issue226 BAXIA组作业koala~拍拍

wwiliamUID: 2185333

When asked whether the problems they encounter are increasingly complex and challenging than those faced by their predecessors, some people hold the agreement while others claim that the problems are much fewer than before. On balance, I hold my reservation.

There is little doubt that advanced technology based on the increased knowledge and experience brings a great amount of convenience to the human beings, which can be inferred from the efficiency of work. Take a housewife's housework for instance. In the past time, when a housewife wanted to cook some soup, it might take her about more than three hours to have it finished when she had to take care of the fire, and if they wanted to do some housework such as washing and drying the clothes, it might spend much time as well. On the other hand, the housewives today may reap the benefits of the equipments with high technology, and surely, it does not cost as much time as before to do housework and is more efficient. Housewives can use the electric cooker to cook the soup by just clicking the button which shows open, what is more, instead of using hands to wash, a washer can help clean the clothes, and a dryer can help the clothes dry in a short time.
例子有代表性，不过分析的有点长，个人观点

Nonetheless, as some people suggest, it is true that several problems take on its more complexity and challenge than that of the problems confronted by the predecessors. For one thing, with the speedy development of the science, more phenomena are discovered, one of which is the discovery of the structure of the genome. And ensuing is a great deal of more complicated and challenging problems like the thought of cloning the human beings which may clash to the conventional ideas and the moral sense. Compared with the problems in the aspect of biology nowadays, people in the old times might be happier, for there was no need worrying about encountering a person with the same appearance. For another, owing to it that the knowledge which the students should acquire is expanding, and the ideas of the youngsters are growing to mature within a shorter time than before, they face a majority of pressure, and problems come out that the number of students who commit suicide or are addicted to drugs is increasing. All the problems above turn out to be superior to the complexity and challenge of the problems that the forefathers might confront before.

However, every problem can be looked into both in two sides, it is probably difficult to tell whether it is totally complicated and challenging or not. Albeit the problems about clone are complex, this technology can help heal patients, and though the problems that the students bear much more pressure and may commit crimes, some turn to be more thoughtful.

To sum up, generally speaking, some problems are easier while some more complicated, it seems this might be a natural law and we cannot draw an assertion that problems appearing nowadays are more complex and challenging or not than before. Maybe, what we can do is thinking how we can make the life more colorful and comfortable.

观点新颖，赞

michelle1021UID: 195011

1.有些问题是变的简单了~如家庭妇女的家务
2.有些问题更加复杂了，如基因组的DECIPHER导致克隆问题的提出（这个例子是不是有点偏),学生压力的增加导致自杀和吸毒数量的增加
3,问题都有两面性，很难说是否都很复杂或者简单。

When asked whether the problems they encounter are increasingly complex and challenging than those faced by their predecessors, some people hold the agreement while others claim that the problems are much fewer than before. On balance, I hold my reservation.我觉得你的开头很好哦，赞一下

There is little doubt that advanced technology based on the increased knowledge and experience brings a great amount of convenience to the human beings, which can be inferred from the efficiency of work. Take a housewife's housework for instance. In the past time, when a housewife wanted to cook some soup, it might take her about more than three hours to have it finished when she had to take care of the fire, and if they wanted to do some housework such as washing and drying the clothes, it might spend much time as well. On the other hand, the housewives today may reap the benefits of the equipments with high technology, and surely, it does not cost as much time as before to do housework and is more efficient. Housewives can use the electric cooker to cook the soup by just clicking the button which shows open, what is more, instead of using hands to wash, a washer can help clean the clothes, and a dryer can help the clothes dry in a short time.例子不错，但我觉得描述的太仔细了。可以简单描述一下然后再写另一个例子哦

Nonetheless, as some people suggest, it is true that several problems take on its more complexity and challenge than that of the problems confronted by the predecessors. For one thing, with the speedy development of the science, more phenomena are discovered, one of which is the discovery of the structure of the genome. And ensuing is a great deal of more complicated and challenging problems like the thought of cloning the human beings which may clash to the conventional ideas and the moral sense. Compared with the problems in the aspect of biology nowadays, people in the old times might be happier, for there was no need worrying我觉得这里用to worry好一点 about encountering a person with the same appearance. For another, owing to it that the knowledge which the students should acquire is expanding, and the ideas of the youngsters are growing to mature within a shorter time than before, they face a majority of pressure, and problems come out that the number of students who commit suicide or are addicted to drugs is increasing. All the problems above turn out to be superior to the complexity and challenge of the problems that the forefathers might confront before.

However, every problem can be looked into both in two sides, it is probably difficult to tell whether it is totally complicated and challenging or not. Albeit the problems about clone are complex, this technology can help heal patients, and though the problems that the students bear much more pressure and may commit crimes, some turn to be more thoughtful.可以再具体举些例子

To sum up, generally speaking, some problems are easier while some more complicated, it seems this might be a natural law and we cannot draw an assertion that problems appearing nowadays are more complex and challenging or not than before. Maybe, what we can do is thinking how we can make the life more colorful and comfortable.

