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题目：ISSUE185 - "Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other areas-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."
字数：464          用时：0:42:00          日期：2007-3-4
Shall we focus our attention on problems of scandals because of its useful feature whether in politics, academia, or other areas is a debatable topic that attrach much attention today.While it is ture that scandals can be expose to the  public in that faults can be discriminated from the greatness, however, on the other hand, overreported information which regarded as scandal ruins the personal life of individuals.Therefore, I hold the position that we should not attach too much attention to the scandals while keep an eye on the truth behind the scandals.
First and foremost, the scandals reveal fact that some errors of famous individuals are kept a secret to the public.Whether in politics, academia, or other areas, there is some individuals with wrong ideas to make wrong decisions but withhold the mistake to the public.With the report of the sacndal ,the government or the public can deal with the problems as soon as possible.For instance, there is a earthshaking news of the recently " phone gate" scandal of Italian Serie A soccer clubs this summer.The "phone gate" become popular topic on people's dining tables and the public require the Italian government to address the football scandal solemnly.Due to the pressure form many sides, the related punishment and measures were carried out soon.
However, on condition that we pay too much attention on the scandals, the individuals of fame may have no choice to correct his or her fault but to complain about the pubic of overcuriosity.Some flaw and privacy ensure the authority of some politic leaders.For example, the majority focus their eyes on the former President Clinton's sex scandal with Monica Lewinsky and have a joke with him.Unfortunately ,his great achievements to improve the attention on scandals might cause prejudice so that we should not let our life fully covered with them.
Moreover, too much attention paid to scandals may also risk distracting that focus on the mainstream events, being hazardous. If we pay more attention on the scandals than the exist problems of out society, some problems may become a disater in the future.For instance, our environment problem is more interesting and inportant than the scandals. Making a sustainable plan for preserving environment   is obviously more favorable than being curious concerning the private scandals.
All in all, without being aware of the fact revealed by the scandals, citizens may be cheated by some dishonest individuals of reputation.Nevertheless, without some personal information withheld by the individuals of reputation, life of them will become nothing but a nightmare in which they are censured by the public for every little thing during their daily life.Basing my conclusion on the illustrations and expositions moentioned above, accordingly, I hold the position that focusing on the reality of the scandals we should give more private to the individuals.

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