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发表于 2006-9-6 05:41:23 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
TOPIC: ISSUE185 - "Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other areas-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."
WORDS:611          TIME: 12:45:00 AM          DATE: 05/09/2006

Turning on your computers and getting onto the internet, you can find quite a lot of new or other information about scandals on almost all the fields, especially on politics, academia and business. These scandals, of course, focus our attention on problems and usually they cannot be revealed by speakers or reformers, which make people think about the policies better.

To begin with, in politics, the scandals can help leaders, common people and the governments reconsider the validity of the policies, laws and moral standards our society has. In history, there was Watergate Scandal and nowadays there are even more, such as Iraq prison abuses scandal, Philippines ex-president gambling scandal and the Chinese officers corruption, after knowing each of which, people first got shocked and then drew enormous attention to them. Thus, people began to realize the cracks in the systems and bring out more delicate ideas to improve them. Take the Chinese officers corruption for example, as more and more corrupted government officers were revealed, both Chinese government and common people focus on it, which becomes a focus of the mass media. Then people were forced to think about why those officers turned to corruption so that more reasonable policies and effective laws were developed to supervise the officers and then reduce the cases.

When it comes to academia, scandals can also help people understand the academic moral standard and be aware of academic fraud. Dr. Hwang Woo-suk, a professor in Seoul National University was famous for his achievement in animal cloning field, especially for his two remarkable papers in cloned stem cells. What is shocked to all, however, it was proved to be fabricated one year after the papers was published. After the scandal was released, people begin to think the reason: Why did he take risk in cheating? What was the crack in the academic system so that he can cheat many experts in the field and the Korean government? After investigating, we understand that the fierce competition in the field made the ambitious professor take risk in fabricating. Also, people trust the experts very much so that they failed to doubt about the result, believing it without further inspection. So the scandal itself lead people to pay more attention to the pressure scientists are suffering so that better evaluation system can be developed to release some of the pressure and always be brave to question the authorities.

Also, in business, the scandals function similar to them in politics and academia. The best example that came to my mind is the Enron Scandal. After it was exposed, many big American companies were inspected and even many others worldwide as well. As a result, credit in the market was greatly improved since most companies learned a lesson from Enron Scandal. Thus, there is no denying the function of scandals in business, which can enhance the business morality.

Admittedly, scandals also result in bad influences to the society. Also take the Enron scandal for example; it leaded people to begin to doubt if big companied are trustworthy, which caused a storm in stock market. Many people even doubt about the whole American economic system so that a crisis of confidence was triggered. Obviously, it is not good to focus too much on scandals themselves.
   
In sum, scandals really help people focus on the problems we may have the system no mater in politics, academia or business although obviously, to some extent, can have bad impacts in a short time. Therefore, we should realize the value of all kinds of scandals and make full use of it to improve the society system without paying too much attention to the scandals themselves.

[ 本帖最后由 lxmsos 于 2006-9-7 15:52 编辑 ]
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发表于 2006-9-6 14:58:49 |只看该作者
Actually, this article is well developed, in three fields the effect and usefulness of scandals are well organised and reasoned.

Perfect.
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发表于 2006-9-7 09:04:12 |只看该作者
Thank you for your comment.  I am so flattered.

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发表于 2006-9-7 09:31:29 |只看该作者
文章结构完整,思路比较清晰,
如果能在最后加一个小转折,比如说一下过多关注于丑闻的坏处, 然后再转回来,加上你的最后一句,我觉得可能会好一些
个人拙见啊~~

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发表于 2006-9-7 10:02:44 |只看该作者
呵呵,谢谢楼上。
就是怕自己打不完的说,一共才写了7篇Issue,。。。。现在知道太懒了,希望人品好吧!

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发表于 2006-9-7 14:10:17 |只看该作者
有一个小小的问题,黄是做embryo cloning出名的,虽然他确实克隆了一条狗。。

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发表于 2006-9-7 16:20:44 |只看该作者

lxmsos进步好快啊!

以前看你的文章 好像多多少少都有些毛病
而这篇 我一个拼写错误都没看见 而且文章的组织和展开都非常好啊
Pursuit of happiness

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发表于 2006-9-8 03:54:23 |只看该作者
原帖由 rabbitrita 于 2006-9-6 21:31 发表
文章结构完整,思路比较清晰,
如果能在最后加一个小转折,比如说一下过多关注于丑闻的坏处, 然后再转回来,加上你的最后一句,我觉得可能会好一些
个人拙见啊~~


Sample Text加了一点,谢谢你的意见!!!

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发表于 2006-9-8 03:55:52 |只看该作者
原帖由 jcgod 于 2006-9-7 02:10 发表
有一个小小的问题,黄是做embryo cloning出名的,虽然他确实克隆了一条狗。。


呵呵,功不抵过呀!搞学问的决不能这样:@

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发表于 2006-9-8 04:00:47 |只看该作者
原帖由 ChunyanLi2005 于 2006-9-7 04:20 发表
以前看你的文章 好像多多少少都有些毛病
而这篇 我一个拼写错误都没看见 而且文章的组织和展开都非常好啊



呵呵,感谢ChunyanLi2005这些天的建议,监督和鼓励!Bow! :p
明天我就考了, 希望不要遇到我无话可说的题目才好!
也预祝ChunyanLi2005考试顺利!

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