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147. "Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
提纲：反对
1．首先，承认在某些方面传统和现代化之间可能是不相容的。比如一些陈旧的传统观念就与现代思想格格不入
2．但是我们必须认识到从很多领域可以看出现代化实际上是建立在传统之上的。比如艺术的发展，语言的发展等都是从传统上面慢慢发展来的
3．事实上，传统和现代的许多方面是相融合，没有必要非要选那个或者选这个。 比如在生活方式上，又如一个城市的建设好多也是古今结合


Do we have to choose between tradition and modernization? Although the speaker assumes so in that he/she deem that those two are incompatible, I basically disagree with this opinion for in most cases tradition can coexist with modernization actually except in some particular aspects.

I concede that in certain cases modernization exclude tradition particularly in people’s attitudes and views toward our deeds. For example, in ancient China, people usually used to hold the opinion that women need not learn and be knowledgeable for their whole responsibility is to serve their husbands and to give birth to the offspring. This kind of traditional thoughts has been criticized and rejected in modern society because now people especially women have realized that they own the same right as men, to read or to work outside. From this case we can see that some tradition must be supplanted by modernization and they bear no resemblance with each other in some respects.

Nevertheless, although tradition should yeild to modernization in some aspects and sometime they are mutually exclusive, modernization, in most cases, is actually derived from and relies on tradition. This is especially true when it comes to arts and language. Consider a piece of arts, people usually appreciate it from the aesthetic facets as ancient people such as symmetry, balance, and harmony. It is based on these timeless aspects that modern artists begin to develop their own modern styles or some other novel aspects. Another convincing example of tradition and modernization is our language. Modern language is built upon linguistic tradition, derived from Greek and Latin language. Can we simply reject traditional language and develop modern one now? Of course we can not, otherwise we will have nothing to say.

In reality tradition can be consistent with modernization, and the latter can embrace the former. Hence there is no need for us to choose between them. An apt example is our life style. Nowadays, people live under pressure and in a fast pace 请教一个“快节奏的生活”是这么说吗？in the noisy city while on their vacation most of them choose to stay in those quiet places and live at leisure which is actually a traditional life style. This illustrates the point that modernization does not completely reject tradition and modern people also appreciate those traditions. Further, take Beijing for example, this city displays a wonderful marriage of tradition and modernization. Those ancient buildings, like the Forbidden City and the Great Wall, are totally harmonious with the modern skyscrapers.

On balance, some tradition will be rejected and supplanted by modern thoughts and objects, whereas in most cases those two are compatible with each other.


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147. "Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
提纲：反对
1．首先，承认在某些方面传统和现代化之间可能是不相容的。比如一些陈旧的传统观念就与现代思想格格不入
2．但是我们必须认识到从很多领域可以看出现代化实际上是建立在传统之上的。这个观点和你不谋而合比如艺术的发展，语言的发展等都是从传统上面慢慢发展来的
3．事实上，传统和现代的许多方面是相融合，没有必要非要选那个或者选这个。 比如在生活方式上，又如一个城市的建设好多也是古今结合我写的是在教育方面


Do we have to choose between tradition and modernization? Although the speaker assumes so in that he/she deem deems that those two are incompatible, I basically disagree with this opinion for in most cases tradition can coexist呵呵，咱俩要被判雷同了 with modernization actually except in some particular aspects.

I concede that in certain cases modernization exclude tradition particularly in people’s attitudes and views toward our deeds. For example, in ancient China, people usually used to hold the opinion that women need not learn and be knowledgeable for their whole responsibility is to serve their husbands and to give birth to the offspring. This kind of traditional thoughts has been criticized and rejected in modern society because now people especially women have realized that they own the same right as men, to read or to work outside. From this case we can see that some traditions must be supplantedgood by modernization and they bear no resemblance with each other in some respects.按我的理解，你认为现代化的思想改变人们的传统观念，这个层次比我想的深，我只想到在文化方面

Nevertheless, although tradition should yeild to modernization in some aspects and sometime they are mutually exclusive, modernization, in most cases, is actually derived from and relies on tradition. This is especially true when it comes to arts and language. Consider a piece of arts, people usually appreciate it from the aesthetic facets as ancient people such as symmetry, balance, and harmony.这句在一篇范文上看到过，经典！ It is based on these timeless aspects that modern artists begin to develop their own modern styles or some other novel aspects. Another convincing example of tradition and modernization is our language. Modern language is built upon linguistic tradition, derived from Greek and Latin language. Can we simply reject traditional language and develop modern one now? Of course we can not, otherwise we will have nothing to say.嘿，你这两个方面：艺术和言语，和范文很相似哦，尽量避免雷同吧

In reality tradition can be consistent with modernization, and the latter can embrace the former. Hence there is no need for us to choose between them. An apt example is our life style. Nowadays, people live under pressure and in a fast pace 请教一个“快节奏的生活”是这么说吗？rapid rhythmin the noisy city while on their vacation most of them choose to stay in those quiet places and live at leisure which is actually a traditional life style. This illustrates the point thatthis point illustrates that modernization does not completely reject tradition and modern people also appreciate those traditions. Further, take Beijing for example, this city displays a wonderful marriage of tradition and modernization. Those ancient buildings, like the Forbidden City and the Great Wall, are totally harmonious with the modern skyscrapers.觉得应该把重点放在后面那个例子

On balance, some tradition will be rejected and supplanted by modern thoughts and objects, whereas in most cases those two are compatible with each other.

每个人的角度不同，所以看法不同，你的理解层次比我深好多，我只是理解了在物质领域现代化和传统的关系，any，这篇文章论证到位！^_^