我觉得还蛮不错的，就是第三段的字数特别突出

dudujasperUID: 2180289

TOPIC: ISSUE226 - "People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience."
1.有些问题是变的简单了~如家庭妇女的家务
2.有些问题更加复杂了，如基因组的DECIPHER导致克隆问题的提出（这个例子是不是有点偏),学生压力的增加导致自杀和吸毒数量的增加
3,问题都有两面性，很难说是否都很复杂或者简单。

WORD：471，争取过500哦~

When asked whether the problems they encounter are increasingly complex and challenging than those faced by their predecessors, some people hold the agreement while others claim that the problems are much fewer than before. On balance, I hold my reservation.

There is little doubt that advanced technology based on the increased knowledge and experience brings a great amount of convenience to the human beings, which can be inferred from the efficiency of work. Take a housewife's housework for instance. In the past time, when a housewife wanted to cook some soup, it might take her about more than three hours to have it finished when she had to take care of the fire, and if they wanted to do some housework such as washing and drying the clothes, it might spend much time as well. On the other hand, the housewives today may reap the benefits of the equipments with high technology, and surely, it does not cost as much time as before to do housework and is more efficient. Housewives can use the electric cooker to cook the soup by just clicking the button which shows open, what is more, instead of using hands to wash, a washer can help clean the clothes, and a dryer can help the clothes dry in a short time.
正面论述，有一小点建议就是可以先给出例子，再评论，以例子结尾的话总感觉少点什么呵呵，说明了现代技术使有的事情变简单了。
Nonetheless, as some people suggest, it is true that several problems take on its more complexity and challenge than that of the problems confronted by the predecessors. For one thing, with the speedy development of the science, more phenomena are discovered, one of which is the discovery of the structure of the genome. And ensuing is a great deal of more complicated and challenging problems like the thought of cloning the human beings which may clash to the conventional ideas and the moral sense. Compared with the problems in the aspect of biology nowadays, people in the old times might be happier, for there was no need worrying about encountering a person with the same appearance. For another, owing to it that the knowledge which the students should acquire is expanding, and the ideas of the youngsters are growing to mature within a shorter time than before, they face a majority of pressure, and problems come out that the number of students who commit suicide or are addicted to drugs is increasing. All the problems above turn out to be superior to the complexity and challenge of the problems that the forefathers might confront before.
反面，好长的一段哦~例子不偏，这段论证的不错，说明了现在有的问题确实变的更复杂
However, every problem can be looked into both in two sides, it is probably difficult to tell whether it is totally complicated and challenging or not. Albeit the problems about clone are complex, this technology can help heal patients, and though the problems that the students bear much more pressure and may commit crimes, some turn to be more thoughtful.
也算反吧~指出了不能用更简单或更复杂来判断现代的问题


To sum up, generally speaking, some problems are easier while some more complicated, it seems this might be a natural law and we cannot draw an assertion that problems appearing nowadays are more complex and challenging or not than before. Maybe, what we can do is thinking how we can make the life more colorful and comfortable.


小旋子进步好大哦西西，我也要努力哦，加油哦
语言：可以了
思路：正反反，在这里想说说自己的思路当个参考哦
论点：论者的观点太绝对
反：随着科学技术和社会的进步，我们现在确实是遇到了比先人更多更复杂的问题。例如克窿人所引发出的道德伦理上的问题和核武器开发所引起的战争，这些都使我们所面临的问题更具有时代的挑战性
正：但是，这些问题的出现都是随着人类能力和社会科学的进步而出现的。每个时代都有每个时代自己面临的问题，其复杂性是相对的。例如过去新科学的出现对宗教的统治也是一个巨大的挑战，然而这个问题在今天看来就不是那么复杂了。因此很难作这样的比较：我们所遇到的问题比前人的更为复杂。还可以举小的例子，刚刚家庭主妇的例子可以放这里
合：因此，随着我们社会的不段发展，这些问题也会有相应的解决办法，不光是人类知识和经验的增加，人类的宽容心，同情心等在对于解决恐怖主义，种族歧视遗留下的问题的时候也有很重要的作用
论证：最后一段可以再加长点，不会有偏题的嫌疑

[ 本帖最后由 dudujasper 于 2006-2-18 21:29 编辑 ]

freud5027UID: 2165870

When asked whether the problems they encounter are increasingly complex and challenging than those faced by their predecessors, some people hold the agreement while others claim that the problems are much fewer than before<这句是套话，要单刀直入>. On balance, I hold my reservation.

