[九月IBT第三次作业]

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7.19：第三次作业
作文
Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When some asks what is your superior selection of habitation the big city or the small one, different people will offer their respective attitudes, depending diverse experiences and distinct notion about the life. Someone will approve the life in the village or countryside because of the tranquil environment and clean atmosphere.  Meanwhile, others may support to live in the big city.  As far as I am concern, living in the big city could be my superior choice and the detail reasons will be provided as following.

First and foremost, the most cardinal sake why I advocated the life in the big city is the convenience of traffic and any other basic requirements of the daily life. Noting is important than the supply of the fundamental demand, and it can be offered amount of vivid example to illustrate this point more convincing. Living in the big city, you can find the nearest restaurant immediately when feel hungry, easily reach any destinations to which you want, and attain the first information and news by the most advanced technology. All these advantages could not be achieved perfectly in the small town.

Additionally, another more essential factor why I prefer big city to small town relates to the my personal characters. The big city is filled in abundant opportunity and supply hundreds of thousands chances which is extraordinary important for a girl who harbors ambition and seeks for challenge. No one can deny the fact that the multinational companies, such as Microsoft in realm of the computer software , GE in the manufactory and Mckinsey in the business consulting and so on, prefer settle their branches in the metropolis, so that people may be gain little predominance if live in the small town. To say the least, living in the big city means more opportunities for the people who anticipate grasping them. New York, Hong Kong, Paris, Tokyo and such charming cities which are abound in challenges and opportunities are the dream cities for me to live in.

Nonetheless, the small town indeed has its special advantages. Nowadays, a growing trend of people who had lived in the metropolis for a long time migrate to the small town for their following life, since maybe the beautiful scenery, the relaxing living environment and the natural non-polluted air appeal them to change their original life style.  

From what I have discussed above, we can draw the conclusion, after weighting the advantage and disadvantage, living in the big city is really a superior choice for me and any other people who has the same personal dream as me. There is no definite answer for everyone, and just determine by which one is more suitable to your personality.  

口语
In  your opinion, what is the most important characteristic(for example, honesty, intelligence, sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer.（写作中有同样的题目出现。类似的题目：一系列人物角色的特点：好邻居、好儿女、好老板、好co-worker,...）

If a person anticipate successful, the following too characters are indispensable.
Firstly, fortitude. It is certainly that you would face the difficulty, no matter what realms are you in. the most important question is how to due it. Only the people who surpass all the test can arrive at the bank of the success.  Another one is ability. No one can success without ability and that is the fundamental to do everything. So improve your ability both in communication and knowledge, be a fortitude person who can get over all the difficulties, and you will have a successful life.   

[ 本帖最后由 zhangyebb 于 2007-7-19 17:41 编辑 ]

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作文
Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When some asks what is your superior selection of habitation the big city or the small one, different people will offer their respective attitudes, depending diverse experiences and distinct notion about the life. Someone will approve the life in the village or countryside because of the tranquil environment and clean atmosphere.  Meanwhile, others may support to live in the big city.  As far as I am concern, living in the big city could be my superior choice and the detail reasons will be provided as following.

First and foremost, the most cardinal（是不是和前面的foremost重复了） sake why I advocated（注意文章时态一致） the life in the big city is the convenience of traffic and any other basic requirements of the daily life. Noting is （more）important than the supply of the fundamental demand, and it can be offered amount of vivid example to illustrate this point more convincing. Living in the big city, you can find the nearest restaurant immediately when feel hungry, easily reach any destinations to which you want, and attain the first information and news by the most advanced technology. All these advantages could not be achieved perfectly in the small town.（这段思想很好，考虑全面）

Additionally, another more essential factor why I prefer big city to small town relates to the my personal characters. The big city is filled in abundant opportunity and supply hundreds of thousands chances which is extraordinary important for a girl who harbors ambition and seeks for challenge. No one can deny the fact that the multinational companies, such as Microsoft in realm of the computer software （微软总部好像在乡下，靠近西雅图吧）, GE in the manufactory and Mckinsey in the business consulting and so on, prefer settle their branches in the metropolis, so that people may be gain little predominance if live in the small town. To say the least, living in the big city means more opportunities for the people who anticipate grasping them. New York, Hong Kong, Paris, Tokyo and such charming cities which are abound in challenges and opportunities are the dream cities for me to live in.

