issue11 [0710G +U小组] --xiefen0223--第八次作业

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题目：ISSUE11 - "All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
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It comes to my mind that engaging in such an international university would be an very unusual experience for the students. No matter where you come from, which language you speak, or what culture you bring to the big family, all the students will be involved in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems. One only think about it can be deeply moved by the good intention of such a thought. So from my personal experience and my understanding of the nation’s university, I agree with the writer that all nations should help support the development of a global university, which aims to gather the talented young people to solve the persistent social problems.
To begin with, opening up a global university is beneficial for the nations as the whole, since the university will of course hold an fair position and analyze the problems from a balanced point to the world. Just as what the United Nations does, the university can gather all the talented people, let them to contribute to the whole human society. Always there are a lot of problem that one country can not cover, such as the environment problem, which requires all the nations to support it. So here the global university can take the role of reducing and at last stopping the environment pollution by promoting its importance and find scientific methods to control it.
As we know, since the year of 1945 the United Nation has been there to carry on the peace policy and control the global social problems. It indeed plays an vital role in the whole world and will keep doing it. But some people think that it is not as perfect as it claims. There are still some responsibilities that it can not cover, such as doing the research on how to reduce environment pollution, studying the controlling methods to keep some diseases from people both in poor and rich country forever, or coming up with some new and cheap technology which can be promoted to the poor country too. So these jobs can come to the solving realm of the global university, which assists the United Nation in a scientific and research way.
For the specific student who will be engaged in such a university will be beneficial for getting such an unusual experience. In such an university, the outstanding students from different countries will learn more from each other. They will get touch with other cultures and become universal too, which can help them be fair in dealing with some social problems. Moreover, after graduated the university, they can still do the research in the school for solving the problem in a scientific way or work for UN, which gives UN many new talented employees, or at least they will be a very big person to their own country.
last but not least, letting all the nations to support the global university can make all the nations’ voice heard - more than the membership countries in the UN - since at least the students will stand for their country and let the world know what they say and what they need, which will give some poor country an opportunity to vote for their right.
In conclusion, considering the success of the United Nation and the respects it can not cover, we can safely come to the conclusion that the global university should be supported by all the nation to assist the UN to solve the social problems. Admittedly opening up such an university will cost a lot for every nation and even get critics from society at first, but one should believe that the final success will finally come to the universal university.   

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It comes to my mind that engaging in such an international university would be an very unusual experience for the students. No matter where you come from, which language you speak, or what culture you bring to the big family, all the students will be involved in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems. One only think about it can be deeply moved by the good intention of such a thought.[这一句话是不是有点问题？是不是one who only …] So from my personal experience and my understanding of the nation’s[nations’?] university, I agree with the writer that all nations should help support the development of a global university, which aims to gather the talented young people to solve the persistent social problems.[第一段点题，现时说明自己的观点，应该说符合了要求。]

To begin with, opening up a global university is beneficial for the nations as the whole, since the university will of course hold an fair position and analyze the problems from a balanced point to the world. Just as what the United Nations does, the university can gather all the talented people, let them to[去掉to] contribute to the whole human society. Always there are a lot of problem[problems?] that one country can not cover, such as the environment problem, which requires all the nations to support it. So here the global university can take the role of reducing and at last stopping the environment pollution by promoting its importance and find scientific methods to control it.[这一段的理由我觉得很好，至少我没说得这么好。说明这个学校的一个作用是公平解决问题。]

As we know, since the year of 1945 the United Nation has been there to carry on the peace policy and control the global social problems. It indeed plays an[a] vital role in the whole world and will keep doing it. But some people think that it is not as perfect as it claims. There are still some responsibilities that it can not cover, such as doing the research on how to reduce environment pollution, studying the controlling methods to keep some diseases from people both in poor and rich country forever, or coming up with some new and cheap technology which can be promoted to the poor country too. So these jobs can come to the solving realm[这一句话到这里不是很理解] of the global university, which assists the United Nation in a scientific and research way.[这一段还是说学校的作用，只是拓展了下，是UN做不到的。倒也可以，只是如果能发散下，把这段加到上一段，这一段说说其他的，比如有什么优点之类。]

For the specific student[students?] who will be engaged in such a university will be beneficial for getting such an unusual experience. In such an university, the outstanding students from different countries will learn more from each other. They will get touch with other cultures[culture?] and become universal too, which can help them be fair in dealing with some social problems. Moreover, after graduated[graduating from?] the university, they can still do the[去掉the] research in the school for solving the problem in a scientific way or work for UN, which gives UN many new talented employees, or at least they will be a very big person to their own country.[这一段就说到了我上一段说的优点，我也举到了类似的优点。]




Last but not least, letting all the nations to [去掉to]support the global university can make all the nations’ voice heard - more than the membership countries in the UN - since at least the students will stand for their country and let the world know what they say and what they need, which will give some poor country[countries] an opportunity to vote for their right[rights?].[这一段说的内容我没有想到，我觉得也合理吧。]

In conclusion, considering the success of the United Nation and the respects it can not cover, we can safely come to the conclusion that the global university should be supported by all the nation[nations] to assist the UN to solve the social problems. Admittedly opening up such an university will cost a lot for every nation and even get critics from society at first, but one should believe that the final success will finally come to the universal university.

这篇文章大致也符合要求了，有一个问题我提出来讨论下，是关于审题的，这个题目有个意思是，建这个学校要所有的国家都要支持，那么再进行了你以上的证明之后，是否有必要证明下“所有国家”，这一点呢？