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tomatopotatoUID：129913

ssue87（2005年2-9月总频26次）
【题目】In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.  
【翻译】在调查咨询领域，新手比专家更可能有重大发现
【类别】社会类
【 提纲】1 新手更容易打破一些潜在的假设
             2 新手的活力更高
            3，但是新手缺乏经验
A. Beginners have intense curiosity about the unknown and great courage to try new things, while experienced experts tend to be more conservative.
B. Furthermore, beginners are highly motivated and enthusiastic people who are eager to establish their career and fame.
break the established boundaries and long-standing assumption,
Newton later life maybe obstacle to the development of
【正文】
16:48 到 17:40 465 words
The statement asserts that in any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries. Somebody would support it in that the beginner always has the courage and vigor to break the some rules would otherwise exist in any field. While others would enthusiastic bolster the authority of the experts. As to my experience and personality, I would prefer the recommendation that the beginner would make more contribution to the fields than the experts do.
To begin with, the fact that the beginners are not familiar with the existing methods would prevent them from be confined with the boundaries and some long-existing assumption, both which experts would take for granted. These boundaries and assumption constitute the main obstacles in the road on which one theory evolves into the real truth.
Take the development of physics for example, before Einstein the authorities in the physics are all content with the status quo because they thought that the main architecture of physics is completed by the Classic Newton Theory and that all their work is the ornamentation and decoration of the structure. However Einstein, beginner at that time, pointed out that the Classic Newton Theory had lethal flaw in that it cannot apply to the microscope. Then he figured out a brand new Relative Theory which was a landmark in the development of physics. Of the fact I cannot think of better illustration to support my position.
What is more, the pressure on the beginners is always harder than on the experts. The novice who is lack of reverence and society status will be more assiduous as a whole. Any experts who have obtained the great achievement and thus have earned their decent position which always marked by various titles such as professors or academicians will, more or less, lose impetus in their heats. These phenomenons begin to be discernible in the academic society, which provoke the strong assault from the public to the academic caste. On the other hand, beginners who are at the bottom of academic society are eager to climb up the social ladder and consequently devote much more part of their time to pursuit their goals. Thus it bears little surprise that the first authors of many papers are graduated students or other associate professors.
However, as is well known to all, every coin has two sides. We cannot lose the sight of fact that the beginner is not without disadvantages. Lacking the experience would be the Achilles' heel of the beginners. But may be it is this defect that encourages them to make progress regardless of any rules.
Taking into all the factors into account, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.

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jingjingtousUID：2164820

ssue87（2005年2-9月总频26次）
【题目】In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.  
【翻译】在调查咨询领域，新手比专家更可能有重大发现
【类别】社会类
【 提纲】1 新手更容易打破一些潜在的假设
             2 新手的活力更高
            3，但是新手缺乏经验
A. Beginners have intense curiosity about the unknown and great courage to try new things, while experienced experts tend to be more conservative.
B. Furthermore, beginners are highly motivated and enthusiastic people who are eager to establish their career and fame.
break the established boundaries and long-standing assumption,
Newton later life maybe obstacle to the development of
【正文】
16:48 到 17:40 465 words
The statement asserts that in any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.这个开头有点象argument可以适当变换一下 Somebody would support it in that the beginner always has the courage and vigor to break the some去掉一个 rules which would otherwise我不知道这个词放这里是干吗用的？ exist in any field. While others would enthusiastic enthusiastically bolster the authority of the experts. As to my experience and personality, I would prefer the recommendation这里好像没有吧？claim that the beginner would make more contribution to the fields than the experts do. 这个开头有点模板化，不过给出了你的观点

To begin with, the fact that the beginners are not familiar with the existing methods would prevent them from be being confined with the boundaries and some long-existing assumption, both which experts would take for granted. These boundaries and assumption constitute the main obstacles in the road on which one theory evolves into the real truth.论证的很好Take the development of physics for example, before Einstein the authorities in the physics are all content with the status quo because they thought that the main architecture of physics is completed by the Classic Newton Theory and that all their work is the ornamentation and decoration of the structure. However Einstein, a beginner at that time, pointed out that the Classic Newton Theory had lethal flaw in that it cannot apply to the microscope显微镜?个人认为牛顿经典物理学定律局限性在于不能解决一些新的科学现象。. Then he figured out a brand new Relative Theory which was a landmark in the development of physics. Of the fact I cannot think of better illustration to support my position.这段论证的很好，例子很有力！

