[九月IBT第十五次作业]BY zhangyebb

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8.2第十五次作业（请于8.2晚22：30之前交,在8.3晚22:00前完成批改）
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In the lecture, the professor made several points about_____. He says that the theory stated in the passage was very different (similar) and somewhat inaccurate (the same) when compared to the reading material.

Firstly, one reason which the professor uses to refute (support) the reading is that__1__. That is ___. This also indicated that ___. In the other words, ___. This directly contradicts (advocated) what the passage indicates.

Secondly, another point which made by the professor to argue (approve) the reading is that __2__. The passage says that ___, because of ___. The speaker talks about ___. This is another problem in which experience contradicted theory.

Thirdly, __3__.The professor claims that_____. However (additionally), the reading states _____.

This point is contradicted (agreed) by____. Therefore, what the professor stated is on the contrary of (has the similarity to) the reading,

独立写作:   If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, usingspecific reasons and details.

When facing a god-given opportunity to receive advanced education about a new realm, different people will offer their respective opinions. Some may choose the Western Culture, since the immense attraction about the Renaissance and Technology Revolution, while others may select the Quantum Mechanics, because of adoration to the Einstein. However, if I had a chance to select a subject which I did not have opportunity to study, my choice would be Biomedical Imagine. The detailed reason will be illustrated as following.

Firstly, the research in technology of biomedicine and computation allured and interested me extraordinary from the beginning of university study. As a student in the biomedicine, Imagine which is one of the big branches of the subject, occupies the cardinal position both in the realm of electrical and medicine. Moreover, it is a subject with high practicability and technology whose achievement of research could directly benefit the clinic usages and that is why it attracts me lot.

Secondly, the improvement of the instrumentation in the diagnostics will boost the development of the medicine. The biomedical imagine is just a realm to invent and ameliorate the technology, which offers more in the use of diagnostic instrumentation. No one can deny the fact that as the progression in the level of daily life, people recognize the importance of the health, so that the accuracy and reliability take the ascend essential role in the clinical check and more and more advanced instrumentations, such as CT, MRI and PET, exhibit their own advantages for benefiting people’s health. That is main context which the Biomedical Imagine provides. Therefore, the chance to learn the basic knowledge about the Imagine Principle and configuration of imagine instrumentation could be the great leap for the further of my career.

From what I have discussed above, just because of my great interesting of this realm and the perfect foreground of this subject, the Biomedical Imagine will be my finally selection if I have an opportunity to choose one field to study.

[ 本帖最后由 zhangyebb 于 2007-8-2 13:42 编辑 ]

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独立写作:   If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, usingspecific reasons and details.

When facing a god-given opportunity to receive advanced education about a new realm, different people will offer their respective opinions. Some may choose the Western Culture, since the immense attraction about the Renaissance and Technology Revolution, while others may select the Quantum Mechanics, because of adoration to the Einstein. However, if I had a chance to select a subject which I did not have opportunity to study, my choice would be Biomedical Imagine. The detailed reason will be illustrated as following. 这段写的很赞，不过这个学科我都没听说过，翻译过来是什么啊？？

Firstly, the research in technology of biomedicine and computation allured and interested me extraordinary from the beginning of university study. As a student in the biomedicine, Imagine which is one of the big branches of the subject, occupies the cardinal position both in the realm of electrical and medicine. Moreover, it is a subject with high practicability and technology whose achievement of research could directly benefit the clinic usages and that is why it attracts me lot.

Secondly, the improvement of the instrumentation in the diagnostics will boost the development of the medicine. The biomedical imagine is just a realm to invent and ameliorate the technology, which offers more in the use of diagnostic instrumentation. No one can deny the fact that as the progression in the level of daily life, people recognize the importance of the health, so that the accuracy and reliability take the ascend essential role in the clinical check and more and more （感觉这里用more读起来更顺些） advanced instrumentations, such as CT, MRI and PET, exhibit （如果是并列的谓语，建议加一个连词；但我个人觉得这里用伴随的动作比较好） their own advantages for benefiting people’s health. That is main context which the Biomedical Imagine provides. Therefore, the chance to learn the basic knowledge about the Imagine Principle and configuration of imagine instrumentation could be the great leap for the further of my career.

From (based on比较地道些) what I have discussed above, just because of my great interesting of this realm and the perfect foreground of this subject, the Biomedical Imagine will be my finally selection if I have an opportunity to choose one field to study.

你的语言很好，从模版中也可以看出来，学习中……
但是关于这篇独立写作，不知道你是不是生物专业的学生，因为我不是，所以这样专业性质比较强的文章对于非专业的人理解的不好。考试时如果遇到这道题的话，能不能考虑换个话题呢？毕竟ets里的人也不一定很容易了解
个人意见^_^

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