issue144 不看文章也拍拍提纲吧,至少是中文啊!

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Issue 144
提纲：1 影响深远的艺术作品是文化领域里重要的资源，它反映了人们的思想特点和社会体系特征
            2 艺术作品由于其特殊的创造性和想象性，需要人们根据自己的文化修养去主观感受艺术作品
            3 但批评家的评论在一定程度上促进了人们主观感受艺术作品这一过程的进行
            4 同时，我们也应该以审视的眼光去看待这些评论，避免被一些强烈的个人色彩评论所侵蚀

Art works held an increasingly significant effect in this era, carrying with them a wide various evaluation. I strongly propose that we must consciously underline true and lasting value of those works itself, rather than the critic's words.

Far- reaching and inspiration works created by an artist are priceless resources for reflecting the important features of people's idea and society fabric. Many historians have also learned and understood salient characters in the past from the use of exploiting art work's uncommon place. Consider , for example, traditional Chinese painting underlines to builds one kind of beautiful ideal condition, making one have an infinite daydream, but oil painting in the Western emphasizes the vivid description of its characters; for Chinese ideology cultivates one ‘s moral introspectively, which is a traditional thinking, while the Western society’s idea pays great attention on eradicating the old and fostering the new ones.

On the other hand, people intent to appreciate the art work subjectively and relatively according to their own individual consciousness, with a following feeling of art work's imaginations. Generally speaking, people of different nationality, different education, and different belief always have their own distinct aesthetics about the same craft. Taking the Black music for instance, it was so popular and influential in America; however, it has been lived in winter for a long time. This illustrate the personal education ,character ,external world and the like have a deep function on one's thought.

Admittedly, a critic's evaluation of an art properly and usefully bring to our attention and deeply understanding the process of our own perspective as well as contacting with more fascinating and little known works. People would comprehend some obscure or recondite art works through the critic's argument. For instance, abstract art occupy an important part in today's art area yet cannot be recognized by the masses, indeed we seriously require both correct and positive course of critic's explanation.

Finally, putting much dependence on critic's words may also blind us, even lost themselves in their words. Evaluation destruction ,whether intentionally or not, would wreak havoc to the work itself ,as well substantial amounts of people who have had no previous touch with the art work.

In conclusion, I argue that sometimes the evaluation of critic's has a meaningful function ,but only art works and art works, can afford the essential value and the arguments in terms of it merely subject to it ,instead of exceeding it.

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Art works held an increasingly significant effect in this era, carrying with them a wide various evaluation. I strongly propose that we must consciously underline true and lasting value of those works itself, rather than the critic's words.

Far- reaching and inspiration(inspiring) works created by an artist are priceless resources for reflecting the important features of people's idea and society fabric. Many historians have also learned and understood salient characters in the past from the use of exploiting art work's uncommon place.(这句话感觉有点脱节） Consider , for example, traditional Chinese paintings underlines to builds one kind of beautiful ideal codition(不是很清楚你这句话想表达的意思), making one have an infinite daydream, but(while) oil paintings in the Western world emphasizes the vivid description of its characters; for Chinese ideology cultivates one ‘s moral introspectively, which is a traditional thinking, while the Western society’s idea pays great attention on eradicating the old and fostering the new ones.

On the other hand, people intent to appreciate the art work subjectively and relatively according to their own individual consciousness, with a following feeling of art work's imaginations. Generally speaking, people of different nationality, different education, and different belief(两个都可以省去，有点重复了) always have their own distinct aesthetics about the same craft. Taking the Black music for instance, it was so popular and influential in America; however, it has been lived in winter for a long time. This illustrate the personal education ,character ,external world and the like have a deep function on one's thought. Admittedly, a critic's evaluation of an art properly and usefully bring to our attention and deeply understanding the process of our own perspective as well as contacting with more fascinating and little known works. People would comprehend some obscure or recondite art works through the critic's argument. For instance, abstract art occupy(occupying) an important part in today's art area yet cannot be recognized by the masses(mass), indeed we seriously require both(去掉更好些) correct and positive course of critic's explanation.

Finally, putting much dependence on critic's words may also blind us, even lost themselves(应该是ourselves) in their words. Evaluation destruction ,whether intentionally or not, would wreak havoc to the work itself ,as well substantial amounts of people who have had no previous touch with the art work.

In conclusion, I argue that sometimes the evaluation of critic's has a meaningful function ,but only art works and art works(artists?), can afford the essential value and the arguments in terms of it merely subject to it ,instead of exceeding it. (不明白你到底想表达什么？)

感觉与题目中的“深远的价值”联系不是很紧密，第二段与主题没有很好的联系起来，个人对艺术作品的欣赏与其带了深远影响有什么关系，对评论家和艺术家的作用而言有什么意义？批评家的主观性是否是其不能产生深远价值的原因？应该表诉出来。