issue11 Ares站队作文第四次作业

普洱茶UID: 2220388

As the persist social problem increasing nowadays, people are trying out to find the more effective ways to solve them. To support all nations help the development of a global university designed to engage the students who have a knowledge of solving persistent problem is a good idea and show us many predict benefits. However, it is also exist the limitation in several aspects.
One compelling advantage of a global university has to do with the fact that it establishes a small stimulation of the whole world environment in terms of the aspect of the humanities and society. It can help students prepare better for their entering into the real world wild socails environment in the future days. The fact supports this favor is that the global university is the place where collects almost all the kinds culture factors of the world together. And it is whom the faculty and students in a global university bring the different culture factors together according the daily study, the communication, and the various campaigns organized by school organizations. Course the man grow up in different social environment will appear differences in personalities, customs, hobbies, the way they see the world, the attitude they choose to face items, all of these differences is the alive tool and medium of the display of different culture not like the boring types in the book., and this situation makes an active setting for people to get know the different style of living in the real life easily. So the global university actually became a small stimulation of the world different culture, it short the distance of different country, and let the people in the global university get in touch with the different society culture efficient.
Another compelling advantage of a global university is it is actually a education organization. And the purpose of education is to educate the students and let the students become the people the society need. That also is why not saying support a global company or global army or global but a global university. Every university has a special style of education of it own in order to product a stable kind of graduators, that is also why people emphasize the graduators from famous university, it is just like a brand of commercial way. Therefore, a global university can build a special style of teaching so that modal the students become the person with special ability.
As every one see, the persist social problems from different countries and different culture. For one social problem, there were be lots of versions of solutions of the problem, one culture background will give one solution. But there is possible most of the way of solutions are too extreme because of the solution come from only one culture background will just fit that kind of culture, and maybe the way fit one kind of culture if fit the problem best. So if there is a global university, the experts of persist social problems in the global university can study the different solutions with the students come from the suitable social background first, and find a disciplinarian of the problem, then give out the most effective way of solution of the social problems, and also can make some common regulations of solving problems, making a solution of the problem be accepted by wild range of the world.
Nevertheless, though the global university will bring many conveniences of solving the social problems, it also exist some inevitable problems of it own at the same time. The global university must have the most various people than any other university. Those people come form different area and different culture must have the different way of living, so when culture strike will be everywhere, and the possibility of conflict will be higher than any other common university. Especially the global university is designed to engage the students to solve the social persisted problems, it is like a suggestion of conflict sometimes. Ant that the sensible problem like religion also will be a complicate problem for global university. In order to solve the contradiction the university will spend so many times and money.   
To sum up, global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world’s most persistent social problems is a valuable method to improve our society by solve the social problem efficiently, it suffer a handful fruitful resources of solutions. However we must pay attention the problems of the global university of its own, to make a effort of solve the problems of its own, only if the university have a peaceful environment inside, it can benefit the solving social persist problems most.

garyknightUID: 2227971

As the persistent social problem increasing nowadays, people are trying out to find the more effective ways to solve them. To support all nations help the development of a global university designed to engage the students who have a knowledge of solving persistent problem is a good idea and show us many predict (prescient) benefits. However, it also exist the limitation in several aspects.
One compelling advantage of a global university has to do with the fact that it establishes a small stimulation of the whole world environment in terms of the aspect of the humanities and society. It can help students prepare better for their entering into the real world wild socails (?) environment in the future days. The fact supports (supporting) this favor is that the global university is the place where (it) collects almost all the kinds culture factors of the world together. And it is whom the faculty and students in a global university bring the different culture factors together according the daily study, the communication, and the various campaigns organized by school organizations. Course (which course) the man (who) grow up in different social environment will appear differences in personalities, customs, hobbies, the way they see the world, the attitude they choose to face items, all of these differences is the alive tool and medium of the display of different culture not like the boring types in the book., and this situation makes an active setting for people to get know the different style of living in the real life easily. So the global university actually became a small stimulation of the world different culture, it short (shortens) the distance of different country (countries), and let the people in the global university get in touch with the different society culture efficient (efficiently).
Another compelling advantage of a global university is it is actually a education organization. And the purpose of education is to educate the students and let the students become the people the society need. That also is why not saying support a global company or global army or global but a global university. Every university has a special style of education of it own in order to product a stable kind of graduators, that is also why people emphasize the graduators from famous university, it is just like a brand of commercial way. Therefore, a global university can build a special style of teaching so that modal the students become the person with special ability.（第二、三段如果能有例证，会更加充分一些，不过论点仍然是比较有力的）
As everyone see, the persist social problems (are resulted) from different countries and different culture. For one social problem, there were lots of versions of solutions of the problem, one culture background will give one solution. But there (it) is possible (that) most of the way of solutions are too extreme because of the solution come from only one culture background will just fit that kind of culture, and maybe the way fit one kind of culture if fit the problem best （要表达的大概意思我清楚了，但是句子好像还存在一些问题）. So if there is a global university, the experts of persist social problems in the global university can study the different solutions with the students come from the suitable social background first, and find a disciplinarian of the problem, then give out the most effective way of solution of the social problems, and also can make some common regulations of solving problems, making a solution of the problem be accepted by wild range of the world.
Nevertheless, though the global university will bring many conveniences of solving the social problems, it also exist some inevitable problems of it (its) own at the same time. The global university must have the most various people than any other university. Those people come form different area and different culture must have the different way of living, so when (去掉when) culture strike will be (换一个谓语，be后面不能直接跟副词) everywhere, and the possibility of conflict will be higher than any other common university. Especially the global university is designed to engage the students to solve the social persisted problems, it is like a suggestion of conflict sometimes. And that the sensible problem like religion also will be a complicate problem for global university. In order to solve the contradiction the university will spend so many times and money. （这一段的后半部分如果能单独成段，同时加以充分的例证，会更有说服力）
To sum up, global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world’s most persistent social problems is a valuable method to improve our society by solve the social problem efficiently, it suffer (from) a handful fruitful resources of solutions. However we must pay attention the problems of the global university of its own, to make a effort of solve the problems of its own, only if the university have a peaceful environment inside, it can benefit the solving social persist problems most.

前半部分层次和论证都很清楚，在谈到全球性大学的局限性时，篇幅稍显不足。笔误依旧较多，要仔细一些了哈~~