九月IBT-第二十八次作业 airbots 名人就应该被模仿？

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Whether famous people should be followed or not, different people may have their own opinions, due to their various perpectives. Some people think famous people are their ideals and they like to use what kind of shampoo the famous used, or walk by mimicing the famous style. Others believes that following the famous will make them feel uncomfortable. In my opinion, before mimicing the famous, people should have the abilities to tell the truth from the false, discriminate the virtues from the scandals, and distinguish the good from the the evil.  

First and the foremost, It is obvious that famous people are human beings, they have some flaws identically as normal people. There many scandals about athletes and stars, such as sex violance, drug adiction, and so on. If all  of us follow them unthinkably what hell our society will be. It is necessary to think about what the famous do or speak will cause before mimicing them.     

The second reason which comes closely with the first one is what the famous do or speak has its inclination which maybe not suitable for every person. For example, a star helps shampoo company to advertise its product. Even he say that he like to use this product, that do not mean this product could be used to anyone. Without considering the famous inclination, it is unreasonable to follow them.

However, apart from the two scenarios above, the famous have the reasons to be excelled, that's to say, some famous people do have virtues that ordaniry people do not have, such as perseverance, hardworking, or better communication skills which is wirth following not only by people who admir them, but by all people who want to success. A fitting example can shed some light on this point, Michael Jordan, who is not the tallist in NBA sports, but with his efforts, talent, and will power finally becomes the most worthful player in NBA history.

All in all, based on those three reasons, the question about should the famous be followed is a case-by-case analysis, it's decided by what kind of things the famous do: permitting the good behaviors and geting rid of the evil ones.

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Whether famous people should be followed or not, different people may have their own opinions, due to their various perpectives. Some people think famous people are their ideals and they like to use what kind of shampoo the famous used, or walk by mimicing the famous style. Others believes that following the famous will make them feel uncomfortable. In my opinion, before mimicing the famous, people should have the abilities to tell the truth from the false, discriminate the virtues from the scandals, and distinguish the good from the the evil. (1.OPINIONS 和SHAMPOO和STYLE的联系有点微妙 2.题目讲的是PAY ATTETION TO THEIR OPINIONS, 并没有说FOLLOW)文章的主题的是要懂得辨别是非而不是盲从,那么从读者的观点看,就默认为是要PAY ATTETION TO THEIR OPINIONS 的了,因为只有这样才能辨别.建议对是否PAY ATTETION的问题最好用一句话明确说一下

First and the foremost, It is obvious that famous people are human beings, they have some flaws identically as normal people. There many scandals about athletes and stars, such as sex violance, drug adiction, and so on. If all  of us follow them unthinkably what hell our society will be. It is necessary to think about what the famous do or speak will cause before mimicing them.     

The second reason which comes closely with the first one is what the famous do or speak has its inclination which maybe not suitable for every person. For example, a star helps shampoo company to advertise its product. Even he say that he like to use this product, that do not mean this product could be used to anyone. Without considering the famous inclination, it is unreasonable to follow them.

However, apart from the two scenarios above, the famous have the reasons to be excelled, that's to say, some famous people do have virtues that ordaniry people do not have, such as perseverance, hardworking, or better communication skills which is wirth following not only by people who admir them, but by all people who want to success. A fitting example can shed some light on this point, Michael Jordan, who is not the tallist in NBA sports, but with his efforts, talent, and will power finally becomes the most worthful player in NBA history.

All in all, based on those three reasons, the question about should the famous be followed is a case-by-case analysis, it's decided by what kind of things the famous do: (这个符号...用--吧)permitting the good behaviors and geting rid of the evil ones.

呵呵,感觉写的好像ARGU啊
特意把你的论述性段落贴到WORD 里看了下字数,前两段70左右,稍少了些

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