What is more, the pressure on the beginners is always harder than on the experts. The novice who is lack of reverence and society status will be more assiduous as a whole. Any experts who have obtained the great achievement and thus have earned their decent position which always marked by various titles such as professors or academicians will, more or less, lose impetus in their heats不知道？. These phenomenons phenomena begin to be discernible in the academic society field, which provoke the strong assault from the public to the academic caste. On the other hand,按道理前面要有on the one hand的  beginners who are at the bottom of academic society are eager to climb up the social ladder and consequently devote much more part of their time to pursuit their goals.我觉得应该就此展开，这点论证的很棒！ Thus it bears little surprise that the first authors of many papers are graduated students or other associate professors. 真的是这样的吗？我觉得一些重要的带有研究成果的论文的first author 教授是不会留给其它人的

However, as is well known to all, every coin has two sides. We cannot lose the sight of fact overlook that the beginner is not without disadvantages. Lacking the experience would be the Achilles' heel好词！ of the beginners. But may be it is this defect that encourages them to make progress regardless of any rules. 这段的论述可以在详细些
Taking into all the factors into account, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries结尾感觉有些匆忙！

这篇文章写的很好，第二三段论述的很棒，只是第四段没有展开。加油！

robertleeUID：2163580

The statement asserts that in any field of inquiry, (the beginner is more likely than the expert) beginners are more likely than experts to make important discoveries. Somebody would support it in that the beginner always has the courage and vigor to break the  rules would otherwise exist in any field, while others would enthusiastically bolster the authority of (the) experts. As to my experience and personality, I would prefer the recommendation that the beginner would make more contribution to the fields than the experts do.
To begin with, the fact that the beginners are not familiar with the existing methods would prevent them from be confined with the boundaries and some long-existing assumption, both which experts would take for granted. These boundaries and assumption constitute the main obstacles in the road on which one theory evolves into the real truth.
Take the development of physics for example. Before Einstein the authorities in the physics are all content with the status quo because they thought that the main architecture of physics had been completed by Newtonian Mechanics and that all their work was the ornamentation and decoration of the structure. However, Einstein, beginner at that time, pointed out that Newtonian Mechanics had lethal flaw in that it cannot apply to the micro world. Then he figured out a brand new Theory of Relativity which is a landmark in the development of physics. (Of the fact I cannot think of better illustration to support my position.这句话好像不是太明白，改成I think there is no better evidence to illustrate my position than this. 是否好些？个人见解)What is more, the pressure on (the) beginners is always harder than on (the) experts. (The) Novice who (is) lacks reverence and society status will be more assiduous as a whole. Any experts who have obtained (the) great achievement and thus have earned their decent position which always marked by various titles such as professors or academicians will, more or less, lose impetus in their heats. These phenomena begin to be discernible in the academic society, which provoke the strong assault from the public to the academic caste. On the other hand, beginners who are at the bottom of academic society are more eager to climb up the social ladder and consequently devote much more (part) of their time to achieve their goals. Thus it bears little surprise that the first authors of many papers are graduated students or other associate professors.
However, as well known to all, every coin has two sides. We cannot lose the sight of fact that the beginner is not without disadvantages. Lacking the experience would be the Achilles' heel of the beginners. But may be it is this defect that encourages them to make progress regardless of any rules.
Taking into all the factors into account, we can safely achieve the conclusion that beginners are more likely than experts to make important discoveries.
结尾太简单了，最好还能把自己的论证式的几个分论点简要叙述一下，其次注意下语言的运用，有好几个地方不太对，尤其是“the”用得太滥，新手通病阿，几个名词的翻译也不对，可能也有人这么用，但绝对是中国人，阅卷人猜不出就麻烦了。二楼的盖了很多，我主要在语言上给你改了一下，还不错的，努力啊！

tomatopotatoUID：129913

谢谢两位大牛的辛勤劳动，太感谢了