TWE同主题写作------75, 欢迎指导!

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75. Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


Whether the university should require the students engage in a large amount of subjects or only specialize in one of them is always a controversial issue around the globe. As far as I am concerned, not only in the preparation for academic development, but also in the construction of civilized people may a multi-subject strategy be more appreciable.

To begin with, we need go no further than just considering how the multi-subject strategy affects the students’ academic development positively. It is obvious that, nowadays, most courses are interdependent. Therefore, the broader the knowledge scope a student has, the more competitive he/she would be in the academic field, even in the future work. For instance, if a student major in biology has advanced skills in computer sciences, he/she would be a prospective researcher in the bioinformatics—a newly emerged discipline that has a glorious future. Another case in point is that a management student would gain considerable understanding of his/her subject from the study of psychology. Moreover, it is possible that, provided with more subjects, the students might finally find what interest them the most.

Another advantage of multi-subject education lies in its construction of a group of well-rounded citizens. Virtually, preparation for work is not the only ultimate goal of university education. We may also benefit from the various subjects in the long term in that not only do they broaden our horizon, but also they improve our understanding of the world. For example, with the knowledge of liberal arts, the science students would enjoy more of the literature and fine arts, elevating their aesthetics taste, while the liberal arts students could also appreciate the help of scientific knowledge in the daily life.

Although it is true that specialization has its merits, such as avoidance of the waste of energy and time, and more in-depth study of a subject, its drawbacks outweigh them, especially in the rapidly changing world. As renovations take place in an unprecedented speed in the human history, computers or machines may accomplish what must be achieved by labor only a few months earlier. Without knowledge of other fields, hardly could us adapt to the dizzying changes. What is more, specialization may not compete with multi-subject in the nurture of the ability to learn.

In conclusion, considering the long-term effects both in the academic field and in life, taking classes in several subjects might be a wiser choice for most students than specializing in a certain subject.

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cellophane05UID: 2135343

写的很不错:victory:
几乎改不出什么错误了，
词语、句式恰当，字数又多，如果是限时写的，那真是很好了

提出一点意见，既然最后第二段是部分考虑specialization的好处，并转折到其disadvantages大于好处，不如直接把这一段放到正文的第二段。

本人很弱，如有不当，敬请包涵

Whether the university should require the students engage in a large amount of subjects or only specialize in one of them is always a controversial issue around the globe. As far as I am concerned, not only in the preparation for academic development, but also in the construction of civilized people may a multi-subject strategy be more appreciable.

To begin with, we need go no further than just considering how the multi-subject strategy affects the students’ academic development positively. It is obvious that, nowadays, most courses are interdependent. Therefore, the broader the knowledge scope a student has, the more competitive he/she would be in the academic field, even in the future work. For instance, if a student major in biology has advanced skills in computer sciences, he/she would be a prospective researcher in the bioinformatics—a newly emerged discipline that has a glorious future. Another case in point is that a management student would gain considerable understanding of his/her subject from the study of psychology. Moreover, it is possible that, provided with more subjects, the students might finally find what interests them the most.

Another advantage of multi-subject education lies in its construction of a group of well-rounded citizens. Virtually, preparation for work is not the only ultimate goal of university education. We may also benefit from the various subjects in the long term in that not only do they broaden our horizon, but also they improve our understanding of the world. For example, with the knowledge of liberal arts, the science students would enjoy more of the literature and fine arts, elevating their aesthetics taste, while the liberal arts students could also appreciate the help of scientific knowledge in the daily life.

Although it is true that specialization has its merits, such as avoidance of the waste of energy and time, and more in-depth study of a subject, its drawbacks outweigh them, especially in the rapidly changing world. As renovations take place in an unprecedented speed in the human history, computers or machines may accomplish what must be achieved by labor only a few months earlier. Without knowledge of other fields, hardly could us (we) adapt to the dizzying changes. What is more, specialization may not compete with multi-subject in the nurture of the ability to learn.

In conclusion, considering the long-term effects both in the academic field and in life, taking classes in several subjects might be a wiser choice for most students than specializing in a certain subject.


欢迎对我提出意见
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小药仙UID: 2124304

没有限时...过程还是蛮痛苦的呢.

而且是直接打电子稿.

还有很多不足啊!

Iam13UID: 2116357

我也觉得不错,没大问题了.:)

小药仙UID: 2124304

谢谢版主鼓励!

mayaUID: 199038

我早上刚考完G的作文，对T还不是很熟悉，先试着改改，以后多交流啊：）
75. Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
参考分析:   多个专业好:1 能学到更广泛的知识2 能提高综合能力和素质
或  1 为未来的工作和生活做准备2 让学生结识更多的朋友，了解别人的思维方式3 学习在未来的工作领域中还有很多人生应当感受的东西
一个专业好:  1 对该专业研究得更加深入2 能避免接受不必要使用的知识和信息
这类话题很多,大家也比较熟悉.毕竟大家考托福的目的都是出去读书,所以这样的题目每个人都想到得一些话可写的. 下面的题目都可学校学习有关,可以算做是和No.75一类的题目.建议大家在完成No.75的写作之后,也练习写写这些题目的提纲. 熟悉校园话题的各类表达,积攒一些常见理由,句式.124    125   167   11  141   175

Whether the university should require the students engage in a large amount of subjects or only specialize in one of them is always a controversial issue around the globe. As far as I am concerned, not only in the preparation for academic development, but also in the construction of civilized people may a multi-subject strategy be more appreciable.不错，开头简练且直接点出自己观点

To begin with, we need go no further than just considering how the multi-subject strategy affects the students’ academic development positively. It is obvious that, nowadays, most courses are interdependent. Therefore, the broader the knowledge scope a student has, the more competitive he/she would be in the academic field, even in the future work. For instance, if a student major in biology has advanced skills in computer sciences, he/she would be a prospective researcher in the bioinformatics—a newly emerged discipline that has a glorious future. Another case in point is that a management student would gain considerable understanding of his/her subject from the study of psychology. Moreover, it is possible that, provided with more subjects, the students might finally find what interest换个benefit或satisfy更好点 them the most.我还不是很熟悉T的作文，这里举例子为什么要说if呢？直接陈述事实就好，不然似乎有undermine your point的感觉

Another advantage of multi-subject education lies in its construction of a group of well-rounded citizens. Virtually, preparation for work is not the only ultimate goal of university education. We may also benefit from the various subjects in the long term in that not only do they broaden our knowledgehorizon, but also they improve our understanding of the world. For example, with the knowledge of liberal arts, the science students would enjoy more of the literature and fine arts, elevating their aesthetics taste, while the liberal arts students could also appreciate the help of scientific knowledge in the daily life.

Although it is true that specialization has its merits, such as avoidance of the waste of energy and time, and more in-depth study of a subject, its drawbacks outweigh them, especially in the rapidly changing world. As renovations take place in an unprecedented speed in the human history, computers or machines may accomplish what must be achieved by labor only a few months earlier. Without knowledge of other fields, hardly could us adapt to the dizzying changes. What is more, specialization may not compete with multi-subject in the nurture of the ability to learn.

In conclusion, considering the long-term effects both in the academic field and in life, taking classes in several subjects might be a wiser choice for most students than specializing in a certain subject.
恩，看来T作文挺强调句子的哈。写的很不错！整体思路清晰、语句也多变，相当不错啊。：）呵呵，还是给点建议，就是你介词的应用有点单调，大多数都是of，后面注意一下应该就更加完美了。呵呵，不错，刚转战过来就碰到一篇漂亮文章，我也要好好加油了啊 :)