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victoria_yuUID: 2156410

182. Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Many people have a close relationship with their pets. They treat birds, cats, dogs and many other kinds of pets as members of their families. This is a general phenomenon nowadays. Even it was once been reported that an old British woman left all her possessions to her dog before she died, saying that she had took it as her son. Of course, due to this issue, different people have different opinions, depending on their living habits, living environment, and finally their thoughts. Yet, I don’t stand for this kind of relationship. Now I give my reasons as below.

Admitted that, human beings and all animal share the same earth, and we have the same right to live freely on the earth. I strongly support the opinion that we should live compatibly with all other animals, protecting them but not hurt them. Yet, they are not human beings, and they need their different living environment and living ways. Different animals have different rolls in the world. If we take them as members of our families, that means we are destroying their living modes. That will exert a bad effect on their feelings, and their physical roll in the world.

Moreover, pets have different physical condition from human beings. Some kinds of them are easily to get certain diseases. There is always a high possibility that birds, cats and dogs can infect these diseases to people. It was reported once that in an Australian woman got a terrible hair-falling disease, which resulted no any hair left with her in only half a month. What surprised the doctor was that the reason was her dog. Her dog had a disease which would not do any harm to itself, but it was open to infect human beings, and had this terrible effect on them. Additionally, pets are not the same as human being, they cannot understand us fully. Sometimes they can hurt people, especially their young children. There have been many accidents which may give people good lessons.

Further more, in some cases, being too much close to pets may produce a bad relationship with other members of a family. Some people focus on their pets, caring for them too much, thus less focus on others, their wives, husbands or their children.

In conclusion, we should give a good living condition to pets which are also a part of the world as our human beings, living together with them peacefully, compatibly Yet, human beings and the pets are not the same kind after all, we should not live on the pretty some trail.

kainwilliamUID: 2135234

Many people have a close relationship with their pets. They treat birds, cats, dogs and many other kinds of pets as members of their families. This is a general phenomenon nowadays. Even it was once been reported that an old British woman left all her possessions to her dog before she died(after her death), saying that she had took it(regarded it) as her son（开头段举例是否恰当？可以放在后面的论述里面，very good example）. Of course, due to this issue, different people have different opinions, depending on their living habits, living （去掉living）environment, and finally their thoughts. Yet, I don’t stand for this kind of relationship. Now I give my reasons as below( as follows).

Admitted that, human beings and all animal share the same earth, and we have the same right to live freely on the earth(开头最好写Thesis sentence,表明本段观点，可以加在这一句前面). I strongly support the opinion that we should live compatibly with all other animals, protecting them but not hurt them. Yet, they are not human beings, and they need their different living environment and living ways(they deserve living environment and ways that fit themselves). Different animals have different rolls(role?) in the world. If we take them as members of our families, that means we are destroying their living modes. That will exert a bad effect on their feelings, and their physical roll in the world.

Moreover, pets have different physical condition from human beings. Some kinds of them are easily to get certain diseases. There is always a high possibility that birds, cats and dogs can infect these diseases to people. It was reported once that in an Australian woman got a terrible hair-falling disease, which resulted（resulted in） no any hair left with her in only half a month. What surprised the doctor was that the reason was her dog. Her dog had a disease which would not do any harm to itself, but it was open to infect human beings, and had this terrible effect on them.

（不同论点分段）Additionally, pets are not the same as human being, they cannot understand us fully. Sometimes they can hurt people, especially their young children. There have been many accidents which may give people good lessons.

Furthermore, in some cases, being too much close to pets may produce a bad relationship with other members of a family. Some people focus on their pets, caring for them too much, thus less focus on others, their wives, husbands or their children.

In conclusion, we should give a good living condition to pets which are also a part of the world as our human beings, living together with them peacefully, compatibly Yet, human beings and the pets are not the same kind after all, we should not live on the pretty some trail.

Victoria :)，G考得怎么样？ 时间限制，只详细改了前面几段，但愿有一点点用。

Wish hapiness !

victoria_yuUID: 2156410

我考得不好，1180，底线是够了，考完T就准备申请材料了。你呢？准备申请哪个州？
谢谢你的批改。。。HEHE