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发表于 2007-8-24 20:19:40 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
TOPIC: ISSUE136 - "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
WORDS: 514          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2007-8-24 18:02:02


When asked whether you agree or disagree with the saying that the things which are lack of choice is very, very rare, people may find it difficult to come to consensus due to their different background and conflicting value. As far as I am concerned, I am not willing to stand on the side of the author's opinion but insist that although, in most circumstances, people can make choices on alternatives, in some cases, there is only one way left for them.

In the first place, people have to admit that they have no other choices facing some embarrassing situation, and they make the decision in a negative way. The 26th president Abraham Lincoln, was well know for his high moral standard in his decision in emacipationemancipation of slaves and abandoning the law of slavery but few knows that he had no choices in that kind of situation. The primitive condition of the War for the north troop is somewhat pessimistic for the reason that although Lincoln was mercy on south slaves, he was not a decisive revolution advocator. The war fare is not on the side of the north and their troop and the nation is on the line of diminishing. Lincoln realized that he have no choice at that time and must lead the Civil War to revive the destinedestiny of nation. With the help of Black slaves, Lincoln finally won the war rescuing the nation's fate and emancipating the south slaves. Comprehending that well-accepted fact Lincoln is the hero of Civil War as well as the discrimination and democracy, he was force to do it because, if we have to list the alternatives, he had the choice of to live or to die.

Although instances show that there are no choices in some cases, alternatives exist, usually. The notorious incidence of Mistubish Motor fare is a point in case. The fallacy quality of motor engine was found by engineers in Mistubish Company and was reported to the head. Meditation and debate on the choices in leader conference of whether to stop the manufacturing immediatelyimmediately and reallocate all the sold motors, was feousfurious but the conclusion was evil -- to covering the fact. Any evil are worthy of punishment by god, so is the Mitsubish Company. After sequential accidents, the engineers from rival company discover the fallacy and after that the sales condition dropped and the company fell into the condition of corruptioncorruption. There are always two ways in front of a decision, but under the allure of profit and fame, people always choose the evil one which leads them to bad ending.

The similar situation happened in the Dell company whose chevechief executives have far-seeing eye-sight. When discovered that the battery of the newly produced notebook computer has fault and in the danger of exploiting, the company stop the product quickly and announce to reallocate all the batteries. This decision not only rescued the fame of this foreign corporation but also accelerated the credibility in customs. They made the right choice.

In summary, I agree that although something has no choices, most one have alternatives while some leader choose the right one and some choose the bad, but it is likely that people will never be able to arrive at the same conclusion on this controversial issue. However, taking into account all the dimensions in the above analysis might be a decisive step out of this dilemma.
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发表于 2007-8-24 23:34:01 |只看该作者
TOPIC: ISSUE136 - "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
WORDS: 514          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2007-8-24 18:02:02


When asked whether you agree ordisagree with the saying that the things which are lack of choice isvery, very rare, people may find it difficult to come to consensus dueto their different background and conflicting value. As far as I amconcerned, I am not willing to stand on the side of the author'sopinion but insist that although, in most circumstances, people canmake choices on alternatives, in some cases, there is only one way left for them.最后一句的表达很不错,自己观点也明确了

In the first place, people have to admit that they have no other choices facing some embarrassing situation, and they make the decision in a negative way. The 26th president Abraham Lincoln, was well known for his high moral standard in his decision in emacipationemancipationof slaves and abandoning the law of slavery but few knows that he hadno choices in that kind of situation. The primitive condition of theWar for the north troop is somewhat pessimistic for the reason thatalthough Lincoln was mercy on south slaves, he was not a decisive revolutionadvocator. The war fare is not on the side of the north and their troopand the nation is on the line of diminishing. Lincoln realized that hehave no choice at that time and must lead the Civil War to revive avoid thedestinedestiny of nation. With the help ofBlack slaves, Lincoln finally won the war rescuing the nation's fateand emancipating the south slaves. Comprehending that well-acceptedfact Lincoln is the hero of Civil War as well as the discrimination anddemocracy, he was force to do it because, if we have to list thealternatives, he had the choice of to live or to die.你的例子好,我没见过。我唯一能轻松想到的就是环境保护,象核弹等,也是毁灭与否的唯一选择。

Although instances show that thereare no choices in some cases, alternatives exist, usually. Thenotorious incidence of Mistubishi Motor fare is a point in case. Thefallacy fallacious quality of motor engine was found by engineers in MistubishCompany and was reported to the head. Meditation and debate on thechoices in leader conference of whether to stop the manufacturingimmediatelyimmediately and reallocate all the sold motors, was feousfuriousbut the conclusion was evil 用vice,evil语气太重了-- to covering cover the fact. Any evil areworthy of punishment by god, so is the Mitsubish Company. Aftersequential accidents, the engineers from rival company discover thefallacy and after that the sales condition dropped and the company fellinto the condition of corruptioncorruption似乎是bankruptcy,但与事实不符啊,有导致破产吗,corruption是腐败.There are always two ways in front of a decision, but under the allureof profit and fame, people always choose the evil one which leads themto bad ending.

The similar situation happened in the Dell company whose chevechiefexecutives have far-seeing eye-sight eyesight. When discovered that the batteryof the newly produced notebook computer has fault and in the danger ofexploiting exploding, the company stop the product quickly and announce toreallocate all the batteries. This decision not only rescued the fameof this foreign corporation but also accelerated the credibility incustomers. They made the right choice.

In summary, I agree that althoughsomething has no choices, most one have alternatives while some leaderchoose the right one and some choose the bad, but it is likely thatpeople will never be able to arrive at the same conclusion on thiscontroversial issue. However, taking into account all the dimensions inthe above analysis might be a decisive step out of this dilemma.
你将命题做了小小的转换:选择是有的,但有好结果也 有坏结果的,必须选择有好结果的选择(商业上)  我认为你应该在以下的段落中更明确说明:商业要想获得长久利益,那么欺诈行为是永远不被接受的,真正的选择是唯一的。这道题很有难度,网上有别人的提纲其中有一点说的是:教育的过程是先教,然后学生才能知,这一过程永远没有第二种选择(当然前提是要掌握知识,拒绝学习就没有谈的必要了),我的思路也基本上这些:要想有好的结果,选择是唯一的。

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