生如夏花小组第八次作业

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独立写作: (交友问题)
What do you want most in a friend — someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.

‘I’ll be there for you’ is just one word in Friends and it shows the perpetual friendship of 6 people. How can they keep the friendship? How they choose their friends? Different people have different positions such as the intelligent one, the humorous one, or the reliable one. In my opinion, I would like to pick up with the humorous friends.

First, what causes me to make the decision above is the humorous friends could make everybody around have a happy time. As we know, humorous people like joking with their friends. Playing a joke, making a face, and tricking others seem to be a sign of them own. There are always sweet smiles existing on their face. We would never feel tired or boring when playing with them. Maybe, humor is just the fascination which could attract more and more people so as to finish its task. What task? Remember that, humor can infect, from one person to anther. Once it’s your turn, keep laughing.

Next, the humor can give us infinite energy as long as they appear in time. The humorous people have so important ability that their behaviors could help the depressed people seek the hope again. Assuredly, as a kind of spirit medicine, humorous activities do have merits in curing the symptoms, depression, anger, worry and so on. For example, when I was failed in my experiment, I feel boring about it, even give up. Just a humorous friend of mine lightens my hope through playing small joke with me and he measured it well in order not to make me angry. So, humorous friends really have their unique skills.

Moreover, the humorous friends can make us healthy than before. There is a Chinese slang ‘A smile can make you younger’. With a nice mood, our body would suffer little pressure that lead to normal metabolism. The physical body and spirit become nice day-to-day. Hardly does any ache call on us again. How can we overlook the contribution from our humorous friends?

In fact, other characters of intelligence and reliability still have certain importance for being a friend. However, I hope my friends could possess the humor primarily. And I would tell them ‘I’ll be there for you!’


口语:
描述一个你愿意说话的人，说什么，为什么。(森林注: 不好意思...JJ上就是中文..)

The man whom I prefer to talk with is my advisor, Prof. Zhang. He is a very famous scientist in biology. I like to talk with him about my project because he can often give me some constructive ideas which I always forget in my project. And he never criticize me about me errors but in an opposite model to encourage me. Besides, I often go to his office to consult the development of modern biology. He still introduces the development warmheartedly. Especially, he cares about my living so as to guarantee my learning would not be delayed. That is why I like talking with Prof. Zhang.

cuiwenliUID: 2297488

独立写作: (交友问题)
What do you want most in a friend — someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.

‘I’ll be there for you’ is just one word in Friends and it shows the perpetual friendship of 6 people （这个例子不错，但后面说得是humor,这个例子是支持reliable）。How can they keep the friendship? How do they choose their friends? Different people have different positions such as the intelligent one, the humorous one, or the reliable one. In my opinion, I would like to pick up with (the ,删除，难道你说的是一类人)humorous friends.

First, what causes me to make the decision above is the humorous friends could make everybody around have a happy time. As we know, humorous people like joking with their friends. Playing a joke, making a face, and tricking others seem to be a sign of them own. There are always sweet smiles existing on their face. We would never feel tired or boring when playing with them. Maybe, humor is just the fascination which could attract more and more people so as to finish its task. What task? Remember that, humor can infect, from one person to anther. Once it’s your turn, keep laughing.

Next, the humor can give us infinite energy as long as they appear in time. The humorous people have so important ability that their behaviors could help the depressed people seek the hope again. Assuredly, as a kind of spirit medicine, humorous activities do have merits in curing the symptoms－ depression, anger, worry and so on. For example, when I （was，删，主动语态） failed in my experiment, I feel boring about it, even give up. Just a humorous friend of mine lightens my hope through playing small joke with me and he measured（measures,用一般现在时，前后一致） it well in order not to make me angry. So, humorous friends really have their unique skills.

Moreover, the humorous friends can make us healthy than before. There is a Chinese slang ‘A smile can make you younger’. With a nice mood, our body would suffer little pressure that lead to normal metabolism. The physical body and spirit become nice day-to-day. Hardly does any ache call on us again（倒装句，不错，好像第一次见你用）. How can we overlook the contribution from our humorous friends?

In fact, other characters of intelligence and reliability still have certain importance for being a friend. However, I hope my friends could possess the humor primarily. And I would tell them ‘I’ll be there for you!’（问题同首段）

口语:
描述一个你愿意说话的人，说什么，为什么。(森林注: 不好意思...JJ上就是中文..)

The man whom I prefer to talk with is my advisor, Prof. Zhang. He is a very famous scientist in biology. I like to talk with him about my project because he can often give me some constructive ideas which I always forget in my project. And he never criticizes me about me(my) errors but in an opposite model to encourage me. Besides, I often go to his office to consult the development of modern biology. He still introduces the development warmheartedly. Especially, he cares about my living so as to guarantee my learning would not be delayed. That is why I like talking with Prof. Zhang.

(侧重于为什么，没怎么提说什么；第三人称加s,别的没什么问题)

[ 本帖最后由 cuiwenli 于 2007-7-18 23:57 编辑 ]