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as it came to us that a company has announced taht it wishes to build a large factory near our
community,some people who think it will improve our community's economy and salary feel much pleasant
.but it does not sound a good news to me,for i support that it could bring pollution and a lot of noise.
   as we know a factory has to dessert some waste,and many factories in our country do not tafe care
of the lizzards according to the environmental standard the govenment made.so a large factory near our
community would surely do harm to our environment no matter whether it would reach the standard or not.
then it may be not as suitable as before for us to live,and what is more,it could cause diseases to
people in the community.
   besides that,the community is a space for people to live quietly and comfortablely.if a new factory
is built near our community,there will be much noise made by it which would make it impossible for people
to have a good sleep.that would lower people's effiency of learning and working,even affect their health
as some researches show.
   however,someone argues that a factory would help develop the community's economy.after the factory is
built,the facilities responding to the factory,such as shops,restrants,and entertainment facilities,etc.
would be built to serve the workers and the community.then,more jobs will be available,and people could
get jobs at the factory,they could earn more and ther will be less people who do not get a job.
   but,although it has some advantages,i do not believe it could outweigh man's health and the quality of
living.and when we are to make the choice,we should put people the first and make sure the community is
good to habit.

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