issue159 [0710G 戴三个表冲刺小组] 第3次作业

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159 "The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are
    only tools of human minds."
   
    提纲：
    1.同意机器事人脑的工具，不同意人脑总是优于机器
    2.机器是人脑的实现。
    3.在很多人脑力不从心的地方，机器可以做的很好。
      Ex，机床把人类从乏味的加工中解放出来，并且比人的效率和效果都要好。
      Ex，大规模的计算，只能是计算机来作，人的计算能力是做不到的。
    4.Sum。

WORDS: 520          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2007-7-28 10:51:36
The speaker asserts that the human mind 's inherent superiority to machines simplely because machines are tools of human minds. I concede that machines are the tools of human minds just like many other tools in our life and work to facitate our life. However I strongly disagree with the assertion that human mind always superior to machines.

Admittedly, the behaviors of machines are totally based on the instruction of humans. The typical example immedietely coming into mind is the computer, which is the most intelletual machine work in the service of life and work of humans. It works according to the programs stored in storage . The programs which predesigned by human to perform certain actions are nothing more than a serisos of instructions which tell the computer what to do when meet certain condition just like the way our human make a decision in certain circumstance, the instruction even can tell the computer what to do when there is an exception occured the same way when we deal with a exceptional emergency in our life. In short , the computer just do what the human require it to do in the ways the human tell them how to do, as well as other machine which are less intellegent than computer.

However, maybe the initial purpos the human invent the machine is to facililate their work, make machine a substitute for human work, thus free the human from the heavy, boring , simple work. The machine such as lathe  wildly used in factory may best illustrate this point. The process of lathe is exactly identical to the way early works' operation, with the development of this kind of machine the burdens of works have greatly released and the efficiencies have been dramaticly  improved, but these kind of machines are still just repeat the works of human, in other words, all what they can do can also be done by human if they want. But still there other works which machine can do well are beyond the capibility of human, do this sounds ridiculas, the machine we invited can do the things we cannot do? Futunately it is true. To know this you need look no father than the weather precasts. Without the satelites and the high-speed machine we can hardly get the accurate result. Because the prediction can only be made based on a vast numer of history data and the analyse upon such data, the more data we have, the more accurate the result will be, and the more aspects of analyse we make, more factors we concider, more accurate the prediction result will be.  This work can not be finished by human's computing in a required short time.
Machines show their superiority to human mind in these subjects and lots of such subjects fall into the scientific research category.

In sum, we cannot easily draw the conclusion that human mind always superior to machines simpley because we invented them. They can work better than our human can do in certian circumstance. We need to use them well in order to best facilitate our life and our works.

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WORDS: 520          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2007-7-28 10:51:36
The speaker asserts that the human mind 's inherent superiority to machines simply because machines are tools of human minds. I concede(concede貌似感觉有很勉强的样子……我觉得用grant 会不会更好？) that machines are the tools of human minds just like many other tools in our life and work to facilitate our life. However I strongly disagree with the assertion that human mind will always be superior to machines.

Admittedly, the behaviors of machines are totally based on the instruction of humans. The typical example immediately coming into mind is the computer, which is the most intellectual machine working in the service of life and work of humans. It works according to the programs stored in storage(will memory be better?) . The programs which are predesigned by human to perform certain actions are nothing more than a series of instructions which tell the computer what to do when meet certain condition just like the way our human make a decision in certain circumstance, the instruction even can tell the computer what to do when there is an exception occured the same way when we deal with an exceptional emergency in our life. In short , the computer just do what the human require it to do in the ways the human tell them how to do, as well as other machine which are less intelligent than computer.

However, maybe the initial purpose the human invent the machine is to facilitate their work, make machine a substitute for human work, thus free the human from the heavy, boring, simple work. The machine such as lathe  wildly used in factory may best illustrate this point. The process of lathe is exactly identical to the way early works' operation, with the development of this kind of machine the burdens of works have greatly released and the efficiencies have been dramatically improved, but these kind of machines are still just repeat the works of human, in other words, all what they can do can also be done by human if they want. But still there other works which machine can do well are beyond the capability of human, do this sounds ridiculous, the machine we invented can do the things we cannot do? Fortunately it is true. To know this you need look no further than the weather forecast. Without the satelites and the high-speed machine we can hardly get the accurate result. Because the prediction can only be made based on a vast number of history data and the analysis upon such data, the more data we have, the more accurate the result will be, and the more aspects of analysis we make, more factors we concider, more accurate the prediction result will be.  This work can not be finished by human's computing in a required short time.
Machines show their superiority to human mind in these subjects and lots of such subjects fall into the scientific research category.

In sum, we cannot easily draw the conclusion that human mind always superior to machines simply because we invented them. They can work better than our human can do in certain circumstance. We need to use them well in order to best facilitate our life and our works.

   
    提纲：
    1.同意机器事人脑的工具，不同意人脑总是优于机器
    2.机器是人脑的实现。
    3.在很多人脑力不从心的地方，机器可以做的很好。
      Ex，机床把人类从乏味的加工中解放出来，并且比人的效率和效果都要好。
      Ex，大规模的计算，只能是计算机来作，人的计算能力是做不到的。
    4.Sum


看到这个题目总会感觉“人脑”这个概念不是很清楚……貌似第一个例子更倾向于体力劳动，和题目结合起来很怪的样子……不过我写的也差不多
而且从两个例子的递进关系来考虑，这两个例子写成两段似乎更好哈。
个人意见，参考参考


另外还有一些拼写错误和词性的小失误，在word里改了颜色这里显示不出来……比如superior的用法等等6，估计适应了限时后会好很多吧

[ 本帖最后由 oscar1125 于 2007-7-28 19:55 编辑 ]