There is little doubt that advanced technology based on the increased knowledge and experience brings a great amount of convenience to the human beings, which can be inferred from the efficiency of work. Take a housewife's housework for instance. In the past time, when a housewife wanted to cook some soup, it might take her about more than three hours to have it finished when she had to take care of the fire, and if they wanted to do some housework such as washing and drying the clothes, it might spend much time as well. On the other hand, the housewives today may reap the benefits of the equipments with high technology, and surely, it does not cost as much time as before to do housework and is more efficient. Housewives can use the electric cooker to cook the soup by just clicking the button which shows open, what is more, instead of using hands to wash, a washer can help clean the clothes, and a dryer can help the clothes dry in a short time. <可能我观念比较陈旧，我不觉得家务在哪个时代可以称得上complex或challenging，尽管对于某些个人而言可能是如此>

Nonetheless, as some people suggest, it is true that several problems take on its more complexity and challenge than that of the problems confronted by the predecessors. For one thing, with the speedy development of the science, more phenomena are discovered, one of which is the discovery of the structure of the genome. And ensuing is a great deal of more complicated and challenging problems like the thought of cloning the human beings which may clash to the conventional ideas and the moral sense. Compared with the problems in the aspect of biology nowadays, people in the old times might be happier, for there was no need worrying about encountering a person with the same appearance. For another, owing to it that the knowledge which the students should acquire is expanding, and the ideas of the youngsters are growing to mature within a shorter time than before, they face a majority of pressure, and problems come out that the number of students who commit suicide or are addicted to drugs is increasing. All the problems above turn out to be superior to the complexity and challenge of the problems that the forefathers might confront before.

However, every problem can be looked into both in two sides, it is probably difficult to tell whether it is totally complicated and challenging or not. Albeit the problems about clone are complex, this technology can help heal patients, and though the problems that the students bear much more pressure and may commit crimes, some turn to be more thoughtful.<感觉这一段观点又转了，是为了取折衷？但感觉稍简单了点。>

To sum up, generally speaking, some problems are easier while some more complicated, it seems this might be a natural law and we cannot draw an assertion that problems appearing nowadays are more complex and challenging or not than before. Maybe, what we can do is thinking how we can make the life more colorful and comfortable.

天才之梦UID: 2159126

TOPIC: ISSUE226 - "People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience."
1.有些问题是变的简单了~如家庭妇女的家务
2.有些问题更加复杂了，如基因组的DECIPHER导致克隆问题的提出（这个例子是不是有点偏),学生压力的增加导致自杀和吸毒数量的增加
3,问题都有两面性，很难说是否都很复杂或者简单。

When asked whether the problems they encounter are increasingly complex and challenging than those faced by their predecessors, some people hold the agreement while others claim that the problems are much fewer than before. On balance, I hold my reservation.

There is little doubt that advanced technology based on the increased knowledge and experience brings a great amount of convenience to the human beings, which can be inferred from the efficiency of work. Take a housewife's housework for instance. In the past time, when a housewife wanted to cook some soup, it might take her about more than three hours to have it finished when she had to take care of the fire, and if they wanted to do some housework such as washing and drying the clothes, it might spend much time as well. On the other hand, the housewives today may reap the benefits of the equipments with high technology, and surely, it does not cost as much time as before to do housework and is more efficient. Housewives can use the electric cooker to cook the soup by just clicking the button which shows open, what is more, instead of using hands to wash, a washer can help clean the clothes, and a dryer can help the clothes dry in a short time. [一个大段的例子。。。]

Nonetheless, as some people suggest, it is true that several problems take on its more complexity and challenge than that of the problems confronted by the predecessors. For one thing, with the speedy development of the science, more phenomena are discovered, one of which is the discovery of the structure of the genome. And ensuing is a great deal of more complicated and challenging problems like the thought of cloning the human beings which may clash to the conventional ideas and the moral sense. Compared with the problems in the aspect of biology nowadays, people in the old times might be happier, for there was no need worrying about encountering a person with the same appearance. For another, owing to it that the knowledge which the students should acquire is expanding, and the ideas of the youngsters are growing to mature within a shorter time than before, they face a majority of pressure, and problems come out that the number of students who commit suicide or are addicted to drugs is increasing. All the problems above turn out to be superior to the complexity and challenge of the problems that the forefathers might confront before.

However, every problem can be looked into both in two sides [这个表达有点奇怪], it is probably difficult to tell whether it is totally complicated and challenging or not. Albeit the problems about clone are complex, this technology can help heal patients, and though the problems that the students bear much more pressure and may commit crimes, some turn to be more thoughtful.

To sum up, generally speaking, some problems are easier while some more complicated, it seems this might be a natural law and we cannot draw an assertion that problems appearing nowadays are more complex and challenging or not than before. Maybe, what we can do is thinking how we can make the life more colorful and comfortable.
[总体上来看，第二段的例子有些太长的感觉，第三段写的还可以，扣题上不错，比以前有进步]