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TOPIC: ISSUE233 - "Although innovations such as video, computers, and the Internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students, these technologies all too often distract from real learning."
WORDS: 373          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2007-11-18 10:35:34

With more and more advanced instruct equicment advent, our education achievement are also improved overtime. The author assert that technologies all too often distract from real learning. I agree the contention to some extent, much more methods impede the development of the real education.

Nowadays, our life is altered so fast even every seconds throughout such a various world. Consequently, the methods in education are also changed so great that we can suscept them as soon as they emerge.Believe that we all know that technologies make human being improve as soon as possible.However, does it bring more advantages to our real learning. This is needed to be substantiated.

Innovation such as video, computers, and the Internet seem to offer schools improved for instructing students. Whether such methods really effective to our students for real learning? Not completely, I concede. Because of these technologies, sloth, like rust, consumes faster than  labor wears. Take the Internet in our learning, some students use them to copy their homework instead of think and work out them by themself. As dictated above, we can conclude that technologies cannot benefit the real learning to some degress.

Admittedly, these ways cannot serve to the students much more study, but they are also significant to our life in other words. Do you think so?In bussiness, technologies inject new ideas to commerical chances.In science, technologies offer more likelihoods to futher inventions. In architecture, technologies make many creat minds come into practice. In short, technologies are rather useful to nearly all the realms.

In addion, we should treat technologies to education from more perspectives, so that we could acknowledge the true function to our real learning. Such as when it turn to instruct a large number of informations to students, common sense tells us the technologied is necessary to let the abord more effective.

In sum, video, televsion, telephone, computers, and even Internet, vital to our whole world can never be debuious completely. Though some disadvantages exist in these technologies, the contributions to all of the whole world are rather enormous. We can not  judge their value only depend on putting eyes on the education, it is only a part of the life, many other fields require them to achieve rather fantastic profession.


TOPIC: ARGUMENT118 - The following appeared in a newsletter from a national astronomy association.

"Various sources are predicting higher-than-average temperatures across the country next winter, including in Sun City, the traditional location of our yearly winter conference. Higher winter temperatures are sure to result in higher-than-usual tourism in Sun City, a location already known for its attractive beaches and good weather. Hotels will have fewer rooms available, transportation will be more difficult to reserve, and public places such as parks and restaurants will be more crowded. These conditions are likely to significantly reduce attendance at the conference. We should therefore move our conference to a city less popular with winter tourists."
WORDS: 203          TIME: 00:30:00          DATE: 2007-11-18 10:35:34

In this argument, the author concludes  that  we should therefore move our conference to a city less popular with winter tourists. To substantiate the contention, the author points out that hotels will have fewer rooms available ,transportation wil be more difficult to reserve, and public places such as parks and restaurants will be more crowded. In addition, the author also assumes that these conditions are possible to strongly reduce attendance at the conference. The argument is fraught with too much vague, oversimplified, unwarranted assumptions.

Firstly, the author does not tell us why the increaseing of winter tourists influence our conference and even the reasons why the attendance would significant reduce.Maybe the

Secondly, the prediction in the argument is unreliable because of it is based on groudless conditions.

Finally, the author establish a relationship no reasons between the winter tourists and our conference.

In conclusion, the argument is never reliable because of lacking so much sufficient  effective evidents which should be offer to strengthen the deduction.To better assess the argument, the author should provide more strongly proofs to solide the conclusion. As we all conceded, I require to be told more informations concerning the the winter tourists whether influence our conference to some degree.