issue50 [transcend小组第二次作业]

yangxq1001UID: 203663

TOPIC: ISSUE50 - "In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be
required to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach."
WORDS: 461         TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2007-3-6

   
   
It is presumptuous to claim that all faculty at college and university should be required to spend time working outside the
academic world.  Whether the faculty at college and university should spend time working relevant to the courses they teach
is strongly related to the pacific academic area.
   
For those whose majors are related with real society, faculty members should be encouraged to work outside to obtain some
experiences. The reasons for this viewpoint can be illustrated as follows.
   
First, the knowledge learned in these subjects needs to be used in society, so the instruction with daily experiences can
rouse the interest of students. It can help the students learn the knowledge more easily and forwardly. They can bring to
their students practical, real-world examples of principles and theories discussed in textbooks. While, students are tired
with the teaching without daily experiences. For example, one of my friends, whose major is electronic engineering, told me
that most faculties and graduate students had experiences outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses
they taught and learned. They can face difficulties which they won't meet at their academic area. The new problems they found
in industrial domain could help them with their research and teaching. The research ability of faculty and student may also
help industry field solve difficulties since they look these problems from different sides.
   
Second, students prefer the teachers with rich relevant working experience, for they can know the real situation outside the
campus and learn how to apply their techniques in future. Sometime, they could also learn how to communicate with colleagues
at company from their teachers.
   
Moreover, an important goal of college and university education is to bring up excellent workers to satisfy various needs
from the society. To meet this intention, university education must teach students how to apply their knowledge in real
society. Students could learn this skill with various measures. One of the most direct methods is the teachers who have real
experiences at related domains instruct it.
   
Another benefit has to do with the employment problem with the students. If teachers at universities often tie up companies,
they can easily found what kind of people the society needs, so students could improve their ability according to the
requirement.

For those, whose major do not have any relationship with the real world such as mathematics and history, it is not necessary
for them to work outside the academic. The working outside the academic will do little help to their academic ability and may
impact the teaching and research at college or university.

In sum, we should encourage the faculty whose professional work related to society to work outside in order to better orient
instruction to student for future career and research for themselves.

yangxq1001UID: 203663

Argument2提纲：
1,没有证据表明Brookvile地价的提升是因为统一了外观。有可能是其他因素导致地价提升，如通货膨胀，供需关系变化等
2，七年前的形势跟现在的形势有可能完全不同，适用于七年前的做法未必适用于当前
3，适用于Brookvile的方法未必适用于DeerHaven，有可能这两个地区的住户对于房屋外观的要求是不一样的。
3，地价的提升，原因有很多。如房屋质量，户型，所在地理位置，周围环境等等，并不是房屋的外观就可以提升地价的。

yangxq1001UID: 203663

Argument51提纲：
1,论者没有提供任何资料表明二次感染发生在肌肉拉伤的病人身上。
2，没有任何论据表明是抗生素类药品加快了第一组病人的康复时间。因为第一个医生是专业治疗运动的，这位医生有可能采用了其他更适用于康复的手段
3，也许是第一组病人的病情严重程度较轻或者第一组病人的体质好等因素导致第一组病人的康复更快。
4，糖片是否在第二组病人恢复期间起到了反作用

荧惑UID: 2280559

It is presumptuous to claim that all faculty at college and university should be required to spend time working outside the
academic world.  Whether the faculty at college and university should spend time working relevant to the courses they teach
is strongly related to the pacific（太平洋？？？） academic area. （直抒观点，好！）
   
For those whose majors are related with real society, faculty members should be encouraged to work outside to obtain some
experiences. The reasons for this viewpoint can be illustrated as follows. （单独列一段不好看，最好放在第一段内。。。别的没什么）
   
First, the knowledge learned in these subjects needs to be used in society, so the instruction with daily experiences can
rouse the interest of students.（明白你的意思，但还是觉得表达不清。。。什么是instruction with daily experiences??） It can help the students learn the knowledge more easily and forwardly. They（前面刚用IT，到底指代什么？） can bring to their students practical, real-world examples of principles and theories discussed in textbooks. While, students are tired with the teaching without daily experiences.（反义重复，可考虑删掉） For example, one of my friends, whose major is electronic engineering, told me that most faculties and graduate students had experiences outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they taught and learned. They can（have the chance/opporunity to？？） face difficulties which they won't meet at their academic area. The new problems they found in industrial domain(field) could help them with their research and teaching. The research ability of faculty and student may also help industry field solve difficulties since they look these problems from different sides. (据了个例子，但说服力不够）
   
Second, students prefer the teachers with rich relevant working experience, for they can know the real situation outside the
campus and learn how to apply their techniques in future. Sometime, they could also learn how to communicate with colleagues
at company from their teachers.（您忙，展开吧，上一段好长，这一段好短）
   
Moreover, an important goal of college and university education is to bring up excellent workers to satisfy various needs
from the society. To meet this intention, university education must teach students how to apply their knowledge in real
society. Students could learn this skill with various measures. One of the most direct methods is the teachers who have real
experiences at related domains instruct it.
   
Another benefit has to do with the employment problem with the students.（语法是不是有问题） If teachers at universities often tie up companies, they can easily found what kind of people the society needs, so students could improve their ability according to the
requirement.

For those, whose major do not have any relationship with the real world such as mathematics and history, it is not necessary
for them to work outside the academic. The working outside the academic will do little help to their academic ability and may
impact the teaching and research at college or university. （筹字数？？）

In sum, we should encourage the faculty whose professional work related to society to work outside in order to better orient
instruction to student for future career and research for themselves.

观点罗列的很零乱，Anyway,想法很多嘛，好事，挑几个展开一下吧

yangxq1001UID: 203663

这两天有事情特别忙,没来得及上来看看
感谢荧惑 ,说得问题确实是一语中的啊,现在主要困扰我的问题就是不知道怎么展开,光有想法,没有套路来证明这个观点,还有一个问题就是例子贫乏,想不到举什么例子.

荧惑UID: 2280559

呼,我也是...
我写着写着,老是跑题~
...哎

feixiaUID: 2238080

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