issue144 戮力同心小组大帖 10号

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提纲：
1. 优秀的评论家给大众正确的导向。
2. 有些时候评论家并不能给作出客观的评价。
3. 真正的艺术是 艺术家和评论家共同努力的结果。
issue144 It is the artist, not the critic, who gives society something of lasting value.
Who gives society some thing of lasting value, artist or critic? The speaker claims the former one. I agree with the speaker, but I think the critic also play an important part in the art area. In fact, both of them give the lasting value to the society.
Firstly, excellent critics is a touchstone for any art work . As is known to all, every art work must be valued by the public. The critics are the first group of audience to the work. Excellent critics  often have professional art knowledge and deep judgement level. Their criticisms often represent the view of the authority. Their objective judgements give the public right direction to appreciate the art work. I can not imagine that unless the art work does be examined by the critcs, it can be called artwork.

However, in some circumstances, the critics can not make correct judgement. The first possible reason is that some critics with low moral standard and low art level often make  judgement on the art work. Their irresponsible behavior often meet their individual interests but severely harm the artist and give wrong information to the public. Another possible reason is that the art work created by the artist can not be appreciated by the contemporary critics.For example, Van Gogh, the founder of impressionism,  who hadn't become famous until his death. He  was once denied by the critics because his work was so original that the critics can not recognize them as the art.  Until now ,Sunflower was finally be recognized by some critics and he of course become one of the most famous artist of the world.

Finally, in the effort of artist and the critic together, the lasting value can be shown to the society. After creating the art work, the artist may not know whether the work can make lasting value. The value of the artwork must be admitted by the critics. Often the criticism made by critic can help the artist  find the right direction to improve the work. So the critic and artist supplement each other.

In sum, the speaker's view is too absolute. We can not ingore contribution  made by the critics to the art improvement. Although not all the critics are satisfied, we can not overlook the effort made by the critics.

[ 本帖最后由 jiangzuodong 于 2007-8-13 22:38 编辑 ]

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Who gives society some thing of lasting value, artist or critic? The speaker claims the former one. I agree with the speaker, but I think the critic also play an important part in the art area. In fact, both of them give the lasting value to the society.

Firstly, excellent critics is a touchstone for any art work . As is known to all, every art work must be valued by the public. The critics are the first group of audience to the work. Excellent critics  often have professional art knowledge and deep judgement level. Their criticisms often represent the view of the authority. Their objective judgements give the public right direction to appreciate the art work. I can not imagine that unless the art work does be examined by the critcs, it can be called artwork.
这段讲cirtics有用,最好举个例子,比如帮助外行人鉴别古董的价值，评论一个电影是否有艺术价值,值得一看.
你开头说同意作者的观点,可你没有论述artists的作用,第一段应该说艺术家才是艺术的真正创造者

However, in some circumstances, the critics can not make correct judgement. The first possible reason is that some critics with low moral standard and low art level often make  judgement on the art work. Their irresponsible behavior often meet their individual interests but severely harm the artist and give wrong information to the public. Another possible reason is that the art work created by the artist can not be appreciated by the contemporary critics.For example, Van Gogh, the founder of impressionism,  who hadn't become famous until his death. He  was once denied by the critics because his work was so original that the critics can not recognize them as the art. Until now ,Sunflower was finally be recognized by some critics and he of course become one of the most famous artist of the world. 这句有问题，出现了两个时态
Finally, in the effort of artist and the critic together, the lasting value can be shown to the society. After creating the art work, the artist may not know whether the work can make lasting value. The value of the artwork must be有点绝对，观众也是鉴赏者啊 admitted by the critics. Often the criticism made by critic can help the artist  find the right direction to improve the work. So the critic and artist supplement each other.

In sum, the speaker's view is too absolute. We can not ingore contribution  made by the critics to the art improvement. Although not all the critics are satisfied, we can not overlook the effort made by the critics.

全文都没有提到艺术家的作用,建议用一段来说明,
对批评家的正反论述挺好的

[ 本帖最后由 qawsed 于 2007-8-12 17:21 编辑 ]

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[ 本帖最后由 qawsed 于 2007-8-12 17:20 编辑 ]