issue 136 [火箭组 第三次作业]

t3123055UID: 2498724

The speaker's contention that the absence of choice is a condition that is very rare is fundamentally reasonable according with our common sense. I strongly agree with it. Besides, ‘no choice’ usually suggests that someone state in a poor estate.

Let us consider the chance in our life. As we known, in our democratic society, most of us have many rights----in terms of the right of education, freedom to make decision on our marriage. Meanwhile, in the process of our career, we earn countless choices staying ahead of ourselves. When we were children, we could choose the guys who would play with me in games. Then, we grew up into adolescents, we could choose to strive to study hard or not, as we became adults, we could choose the place where we would work. In short, our life is laden with all sorts of choices. Even someone says he is in trouble, he has no choice, it is a choice in front of him rather than no choice.

When it comes to the choice which we do not own, we always say that we have no choice. In fact, there are enormous reasons. Above all, maybe someone feels that he is trap in economy. A fitting example is that many students who graduate from senior middle school can not go to college, and finally they were forced to work with poor salary in cities far away from his rural area. Financial condition prevents him from continuing his study and renders him to seek for another road of life. In addition, many people in middle age also feel they are in the crisis of economy. For instance, sometimes they feel they are lost at work, which imposes a lot of stresses on them, in their mind appears an idea that they should quit from work, however they may not find relatively better job to feed their family. Thus they have not other choices but the one that they will keep their position. In conclusion, ‘no choice’ actually suggests that people confront some difficulty in finance. At certain epoch, some political circumstance also impedes choices of people. Taking going abroad as an example, when the politic of the country which is the destination of us is unstable, the number of foreigner decreased drastically, thus that will lead to many ambitious students can not go out. What’s more, some vote right may change at different period, in some date of autarchy, It is an tendency that the majority of people don not have right of expressing their own idea. In contrast, in some democratic time, everyone have certain political right like voting superior. From an individual point of view, ‘no choice’ sometimes indicates that someone is in a confused condition, maybe he is lazy or no ideal in his life, even he is content with actual estate of living, he feel he ‘no choice’ except keeping current state. In other word, ‘no choice’ usually connects with one's quality.

Actually, choices surely are popularly seen in our lives. At the level of petty things, we always find many avenues to go. A simple things can illustrate clearly this issue, for example, when we want to go shopping, we find there are many transport tools to reach the destination like bus, taxi or bike. At our societal level, we also often feel we face many important opportunity, should we focus on industry or agriculture? Should we increase out output or input? Should we enlarge our high education or lessen it? Should we pay more attention to east development or help enhance level of living condition(shenghuo tiaojian) in western China? A serial of problems above inform us we possess a great deal of choices which wait for us to decide.


In sum, except human beings are trapping in confused, plenty choices was laid ahead of us. If we will, we can choose one of them to serve for us. However, choice is a determination for life, we must choose it prudently.  

lfj1865UID: 2413050

The speaker's contention that the absence of choice a condition that (删去)is very rare is fundamentally reasonable according with our common sense. I strongly agree with it. Besides, ‘no choice’ usually suggests that someone states in a poor estate.

Let us consider the chance in our life. As we known, in our democratic society, most of us have many rights----in terms of the right of education, freedom to make decision on our marriage. Meanwhile, in the process of our career, we earn countless choices staying ahead of ourselves. When we were children, we could choose the guys who would play with me in games. Then, we grew up into adolescents, and we could choose to strive to study hard or not. As we became adults, we could choose the place where we would work. In short, our life is laden with all sorts of choices. Even someone says he is in trouble, he has no choice, it(there) is a choice in front of him rather than no choice. (句子有点简单，句子结构有点乱)

When it comes to the choice which we do not own, we always say that we have no choice. In fact, there are enormous reasons. Above all, maybe someone feels that he is trap in economy. A fitting example is that many students who graduate from senior middle school can not go to college, and finally they were（are） forced to work with poor salary in cities far away from his rural area. Financial condition prevents him from continuing his study and renders him to seek for another road of life. In addition, many people in middle age also feel they are in the crisis of economy. For instance, sometimes they feel they are lost at work, which imposes a lot of stresses on them, in their mind appears an idea（and an idea appears in their mind） that they should quit from work, however they may not find relatively better job to feed their family. Thus they have not other choices but the one that they will keep their position. In conclusion, ‘no choice’ actually suggests that people confront some difficulty in finance. At certain epoch, some political circumstance also impedes choices of people. Taking going abroad as an example, when the politic of the country which is the destination of us is unstable, the number of foreigner decreased drastically. Thus many ambitious students can not go out(这样好一点). What’s more, some vote right may change at（in）different period. In some date of autarchy, it is an tendency that the majority of people don not have right of expressing(to express 更好一点) their own idea. In contrast, in some democratic time, everyone have certain political right like voting superior. From an individual point of view, ‘no choice’ sometimes indicates that someone is in a confused condition, maybe he is lazy or no ideal（has no ideal） in his life, even he is content with actual estate of living, he feel he ‘no choice’ except keeping current state.（句子结构不对） In other word, ‘no choice’ usually connects with one's quality.

Actually, choices surely are popularly seen in our lives. At the level of pretty things, we always find many avenues to go. A simple things can illustrate clearly this issue, for example, when we want to go shopping, we find there are many transport tools to reach the destination like bus, taxi or bike. At our societal level, we also often feel we face many important opportunity. Should we focus on industry or agriculture? Should we increase out output or input? Should we enlarge our high education or lessen it? Should we pay more attention to east development or help enhance level of living condition(shenghuo tiaojian) in western China? A serial of problems above inform us we possess a great deal of choices which wait for us to decide.


In sum, except human beings are trapping in confused, plenty choices was (were)laid ahead of us. If we will, we can choose one of them to serve for us. However, choice is a determination for life, we must choose it prudently.  

楼主写的有点口语化，呵呵，需要好好注意一下句子结构

yogurt4UID: 198389

楼主，注意一下发帖格式
自己修改一下吧:loveliness: