Issue36 [Smile－c组]第二次作业

枫晰UID: 2123661

Who can judge the greatness of individuals? The speakers assert that the individual's greatness only can be decided by those belong to latter time, not by their contemporaries. However, the speaker is too hasty to conclude that. In the long history of human beings, the situation from case to case.

The chief contention with the speaker is related with the social condition in human history .As what we can see today, the situation that the confusion and blindness of a time often lead to the neglect the greatness, who have to be affirmed only by the later  time. As an apt illustration, the heliocentric theory established by Copernicus, the greatest astronomer in 1500s ，which seems as a common sense today, asserting that the earth rotates daily on its axis and revolved yearly around the sun was suppressed nearly one century, and one of the theory's supporter Galileo was compelling to abjure and was sentenced to life imprisonment. It was later 17th century that the theory accepted as most common on conception of the university. In contrast, in an open-up and enlightened social the greatness of be identified soon. For example, Einstein establishing the relativity theory was recognized as the greatest physical scientist in the 19th immediately just because the social encourage the scientific research. So the darkness or enlightened often result in how long a giant is decided.

Admittedly the greatness concerned with the social condition; however when it comes to the achievement which can be tested directly by its face value the greatness immediately recognized, and then later confirmed. For example, The Roosevelt's New Deal for its innovation measures relax the effects of the Great Depressions not long after taken, and thus the Roosevelt was recognized the greatest. Mark Twain became a best-selling author and household name even during his lift time. The Mozart's greatness was shown as a gifted child and last during all his life time. you may reject that by the example of Van Gogh, while just because he create his great paintings in the last ten years of his life, with few attentions, and if he wouldn't died so tragic by the influence of his brother's death and live longer, his famous would be sure to predict in his life time.
There are still some other aspects relevant to the issue under discussion, which unfortunately, I have no time to explore in detail. But the above-discussed reasons will justify my conclusion that the speaker overlooks many great individuals recognized great during their own life time and the different condition makes the great recognized different.

[ 本帖最后由 枫晰 于 2006-7-25 11:50 编辑 ]

monica98UID: 2124796

Who can judge the greatness of individuals? The speakers assert that the individual's greatness only can be decided by those belong to latter time, not by their contemporaries. However, the speaker is too hasty to conclude that. In the long history of human beings, the situation (varies) from case to case.

The chief contention with the speaker is related with the social condition in human history .As what we can see today, the situation that the confusion and blindness of a time often lead to the neglect the greatness, (语法问题）who（谁？） have to be affirmed only by the later  time. As an apt illustration, the heliocentric theory established by Copernicus, the greatest astronomer in 1500s ，which seems as a common sense today, asserting that the earth rotates daily on its axis and revolved yearly around the sun was suppressed nearly one century, and one of the theory's supporter Galileo was compelling to abjure and was sentenced to life imprisonment. It was later 17th century that the theory accepted as most common on conception of the university. In contrast, in an open-up and enlightened social the greatness of individual be identified soon. For example, Einstein establishing the relativity theory was recognized as the greatest physical scientist in the 19th immediately just because the social encourage the scientific research. So the darkness or enlightened often result in how long a giant is decided.

Admittedly the greatness concerned with the social condition主题句不贴切，后面论述的是开明社会; however when it comes to the achievement which can be tested directly by its face value the greatness immediately recognized, and then later confirmed. For example, The Roosevelt's New Deal for its innovation measures relax the effects of the Great Depressions not long after taken, and thus the Roosevelt was recognized the greatest. Mark Twain became a best-selling author and household name even during his lift time. The Mozart's greatness was shown as a gifted child and last during all his life time. you may reject that by the example of Van Gogh, while just because he create his great paintings in the last ten years of his life, with few attentions, and if he wouldn't died so tragic by the influence of his brother's death and live longer, his famous would be sure to predict in his life time(语法错误较多）
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There are still some other aspects relevant to the issue under discussion, which unfortunately, I have no time to explore in detail. But the above-discussed reasons will justify my conclusion that the speaker overlooks many great individuals recognized great during their own life time and the different condition makes the great recognized different.

观点很好，不同的社会条件不同的判定。整体结构不清晰，夹杂在一起勒，要不第一段写愚昧社会，第二段写开明社会，但你第二段又举个凡高的郁闷社会的例子。正文第二段有点混乱，也可能我没看懂吧^_^
语法错误较多。

xinxinwUID: 2144273

Who can judge the greatness of individuals? The speakers assert that the individual's greatness only can be decided by those belong to latter time, not by their contemporaries. However, the speaker is too hasty to conclude that. In the long history of human beings, the situation（varies） from case to case.

The chief contention with the speaker is related with the social condition in human history .As what we can see today, the situation that the confusion and blindness of a time often lead to the neglect the greatness, who have to be affirmed only by the later  time. As an apt illustration, the heliocentric theory established by Copernicus, the greatest astronomer in 1500s ，which seems as a common sense today, asserting that the earth rotates daily on its axis and revolved yearly around the sun was suppressed nearly one century, and one of the theory's supporter Galileo was compelling to abjure and was sentenced to life imprisonment. It was later (in）17th century that the theory accepted as most common on conception of the university. In contrast, in an open-up and enlightened social(society) the greatness of be identified soon. For example, Einstein establishing the relativity theory was recognized as the greatest physical scientist in the 19th immediately just because the social encourage the scientific research. So the darkness or enlightened often result in how long a giant is decided.后面的例子跟TS相符么？

Admittedly the greatness concerned with the social condition; however when it comes to the achievement which can be tested directly by its face value the greatness immediately recognized, and then later confirmed语法. For example, The Roosevelt's New Deal for its innovation measures relax the effects of the Great Depressions not long after taken, and thus the Roosevelt was recognized the greatest. Mark Twain became a best-selling author and household name even during his lift time. The Mozart's greatness was shown as a gifted child and last during all his life time. you may reject that by the example of Van Gogh, while just because he create his great paintings in the last ten years of his life, with few attentions, and if he wouldn't died so tragic by the influence of his brother's death and live longer, his famous would be sure to predict in his life time.后一个例子要说明什么？

There are still some other aspects relevant to the issue under discussion, which unfortunately, I have no time to explore in detail这句从哪抄的？惊世骇俗阿！. But the above-discussed reasons will justify my conclusion that the speaker overlooks many great individuals recognized great during their own life time and the different condition makes the great recognized different.

同一段里面的观点要一致。