issue131[shining sep]四第二次作业，写好了都毫无头绪，惨不忍睹

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ISSUE131 "The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."[44]
提纲：
1．        根据马克思主义哲学，经济基础决定上层建筑，上层建筑反应经济基础并对其有反作用。艺术，作为上层建筑中的一个重要方面，显然，不仅是体现了由经济基础决定的社会各个方面的表面现象，也揭示了the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society 由于艺术独特的表现方式。
2．        首先，艺术是体现了社会的各个表面现象。中国抗日时候，创作的歌曲，反映了时代的潮流，社会的凸显的趋势，鼓舞人们去奋斗。法国大革命时候创作的马塞曲，同样也是体现了当时法国大革命时
3．        然而，当由于种种原因其社会现象其实并不是社会本身所要传达的IDEA，社会本身所要造成的动力时候，艺术，因其特殊，多样的表现手法，揭示隐藏的。。。。Paintings and music most vividly embay the spirits and characters of a society.伏尔加河上的纤夫 莫奈的日出 By reading literature, we get to know not only the experience of the society, but also the hidden ideas and impulses of a society.
4．总结：或许有的人会说，有的艺术家只是表现个人的情绪，当然我们并不排除这样的可能性，但是，人生活在社会中，都会不可避免的印上社会的痕迹，他们的作品也无法避免的反应社会的现象。艺术之后真实的反应社会，不管是现象还是隐藏的，才能长久的保存，成为艺术。而我们对待艺术，也要珍惜，他们是历史的见证，丢失了他们，人类的历史将会苍白。

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   According to Marxist philosophy, the economic basis decides superstructure, superstructure shows the economic basis and react on it as well. Arts, as an important aspect of superstructure, aim at depicting the feelings and attitudes of individuals in a society. Obviously, they express not only all aspects of society on the surface decided by economic basis, but also reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulse of a society because of the distinct ways for arts to express emotion.

   As known to all, arts express different phenomenon in every fields of the society. A good example is the national anthem of China. This song was composed during the war between Japan and China. At that time, every Chinese were together to fight against Japan’s invasion. The whole nation called for a brave, encouragement, and power of unity. Basing on this special background, a famous Chinese composer Nie Er created the spiritual song and then became the national anthem of China, which was full of encouragement and also spoke out what the society wanted to say.
  
   Nevertheless, when the phenomenon of the society on the surface may not express the society’s idea and impulses inside correctly because of various reasons, arts, whose ways o express emotion are diverse and distinctive, are able to reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society. Paintings and music most vividly embay the spirits and characters of a society. For example, the painting “Xian Fu on the Volga River” by Liebin revealed the poor life of Russian during tsarist period. The “Marseille song” also expressed the impulse of French revolution. In addition, by reading literature, we get to know not only the experience of the society, but also the hidden ideas and impulses of a society. “Tragic world” by Hugo wrote out the true French society at that time using romanticism practices; Ancient Greek myth expressed not only the respect to the God, but also the fear to the unknown fate of the whole society; works by Mark Twain revealed the unequal world of USA at that time; Byron’s “Oriental story poetry”, which created a serious heroes like Byron, expressed a emotion of that society. In short, arts make great contribution to express the hidden idea and impulse of the society by colorful forms.

   Someone may argue that some arties only focus on expressing their personal emotion. We surely do not mean to deny such possibility. However, one living in the society can not prevent from showing the ideas of the society, so can not their work. Arts can be preserved forever and become true arts only if they show the real society never minding appearance or hidden idea. At the same time, we should value arts created by different forms because they are the observer of the history. Without arts our history is probably going pale.

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前两段写的还不错，国歌的例子也举的不错，不过论证的时候感觉过于单薄，文字也太少，可以再举个例子加以论述。

后面两段有点乱

第三段让人感觉有点堆砌例子的嫌疑，需要做大手术，重新写

最后一段应该分成两段写，因为你前面一部分是写   艺术家只是表现个人的情绪
最好单独作为一段进行驳斥或者赞同，然后另起一段进行结尾

神剑的文章和veinard的文章都写的不错，可以借鉴一下
神剑的那篇我觉得真是perfect了，赞一下，可惜不是45分钟写的，veinard的文章中规中矩，论述的也很到位。

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