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发表于 2008-4-5 13:27:11 |显示全部楼层
88"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics." (52)
一半同意一半反对
1、        同意技术会影响社会习俗:从原始的火种的发现导致人们开始喜欢吃熟食到电脑促使人们放弃原始的计算方式
2、        同意技术影响道德:克隆
3、        不同意将决定习俗或道德:习俗是关于多数人的习惯,生鱼片。道德关于一个人的信仰或多数人的信仰,堕胎。

TOPIC: ISSUE88 - "Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."
WORDS: 476          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2008-4-5 11:22:34

The speaker asserts that social customs and ethics are not only influenced but also determined by technologies. I agree insofar that technologies impact changes of our life from many respects; however, it is not the direct inducement of such changes.

I agree that on which stage the technologies are is significant factor influencing our lifestyle. A great many examples are involved in the improvement of our standard of living and comfort level the technological changes brought out. For instance, the reason why we are used to eating cooked meat rather than raw is because human found fire and fired food is more delicious. Else, we can forsake the old methods of counting such as using sticks and stones is the contribution of invention and development of computers which can free up many our time by performing competitive and complicated tasks. Our messages are delivered in seconds not during marathon after internet provides us the convenience. From the countless examples, we are informed that technological innovations are necessary inducements of new form of customs.

Alike, our ethical minds have been violated and confused all the time during the progress of technology. One needs look no further than the great impact of birth of clone technology. The ewe gives birth to dolly and along with many ethical problems such as whether dolly has a mother or father for the reason that she is just a copy owning the totally same organ and tissue with named father. What's more, many people oppose to apply such technology to human being for the reason that a clone man is besides the definition of social and no fit status can be nominated to him/her. Nevertheless, there are still many technologies being accepted by more and more people such as

However, I disagree with the second prong of the statement that social customs and ethics are finally decided by the technologies. Actually, people will change customs and ethics only because the new customs and ethics can do lots of good to most people. It's the nature feelings of humankind that determine social customs and ethics. That is also why people from different districts can remain part of distinct customs and ethics when they are all in the same standard of technology. Custom is determined by the habit of people not the technology, such as sashimi is still a staple dish in Japan because people there like its taste since the fire was not found. Ethics is determined by people’s belief, an ample example is that admission of abortion in China comes with eschewing the form of that technology but because it don’t conflict with the belief of most Chinese.

In sum, the technologies have great impact on the change of social costumes and ethics because they change people’s mind. For this reason, it is human mind not technologies determine social costumes and ethics.

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发表于 2008-4-7 00:03:30 |显示全部楼层
The speaker asserts that social customs and ethics are not only influenced but also determined by technologies. I agree insofar that technologies impact changes of our life from many respects; however, it is not the direct inducement of such changes.

I agree that on which stage the technologies are is a significant factor influencing our lifestyle. A great many examples are involved in the improvement of our standard of living and comfort level the technological changes brought out. For instance, the reason why we are used to eating(be used to 表过去习惯于,用be accustomed to是不是好一些?) cooked meat rather than raw is because human found fire and fired food is more delicious. Else, we can forsake the old methods of counting such as using sticks and stones is the contribution of invention and development of computers which can free up many of our time by performing competitive and complicated tasks(感觉用木棒和石头计数与计算机计算的跨度太大了,你可以写以前用心算或是笔算). Our messages are delivered in seconds not during marathon(是个固定词语搭配吗?我不太明白这个意思) after internet provides us the convenience. From the countless examples, we are informed that technological innovations are necessary inducements of new form of customs.

Alike, our ethical minds have been violated and confused all the time during the progress of technology. One needs look no further than the great impact of birth of clone technology. The ewe gives(gave) birth to dolly and(去掉) along with many ethical problems such as whether dolly has a mother or father for the reason that she is just a copy owning the totally same organ(organs) and tissue(tissues) with named father(不明白指的是什么). What's more, many people oppose to apply such technology to human being for the reason that a clone man is besides the definition of social(beyond the definition of society?) and no fit status can be nominated to him/her. Nevertheless, there are still many technologies being accepted by more and more people such as

However, I disagree with the second prong of the statement that social customs and ethics are finally decided by the technologies. Actually, people will change customs and ethics only because(when) the new customs and ethics can do lots of good to most people. It's the nature feelings(前后单复数不一致) of humankind that determine social customs and ethics. That is also why people from different districts can remain part of distinct customs and ethics when they are all in the same standard of technology. Custom is determined by the habit of people not by the technology, such as sashimi is still a staple dish in Japan because people there like its taste since the fire was not found. Ethics is determined by people’s belief, an ample example is that admission of abortion in China comes with eschewing the form of that technology(不太明白意思) but because it don’t conflict with the belief of most Chinese.

In sum, the technologies have great impact on the change of social costumes and ethics because they change people’s mind. For this reason(有因果联系吗?), it is human mind not technologies determine social costumes and ethics.

语言流畅,举例充分,就是有些用词需要斟酌一下。

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