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[i习作temp] Issue150【0706G-CRUSADE小组】第4次作业 by vanlucker [复制链接]

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发表于 2007-3-1 15:37:55 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
【题目】Issue150   科技类“Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.”
1.  部分同意
2.  随着科技发展人们对世界的认识更广泛了,可以了解到一些地方的风景;
3.  同时,随着电视与互联网的发展,一定程度上对旅游业起了宣传作用,meanwhile,好奇心会驱使人们并不只满足与屏幕中的世界,人们渴望身临其境,旅游业更是因此前所未有繁荣
4.  诚然,对于经济宽绰的人们来说,旅游更胜过屏幕风景,但是对一些经济拮据的人们来说,屏幕上的风景或许是可以暂时满足欲望,或许当有钱时就会考虑旅游。。。因此旅游业并不会消亡
5.  总结     

      Nowadays, since the increasing need of competitiveness in workplace, people might tend to spend much more time in work than in leisure like travel. Accordingly, along with the advancement of television and internet, people can now have a “trip” in screens, which widely provide the landscapes and flavors they have never experienced, and can therefore budget sparely their time and money. However, will tourism soon be forgotten? In my view, it is contrary that, by media disseminating certain place’s sceneries and flavors in television or internet, tourism might be blossoming continually.      
     As advances in communication technology continue to accelerate, more and more information, including the beautiful sceneries around the world, will be presented at our screens handily. And just turning on television or computer, we can easily and suitably enjoy the “travel” in the Great Wall, the Egyptian pyramids, and even Mount Qomolangma, which need considerable money and time as to traveling personally. Accordingly, to some extent that the media in television and internet provide us with such convenience, tourism might be largely “influenced”.    
     Nevertheless, along with the rapidly media advancement, when the beautiful sceneries appear on television and internet more and more frequently and engagingly, the innate curiosity will drive people’s attention from the boring imagines into what they can personally experience in their favorite places, how much such travel may cost, and how long they can afford to travel without works, and such influence will consequently lead tourism into its unprecedented prosper. For example, although by watching television or exploring on internet we can collect a variety of information about our favorite place, it is inevitable to flat us as television or computer screens in a long term, because such information cannot be compared with the experience in travel for personal enjoyment and wide prospect. Accordingly, people would, more often than not, like to collect relative information about the travel in their favorite places after they find their dream landscapes on television or internet, and then they might schedule their work and daily life in order to switch properly spare times to enjoy in travel. Thus, tourism will become more and more thriving by the television and internet’s strong contribution.    

    Moreover, going traveling with family or friends, people could not only enjoy himself but also enhance the communication with others, as well as can exert positive effects on each one’s emotion. It is the otherwise important enjoyment of travel that television and internet might not bring us. Consider, for example, what wateriness communication that a person simply maintains with his family or friends beside work and watching television. Just turn off his screens, and switch his spare times, he will cheerily appreciate with an affective traveling party the excellent enjoyment, which is not merely about perceiving the gorgeous sceneries that cold screens can provide us to some degree.  (这段补加的)
    Admittedly, such enjoyments comparatively require enough money to afford. For some rich people, it is indisputable that the enjoyment of travel is much more important than potential expense. For most students, myself include, however, the money is that we should consider at first. So, for most of time, we students might merely appreciate the beautiful sceneries at home or dormitory and desirably imagine the travel in those places. However, if there is enough money we obtained from part-time jobs or fellowships, going traveling might be a favorable choice. Accordingly, no matter whether they have spare money, people would rather like to have a trip themselves instead of merely being satisfied with the “travel” on the television and internet.   
    To sum up, the television and internet that provide people widely and rapidly with the gorgeous places’ information, which people could collect handily for their potential personal travel, play extremely significant roles in tourism blooming.

没什么例子可举,都是说一些通例
还有,就是为什么这个题目是科技类,难道要我们详细阐述科技??这篇我基本没详细说....

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沙发~在火车上改,回学校贴~

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发表于 2007-3-2 14:26:25 |只看该作者
突然想到,旅游的最大好处,除了亲自感受,还有就是能和家人或朋友一起享受快乐,增进感情交流等等(至少对我来说^_^)
而且这点恰恰就是电视不能带给我们的

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