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发表于 2007-8-2 09:39:22 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
TOPIC: ARGUMENT145 - A new study collected data that shows that people who snore are more likely to gain weight than are people who do not snore. It is well known that many people who snore also stop breathing frequently during the night for a few seconds, a condition called sleep apnea. The interruption of breathing wakes the person-often so briefly that the waking goes unnoticed-and can leave the person too tired during the day to exercise. Anyone who snores, therefore, should try to eat less than the average person and to exercise more.
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The arguer cites two facts :1.people who snore are more likely to gain weight 2.people who snore are often tired during the day to exercise as the result of snore which breaks sleep . to attest his deducton that people who snores should try to eat less and exercise more . this deductions seems reasonable at first glance , however ,  this deduction suffers from several fallacies after close scrutiny.
Firstly:arguer contends that snored people who want to address the weight problems brought by snoring should eat less .this conjecture is very unreasonable . weight problems is a result of snoring ,so obvisously try to cure snoring would be a more substantial access to health , even curing could be impossible , control weight via eating less could pose many other detrimental effect towards people's health ,like insufficient nurtrience .maybe snored people could eat more vegatables and fruits other than meat and sweeties to control their weight. which would have not potential for harm.
Secondly:the arguer recommends that people should exercise more because they are too tired during the day to exerise . this cause-and-result correlation is unwarrent ,even ridculuous . arguer might think in this way: because people who snored are too tired to exerise ,it means they lack exercise , so they should exercise more . this kind of deduction ignores a key detail that:the fact not are people tired  but people snore is the substantial reason for the result they could not exercise enough in the daytime , if we try to approach this problem , maybe curing snore could be the only way .
In conclusion, .......................................................
sigh这个居然不到三百 orz 是在是没有什么可以说道的了
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