ISSUE51 疾速末班车小组

liuwenqi24UID: 2141136

TOPIC: ISSUE51 - "Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."
WORDS: 560          TIME: 1:40:00          DATE: 2006-8-8

提纲:
1、从教育的目的上讨论，兴趣对教育的重要性
2、学校必须努力发现并培养学生的兴趣。
3、但是，鼓励兴趣的培养不等于学校必须根据每个学生的兴趣来进行教育，这既无意义也不现实；一方面老师是有限的，而学生的兴趣是各种各样的。

As the arguer claims that education will be effective when it meets different students' various interests, I agree that there is no doubt that education should  pay more attention on the needs and interests of students, but it is impossible for education to satisfy every students.

A famous saying, from Albert Einstein, is that interest is the best teacher. That is to say, interests play a key role in education, since once owning interest, people will have strong auto motivation to study his favorite things. In my memory, when I was in my high school, literature is the most interesting field for me, while mathematics always cultivated pains. Reasonably, I spent so much time on reading novels, poems and essays, then wonderful compositions can be written by myself, but it was still difficult for me to solve some math problems. Searching in our experiences, every one may find similar examples like this. What is more, the whole society needs people, having different interests, specializing in various fields to meet its desire.  Imaging, if all the persons are fond of few limited subjects, our colorful life will be tough and boring. What is worse, our daily supply might disappear, for no persons have interests of them and no one works on them. Thus interests are of significance not only for individuals but also for the whole society.

Although sometimes we can learn by ourselves, most education is due to educators. Teachers at schools should consider more about students’ interests. For the students who have their own interest, schools can organize activities to satisfy them, and for the students who do not have special interests schools may help them to develop some. For examples, beside necessary courses, optional courses of different interesting subjects can be hold. Or kinds of competitions, such as composition competition, painting competition, piano competition and so on, can also attract students to take part in. During many activities like this, both needs of students wish special interests or not will be met. Moreover, some students with fabulous talent will be avoided ignoring. When teachers discover students who are gifted in some field more suitable education may be developed for them. So schools and teachers should pay more attentions on students' interests.

However, because of the limitation of current education system, it is still impossible to satisfy each of the students at schools. As we all known, a class of about 30 students always owns about 5 teachers who also teach lessons for other classes. Inevitably, they do not have enough time and energy to meet every student’s needs and interests. And for the students in our country, the exam of entrance of university is uniform, which means the most important courses we have should be organized correspondingly. In the other hand, some courses are difficult for students, they are not fond of them, but such courses are necessary and important. In this case, educators need make correct decisions for students. In a word, to satisfy every student is not practical now.

To sum up, interests do play an important role in education, for they provoke students to study with enthusiasm. And as educators, teachers and schools should pay more attentions on these problems, and then develop more suitable and useful activities to meet students' needs. But to satisfy every student is still far from practice, more efforts should be made.

clockappleUID: 183215

感觉有两个问题：
1 第二段举的例子似乎和论点关系不大
2 第三段似乎和题目有些偏离。

以上仅为个人观点，水平有限，见谅

plutolUID: 2219361

感觉issue 写的像argument了...注意观点应该全面一些, 统一的教育难道就一点好处没有么?...应该也捎带提两句吧...
我的issue 51 在https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
帮忙互相看看吧=)

IvyscarUID: 2143754

As the arguer claims that education will be effective when it meets different students' various interests, I agree that there is no doubt that education should  pay more attention on the needs and interests of students, but it is impossible for education to satisfy every students.

A famous saying, from Albert Einstein, is that interest is the best teacher. That is to say, interests play a key role in education, since once owning interest, people will have strong auto motivation to study his favorite things. In my memory, when I was in my high school, literature is the most interesting field for me, while mathematics always cultivated pains. Reasonably(请教这个词的用法, 呵呵,因为我不会用它), I spent so much time on reading novels, poems and essays, then wonderful compositions can be written by myself, but it was still difficult for me to solve some math problems(感觉不是这么说, 应该说数学你因为不喜欢所以就没有象看文学一样的动力去学, 所以就学不好,表达到这层意思才贴切吧). Searching in our experiences, every one may find similar examples like this. What is more, the whole society needs people, having different interests, specializing(specialized) in various fields to meet its desire.  Imaging, if all the persons are fond of few limited subjects, our colorful life will be tough and boring(要表达是本来应该…的生活却变得……, 英文中应该有句型的吧, 你这样写会不会矛盾了). What is worse, our daily supply might disappear, for no persons have interests of them and no one works on them.(这么说对你不利哦, 因为可以这么认为:如果人都仅仅为了自己的兴趣而去工作, 那么也许就会有这样一个必要的职业由于大家都不感兴趣都不去工作了, 这层观点有问题, 就我认为要做好一样事必要条件不是兴趣而是责任心,所以对社会来说要正常运转兴趣不是主要的, 而是公德心和责任感, 而你说的兴趣的重要性应该体现在社会的精英层面上, 兴趣促成某方面天才和精英的诞生吧) Thus interests are of significance not only for individuals but also for the whole society.
Although sometimes we can learn by ourselves, most education is due to educators. Teachers at schools should consider more about students’ interests. For the students who have their own interest, schools can organize activities to satisfy them, and for the students who do not have special interests schools may help them to develop some. For examples（example）, beside necessary courses, optional courses of different interesting subjects can be hold. Or kinds of competitions(总觉得这个OR别扭，干脆两句并起来), such as composition competition, painting competition, piano competition and so on, can also attract students to take part in(目的应该是迎合学生的兴趣, 发展了他们的兴趣,仅仅吸引不够的吧). During many activities like this(these), both needs of students wish special interests or not will be met(不懂). Moreover, some students with fabulous talent will be avoided ignoring(读了下, 觉得应该是BEING IGNORED). When teachers discover students who are gifted in some field more suitable education may be developed for them. So schools and teachers should pay more attentions on students' interests.

