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EarthwormzyyUID: 125828

Topic 7 How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
Apr. 19

It goes without saying that movies and television have a great impact on people’s behavior. They transmit people the knowledge, keep public well-informed, affect personal view toward the life and world, satisfy some people’s need for unknown realm. They are well severed society at all sides.

Movies and television as one of the most popular media, they are responsible for transmitting the knowledge and information to society. They give us a broader window on the world. For example, seeing various news programs may allow us reach the world where we want to travel. It enriches us the knowledge local customs, the development condition and diversity of cultures and races of our planet.

Movies and television make possible for us to reexamine our view toward the life and world. A touched movie and TV story series may be always rooted our mind with the unforgettable character image. Such kind of character often intentionally shaped into a hero or a perfect “person”. Sometimes the character’s behavior and thoughts will affect the shape of our moral and behavior standard which is advocated by the society. Watching live music concert or an art exhibit on TV notably reduces our stress and make us get a relaxation. It also helps us to develop our own aesthetic criteria and enable us to identify which kind of art forms is our favorite.

Television is a good channel for us to explore the unknown realm. If someone is genuinely interested in scientific fiction, mystery animal word, outer space etc.For this condition, television and movies documentary program provides a vivid description and explanation of the field. This is crucial for someone to make sure that what type of knowledge fields he will pursue in the future.

Of course, watching too much movies and television can be bad for us. It make us less active. Sometimes, we prefer staying at home to visit neighbors, do necessary outdoor activities. Furthermore, some unhealthy and violent programs cause some people imitate the character on the screen committing crime, even suicide.

From what has been discussed above, although television and movies can influence our behavior adversely, I still believe that they affect our .behavior in positive ways. Depending on what kinds of programs we watch, movies and television are indispensable for us to take what we want to do favorably.
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EarthwormzyyUID: 125828

找人修改过的.


Topic 7 How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
Apr. 19

It goes without saying that movies and television have a great impact on people’s behavior. They are a source of knowledge and information and can be used to affect personal view toward the life and world (This paragraph works well. But you can combine the functions of movies and television into two categories: knowledge/information and influence.)

As perhaps the most popular media, movies and television give us a broad window on the world. News programs allow us to learn the events all over the world without us being there. Movies and television can provide us the knowledge of local customs, the development condition and diversity of cultures and races of our planet. Many well-made documentary films and television programs provide vivid descriptions and explanations of mystery animal world and outer space and allow us to explore the unknown realm.

Movies and television can also be used as a powerful tool to influence people’s thinking and behavior. A touching movie and TV story series may be always rooted our mind with the unforgettable character image. Such kind of character is often intentionally used to shape a hero or a perfect “person”. Sometimes the character’s behavior and thoughts can be used to create socially desirable moral and behavior standard. Watching live music concert or an art exhibit on TV notably reduces our stress and makes us get a relaxation. It also helps us to develop our own aesthetic criteria and enables us to identify which kind of art forms is our favorite.


The impact of movies and television can be negative. Watching too much movies and television makes us less physically active. Some unhealthy and violent programs cause some people imitate the character on the screen committing crime, even suicide. But such negative impact can be contained by advocating high-quality programs and discouraging excessive watching.
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susan8940UID: 160449

语言还是非常流畅老到的。
可是楼主是不是有些偏题了？
文章讲的是movies or television的两个advantage和一个
disadvantage吧，how 和behavior都得突出一下，楼主觉得呢？

我的，请楼主指教 :)
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