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发表于 2007-6-20 14:59:52 |显示全部楼层
Topic:   :) TELEVISION HAS DESTROYED COMMUNICATION AMONG FAMILY AND FRIENDS............


Everyone knows that television ,as one of the most significant inventions in 20centuary ,is now belong to a part of out life .
No doubted that television always influent us deeply. However,someone paised that this invention possesses so much value
while the others regarded that television bring about amout of negative effects. For instance, some person remarked unsatisfied
that:"Television has destroyed communication among friends and family." It appears to me that the conclusion sounds like
insufficient and incompletely to be concede. Later on I will list my evidences to refute this view.

Television now is a useful and helpful tool to spread varies of news which involved not only entertainment ,sports but also political
contents. From all these fresh messages we can always find out what we intersted in and what we are willing to discuss about.
Hence,we obtain a fresh topic to chat with family and friends. It is perhaps that the chat among us make our relationship more closely.
Since that  we are unexpected to discover  that we possess the same standpoint  with the inciden which we just talking about.

And then where people always would like to set a television ? It is as clear as daylight that every family put the TV set at home.That is,the more time we spend on TV,the more time we will stay at home.A efficient communication based on the factors that a comfortable eviroment  and peeple meet each other closely without a far distance. So then television also product a oppotunity for us to go well with our friends and family.

Definitly, television likewise read books,do sports,or play games has nothing harm which discribe that television has destroyed  
communication among our relatives.  Television is so innocent to destroy communication among family and friends.:loveliness:

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发表于 2007-6-20 15:02:58 |显示全部楼层

模板很标准,格式要加强。

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发表于 2007-6-20 15:10:26 |显示全部楼层
好谢谢

格式具体指什么?

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发表于 2007-6-20 15:18:15 |显示全部楼层

标准格式。

每段前空3-5格。分好段,开头结尾各一段,理由段分开(一个分论点一段)

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发表于 2007-6-21 12:30:34 |显示全部楼层
谢谢 还有问题:  等到考试的时候, 有自动回车么?
后面需要硬回车么? 会不会很不整齐.
象上面这个作文似的?

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