However, because of the limitation of current education system, it is still impossible to satisfy each of the students at schools(school). As we all known, a class of about 30 students always owns about 5 teachers who also teach lessons for other classes. (在改改也许更通顺, 要表达的只不过是许多学生共有一个老师)Inevitably, they do not have enough time and(OR) energy to meet every student’s needs and interests. And for the students in our country, the exam of entrance of university is uniform, which means the most important courses we have should be organized correspondingly. In the other hand, some courses are difficult for students, they are not fond of them, but such courses are necessary and important. In this case, educators need make correct decisions for students. In a word, to satisfy every student is not practical now.

To sum up, interests do play an important role in education, for they provoke students to study with enthusiasm. And as educators, teachers and schools should pay more attentions on these problems, and then develop more suitable and useful activities to meet students' needs. But to satisfy every student is still far from practice, more efforts should be made.

我觉得本文主题应该是支持发言人的观点的, 然后指出了发言人观点暂时不可行的局限性,是大正小负. 自我觉得前面两段应该全面肯定, 到第三段才指出缺陷, 可是第一段作者的观点需要再重新思考一下, 个人不是很赞同. 第三段还反驳的不够充分. 总体看来, 作者需要加强的是主题句的提炼, 我感觉主题不够明确, 主题句最好再每段开头点出.
大家都一样缺陷很多, 一起进步, 指出的不对的地方还希望指正. 呵呵加油

jinyuliangyan27UID: 2108979

总体感觉和二楼的差不多，第二段例子说服力不强，似乎换个角度（从education的功用方面）引述要好点。

As the arguer claims that education will be effective when it meets different students' various interests, I agree that there is no doubt that education should  pay more attention on the needs and interests of students, but it is impossible for education to satisfy every students.

A famous saying, from Albert Einstein, is that interest is the best teacher. That is to say, interests play a key role in education, since once owning interest, people will have strong auto motivation to study his favorite things. In my memory, when I was in my high school, literature is the most interesting field for me, while mathematics always cultivated pains. Reasonably, I spent so much time on reading novels, poems and essays, then wonderful compositions can be written by myself, but it was still difficult for me to solve some math problems. Searching in our experiences, every one may find similar examples like this. What is more, the whole society needs people, having different interests, specializing in various fields to meet its desire.  Imaging, if all the persons are fond of few limited subjects, our colorful life（lives） will be tough and boring. What is worse, our daily supply might disappear, for no persons have interests of them and no one works on them. （前面这三句的论述总觉得有点怪，好像有点偏，最后这句有点不知所云）Thus interests are of significance not only for individuals but also for the whole society.（what's more,what's worse似乎在用语上略显重复，推荐moreover，in addition）。

Although sometimes we can learn by ourselves, most education is due to educators. Teachers at schools should consider more about students’ interests. For the students who have their own interest, schools can organize activities to satisfy them, and for the students who do not have special interests schools may help them to develop some. For examples, besides necessary courses, optional courses of different interesting subjects can be hold（held）. Or kinds of competitions, such as composition competition, painting competition, piano competition and so on, can also attract students to take part in. During many activities like this, both needs of students wish special interests or not will be met. Moreover, some students with fabulous talent will be avoided ignoring. When teachers discover students who are gifted in some field more suitable education may be developed for them. So schools and teachers should pay more attentions on students' interests.（这一段感觉不错）

However, because of the limitation of current education system, it is still impossible to satisfy each of the students at schools. As we all known, a class of about 30 students always owns about 5 teachers who also teach lessons for other classes. Inevitably, they do not have enough time and energy to meet every student’s needs and interests. And for the students in our country, the exam of entrance of university is uniform, which means the most important courses we have should be organized correspondingly. In the other hand, some courses are difficult for students, they are not fond of them, but such courses are necessary and important. In this case, educators need make correct decisions for students. In a word, to satisfy every student is not practical now.（nod)

To sum up, interests do play an important role in education, for they provoke students to study with enthusiasm. And as educators, teachers and schools should pay more attentions on these problems, and then develop more suitable and useful activities to meet students' needs. But to satisfy every student is still far from practice, more efforts should be made.

liuwenqi24UID: 2141136

谢谢apple,ivy,plutol和西飞雁同学的修改~!

特别是ivy,改得好仔细哦:)

关于B1最后那几句有关society的问题,我也是觉得写得有点不对劲.但当时想到的目的是深化主题,使得整段论述不仅停留在表面.事实证明,说不清楚,呵呵.逻辑和语言的功力都不够呀~~~

ivy提到的几个问题:
1.resaonably adv.适度地, 相当地
reasonable adj.

VERBS appear, be, seem, sound | consider sth, judge sth, regard sth as, think sth

ADV. eminently, extremely, very | entirely, perfectly, utterly
The police apparently thought this explanation perfectly reasonable.
| fairly, quite | enough
Her request sounded reasonable enough to me. | apparently
所以我这个地方似乎用得不太恰当,用apparently更保险.
2.你提到的兴趣对社会的影响很对.在普遍意义上,确实是责任感为必要条件,如果这个地方改为忽视了兴趣会少很多艺术家科学家比较好:
3.主题句确实有些问题.需要再提炼~~

再次感谢楼上各位同学的修改,辛苦啦:)
马上去改你们的,呵呵