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  Is it crucial for public leaders to obey the highest moral standards? It is more reasonable to distinguish the public role from the private role of public leaders than to give a general answer. In my opnion, it is fundamental for all public officials, not only in politics but also in business, to maintain the public morality which is determined by their own careers.

  The most important duty of political leaders is to create welfare of the country, to maintain prosperity of the society, and develop a good environment for people to live and work in. The public morality in political realm is that any leader should not gain his or her own interests on the cost of the country, the society and the people. Anyone who betrays this morality will eventually be abandoned by his or her country and people. For example, Hitler, as the leader of German, initiated the invasion of Portland and sequent the World War Two in order to meet his own greedy.  All his military determinations and movements not only endangered other countries but also put German into a hazardous dilemma, and made Germans facing difficulties of starvation and exposures for country's expenditures were used in the war. All of these drove most German officials to resist Hitler's command and Hitler had to end his career and life in suicide at last. In democratic society, it is more obviously that the violation of this public morality costs a high price, just like what Nixon paid for the Watergate Scandal.

  In business realm, although the profit maximization is the goal on which all leaders in company have to pay most attention, they still cannot break the principles of their own pubic morality--not to pursue profits on the cost of consumers. Otherwise they would have to face the same fate as political leaders who violate rights and infesters of people since the company's market and even the long-term profits are based on the attitude of consumers. A negative example can be drawn from Toshiba, one kind of whose notebook computers has great defects. The company confessed this and allowed its users in North America to refund wholly or exchange an advanced one for the old one while this service were not provided to Chinese users. Since then Toshiba lost a huge market in China and confidence of consumers all over the world which weakened the company greatly. The leaders of Toshiba should be responsible for their short-sight and leaders of other companies can learn a significant lesson from this.

  Comparing with the public morality, some defaults in the private morality and behavior are not the key factors to valuate the efficiency of leaders' work. Bill Clinton, the former president of USA, is a good example in the point. After sex scandal people noticed his personal defaults in some behavior and habits but the supporting rates for his work as president remained high all over the country. The reason is that Clinton didn't violate the public morality and people were satisfactory with his efficient work as public official. In fact, not only Clinton, many other leaders also have this or that problem in their own lives which doesn't always prevent them becoming an efficient leaders.

Although the fact that leaders maintain the highest moral standards can have an enormous effect in all aspects of our society, unfortunately our hope of all merits with our public leaders is hardly to come true. Facing the limitation of human nature, we have to focus on whether public morality is maintained by those leaders. At the same time, it is wise for leaders to realize that their long-term interests are based on the obedience of public morality.

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Is it crucial for public leaders to obey the highest moral standards? It is more reasonable to distinguish the public role from the private role of public leaders than to give a general answer. In my opnion, it is fundamental for all public officials, not only in politics but also in business, to maintain the public morality which is determined by their own careers.
  The most important duty of political leaders is to create welfare of the country, to maintain prosperity of the society, and develop a good environment for people to live and work in. 我觉得这段中心句应该点题,就是明确写出这些工作是基于ethical and moral standardsThe public morality in political realm is that any leader should not gain his or her own interests on the cost of the country, the society and the people. Anyone who betrays this morality will eventually be abandoned by his or her country and people. For example, Hitler唉,IRIS狂批我举希特勒的例子, as the leader of German, initiated the invasion of Portland and sequent the World War Two in order to meet his own greedy.  All his military determinations and movements not only endangered other countries but also put German into a hazardous dilemma, and made Germans facing difficulties of starvation and exposures for country's expenditures were used in the war. All of these drove most German officials to resist Hitler's command and Hitler had to end his career and life in suicide at last.其实希特勒是一个演说家和蛊惑者,全德国人民都很崇拜他,违背他的是少数。他的死主要是因为战争失败 In democratic society, it is more obviously that the violation of this public morality costs a high price, just like what Nixon paid for the Watergate Scandal.
  In business realm, although the profit maximization is the goal on which all leaders in company走题,public official是指官员,不是公司高层 have to pay most attention, they still cannot break the principles of their own pubic morality--not to pursue profits on the cost of consumers. Otherwise they would have to face the same fate as political leaders who violate rights and infesters of people since the company's market and even the long-term profits are based on the attitude of consumers. A negative example can be drawn from Toshiba, one kind of whose notebook computers has great defects. The company confessed this and allowed its users in North America to refund wholly or exchange an advanced one for the old one while this service were not provided to Chinese users. Since then Toshiba lost a huge market in China and confidence of consumers all over the world which weakened the company greatly. The leaders of Toshiba唉,立脚点果然到公司高层去了 should be responsible for their short-sight and leaders of other companies can learn a significant lesson from this.
  Comparing with the public morality, some defaults in the private morality and behavior are not the key factors to valuate the efficiency of leaders' work. Bill Clinton, the former president of USA, is a good example in the point. After sex scandal people noticed his personal defaults in some behavior and habits but the supporting rates for his work as president remained high all over the country. The reason is that Clinton didn't violate the public morality小姐,你看看题,别人最高的道德标准,没有落脚点在公共道德上啊,这段似乎又偏了 and people were satisfactory with his efficient work as public official. In fact, not only Clinton, many other leaders also have this or that problem in their own lives which doesn't always prevent them becoming an efficient leaders.
Although the fact that leaders maintain the highest moral standards can have an enormous effect in all aspects of our society, unfortunately our hope of all merits with our public leaders is hardly to come true. Facing the limitation of human nature, we have to focus on whether public morality is maintained by those leaders. At the same time, it is wise for leaders to realize that their long-term interests are based on the obedience of public morality.
对于这篇文章我要说下面几点:
1. 这篇 文章 似乎只能写一边倒,就是完全赞成的立场
2. 回头再来审题:作为一个有效的领导,官员必须有德。我觉得你BODY第一段写得很好,2 3段写走题了。
这个题目的意思是国家官员必须有德,这样才是有效领导者。
一般思路是:有德是有效领导  无德不是有效领导
你初时德思路是 不光政治有德,而且经济上也有德,这样写是对的,不能算偏题,因为这是领导者工作的两个方面。
但你写着写着就偏了,第二段把主语变成了 公司领导  第三段 衍生出来了“个人道德”这个概念
不知我这样说清楚没有,不知你是否接受

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