Nonetheless, the small town indeed has its special advantages. Nowadays, a growing trend of people who had lived in the metropolis for a long time migrate to the small town for their following life, since maybe the beautiful scenery, the relaxing living environment and the natural non-polluted air appeal them to change their original life style.  

From what I have discussed above, we can draw the conclusion, after weighting the advantages and disadvantages, living in the big city is really a superior choice for me and any other people who has the same personal dream as me. There is no definite answer for everyone, and just determine(这里是不是要用被动) by which one is more suitable to your personality.  

口语
In  your opinion, what is the most important characteristic(for example, honesty, intelligence, sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer.（写作中有同样的题目出现。类似的题目：一系列人物角色的特点：好邻居、好儿女、好老板、好co-worker,...）

If a person anticipate(s) successful, the following too(two发音一样) characters are indispensable.
Firstly, fortitude. It is certainly（certain这里应该是形容词） that you would face the difficulty（某个特定的困难？many difficulties 是不是好点）, no matter what realms are you in（you are in）. the most important question is how to due (due不能当动词用overcome, hurdle, get over, surmount都可以)it. Only the（the多余） people who surpass all the test can arrive at the bank of the success.（这句要倒装）  Another one is ability. No one can success without ability and that is the fundamental to do everything. So improve your ability both in（of） communication and knowledge, be a fortitude person who can get over all the difficulties, and you will have a successful life.

[ 本帖最后由 airbots 于 2007-7-20 10:53 编辑 ]

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Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When some asks what is your superior selection of habitation the big city or the small one, different people will offer their respective attitudes, depending diverse experiences and distinct notion about the life. Someone will approve the life（觉得这个词用得有点怪） in the village or countryside because of the tranquil environment and clean atmosphere.  Meanwhile, others may support to live in the big city.  As far as I am concern, living in the big city could be my superior choice and the detail reasons will be provided as following.

First and foremost, the most cardinal sake（去掉） why I advocated the life in the big city is the convenience of traffic and any（去掉） other basic requirements of the daily life. Noting is （more）important than the supply of the fundamental demand, and it can be offered amount of vivid example to illustrate this point more convincing. Living in the big city, you can find the nearest restaurant immediately when feel hungry, easily reach any destinations to which you want, and attain the first（newest） information and news by the most advanced technology. All these advantages could not be achieved perfectly in the small town.

Additionally, another more essential factor why I prefer big city to small town relates to the(去掉) my personal characters. The big city is filled in abundant opportunity and supply hundreds of thousands chances(和opportunity 重复了) which is extraordinary important for a girl who harbors ambition and seeks for challenge. No one can deny the fact that the multinational companies, such as Microsoft in realm of the computer software , GE in the manufactory and Mckinsey in the business consulting and so on, prefer settle their branches in the metropolis,（例子详细，具体） so that people may be gain little predominance （这句觉得说得没什么根据）if live in the small town. To say the least, living in the big city means more opportunities for the people who anticipate grasping them. New York, Hong Kong, Paris, Tokyo and such charming cities which are abound in challenges and opportunities are the dream cities for me to live in. （建议逻辑层次方面可以再调整一下）

Nonetheless, the small town indeed has its special advantages. Nowadays, a growing trend of people who had lived in the metropolis for a long time migrate to the small town for their following life, since maybe the beautiful scenery, the relaxing living environment and the natural non-polluted air appeal them to change their original life style.  

From what I have discussed above, we can draw the conclusion, after weighting the advantage and disadvantage, （可以说的简洁点） living in the big city is really a superior choice for me and any other people who has the same personal dream as me. There is no definite answer for everyone, and just determine by which one is more suitable to your personality.  

口语
In  your opinion, what is the most important characteristic(for example, honesty, intelligence, sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer.（写作中有同样的题目出现。类似的题目：一系列人物角色的特点：好邻居、好儿女、好老板、好co-worker,...）

If a person anticipate successful, the following two characters are indispensable.
Firstly, fortitude. It is certainly that you would face the difficulty, no matter what realms are you in. the most important question is how to due it. Only the people who surpass all the test can arrive at the bank of the success.（说得有点太抽象了，建议具体点）  Another one is ability.（这个词范围太大了） No one can success without ability and that is the fundamental to do everything. So improve your ability both in communication and knowledge, be a fortitude person who can get over all the difficulties, and you will have a successful life.

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