computers, some of them are even more significant than one can see by himself. However, tourism could never be as simple as just seeing the scene. In my point of view, it involves the fulfillment of conquest, the process of overcoming difficulties, and the spirit of never give up. Take the great wall for example. Chairman Mao, the great politician, artist, literator(poet), and first president in P. R. China ( People Republic of China) once remarked and I paraphrased: "A man could hardly be a real man unless he come to the Great Wall.好" However marvelous it is, untill you come there by yourself not will you feel its attraction. Because before you climb to the most significant place of the Great Wall, exhaustion, thirst, hunger and a great number of obstacles would appear in front of you. It is rarely a single task to see the place whereas the satisfaction of accomplishment weighing more in the purpose of visiting. This is the reason why tourism would not be replaced by the connected computers and other media.

Another subtle factor is many tour sites fascinated to travelers largely because of the local culture rather than sights. In some parts of the world, great places are something like the ancient temples, the mysterious paromids (pyramids), and the antic palaces that sometimes involve most of the traditional cultures in that place.与事实相反,且放在这里没什么用啊 In some degree, they seldom own much art but culture values. As a result, pictures and films, no matter how attractive they are, could barely present what people longing for. For example, people rushed for Xizhang, a undeveloped district in China in the recent years to experience the atmosphere of FO JIAO 解释to etswithin a severe environment in deserts.  Hardly may you find anything interesting or beautiful only from the electronic screens. It is the invisible culture, rather than natural sights, bring the mystery to that ground. 不如用麦加胜地把

Admittedly, developed technologies contribute a lot in the field of tourism. They helped to cut down the high costs for traveling especially for those who are cannot afford to make a journey, and provide nicer views from certain altitudes where ordinary people could not easily get to. By the assistance of those helpful tools, people nowadays can travel around world without a further step outside the house. Therefore, technologies do have some benefits to some extend

Considering all the points made above, the joy of travel could never be degenerated and replaced by other forms of traveling, howeverno matter how advanced technologies in making vivid pictures are.

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还有快让forever兄让我人队把,

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我的第一段怎么改好呢??老是写不出一个漂亮的开头
我给你发了信息,你去看看:)

[ Last edited by flealda on 2005-8-27 at 22:03 ]

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------正文------
With the occurrence of television and worldwide computer connections, famous interests and places that attract thousands of people to visit, could be fully viewed easily and more conveniently. Consequently, some asserted that tourism would lost its popularity in the near future. As far as I am concerned, I strongly disagree the statement above.

To begin with, the spirits of traveling is more than seeing unforgettable sights, which could not obtained from pictures or imagines provided by electronic screen. This is the essential point for my propensity. True indeed, with the help of advanced technology many beautiful sights are vivid on television or computers, some of them are even more significant than one can see by himself. However, tourism could never be as simple as just seeing the scene. In my point of view, it involves the fulfillment of conquest, the process of overcoming difficulties, and the spirit of never give up. Take the great wall for example. Chairman Mao, the great politician, artist, literator(poet), and first president in P. R. China ( People Republic of China) once remarked and I paraphrased: "A man could hardly be a real man unless he come to the Great Wall." However marvelous it is, (这个however感觉不大对吧，是不是How marvelous it is! ??)untill (until) you come there by yourself not(这个倒装看不懂，不知道是不是这样) will you feel its attraction. Because （这个because 就不要了！）before you climb to the most significant place of the Great Wall, exhaustion, thirst, hunger and a great number of obstacles would appear in front of you.（People inevitably confront unimaginable obstacles and difficulties such as thirst, hunger and exhaustion. 我在孙远作文上看到，其实老美还是喜欢看主动句的，不知道真的假的。 PS: 不就爬个长城嘛，不至于这样吧？感觉像长征了，呵呵，反正可能ETS的应该大多没来过中国。） It is rarely a single task to see the place whereas the satisfaction of accomplishment weighing more in the purpose of visiting. This is the reason why tourism would not be replaced by the connected computers and other media.

Another subtle factor is many tour sites fascinated to travelers largely because of the local culture rather than sights. In some parts of the world, great places are something like the ancient temples, the mysterious paromids (pyramids), and the antic palaces that sometimes involve most of the traditional cultures in that place. In some degree, they seldom own much art but culture values. （这句话不大好，艺术价值的话也是体现在你所说的那些古建筑里的，There are abundant cultural conventions paralleled with profound art values in those famous sites.）As a result, pictures and films, no matter how attractive they are, could barely present what people longing for. For example, people rushed for Xizhang,  (西藏的话是Tibet) a (an) undeveloped district in China in the recent years to experience the atmosphere of FO JIAO within a severe environment in deserts.  Hardly may you find anything interesting or beautiful only from the electronic screens. It is the invisible culture, rather than natural sights, bring the mystery to that ground.

这段的例子是不错的，讲文化之类的东西，是很难从网络上彻底了解的

Admittedly, developed technologies contribute a lot in the field of tourism. They helped to cut down the high costs for traveling especially for those who are not afford to make a journey, and provide nicer views from certain altitudes where ordinary people could not easily get to. By the assistance of those helpful tools, people nowadays can travel around (appreciate, 你这个暗喻有点。。。，我一开始还以为可以有机器猫的任意门，哈哈) world without a further step outside the house.  还可以充实一下，其实我写的是，现在人们工作忙，没时间，*^^*

Considering all the points made above, the joy of travel could never be degenerated and replaced by other forms of traveling, however (是不是应该是no matter how?啊，好像以前也看到过) advanced technologies in making vivid pictures are.

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