IMPLUSE小组作业-周5作业

kturyUID: 2274868

agree or disagree 同时做多件事情时，一次做完一个，再做下一个的方法比较好（与2007.3.3神思，周五作业）。

Everyone has his/her own approaches to complete the assignment. According to me, I agree with the speaker that working out the assignments one by one when one is solving many works at the same time. This method could help me to avoid making mistakes, decrease pressures gradually and degrade the work's hard level.

Firstly, concentrating the energy and attention on one assignment could not make the blunder easily. As we all know that errancies usually cause by halfhearted and unforced attention. Also, one's attention hardly concentrates at one point if he/she doing many works at one time. For example, once I had a diner with my friend, after dinner I pay 100 yuan for the waiter, but, who could not find the bill. So I had to wait and found that many bills massy put on the desk. The waiter was looking for my bill confusedly while one who chick bill and paid 100 yuan to him. Then the water stopped to find another bill. So only the chick-out cost my 15 minutes and more returned 5 yuan. People can see this point that doing many jobs at one time is low efficiency and tends to make mistakes.

Secondly, it is no denying that the stress does decrease with the labors have been done one by one. The overdue pressure affects people's mood and plays down people's confidence which. When students front the collage entrance exam, they all feel great pressure. As the huge number of exam papers and the difficult curriculums, students must keep sense and clearly know which curriculum is the disadvantage and pay more time on it. some student, however, spend time average on every curriculum but obtain little progress at a short time. Day after day, these students lose confidence and feel tired undergoing the great pressure, so the advance must be hampered.

Lastly, it, accomplishing the labor one by on, is an adoptable way to degrade the work's hard level. It is difficult to find the way to breach some intractable works. To some extent, just finishing the works one by one is the best approach. In conclusion, the best way to solve many works is one by one.

lemon1kgUID: 2309820

Everyone has his/her own approaches to complete the assignment. According to me, I agree with the speaker that working out the assignments one by one (is good 加上才是作者原话吧，不然没有好坏差别啊~)when one is solving many works at the same time(many tasks need to be solved at the same time). This method could help me to avoid making mistakes, decrease pressures gradually and degrade the work's hard level（level of harship 要表达困难程度对吧，这样是不是好点）.

Firstly, concentrating the energy and attention on one assignment could not make the blunder easily(改成it is adj to ...的形式，不头重脚轻). As we all know that errancies usually cause by halfhearted and unforced attention(?). Also, one's attention hardly concentrates at one point if he/she doing many works at one time. For example, once I had a diner with my friend, after dinner I pay 100 yuan for the waiter, but, who (he,不然病句)could not find the bill. So I had to wait and found that many bills massy put on the desk. The waiter was looking for my bill confusedly while one （谁啊？）who chick bill and paid 100 yuan to him. Then the water stopped to find another（the other） bill. So only（just） the chick-out(checking-out) cost my 15 minutes and more returned 5 yuan. People can see this point that doing many jobs at one time is low efficiency and tends to make mistakes.(这个例子表达的有点问题，不够支持观点的感觉~)

Secondly, it is no denying that the stress does decrease with the labors have been done one by one.（病句） The overdue pressure affects people's mood and plays down people's confidence which（？）. When students front the collage entrance exam, they all feel great pressure. As（Facing...As后面跟句子~） the huge number of exam papers and the difficult curriculums, students must keep sense and clearly know which curriculum is the disadvantage and pay(spend )more time on it. some student, however, spend time averagely on every curriculum but obtain little progress at a short time(为什么要强调短时间?). Day after day, these students lose confidence and feel tired undergoing the great pressure, so the advance must be hampered.

Lastly, it, accomplishing the labor one by on, is an adoptable way to degrade the work's hard level. It is difficult to find the way to breach some intractable works. To some extent, just finishing the works one by one is the best approach. In conclusion, the best way to solve many works is one by one.
总结另起一段，而且太短了~看起来结尾像没有了一样.
如果你写三个观点，每段字数稍微平衡一点~

我写的也一般，一起加油吧~

kturyUID: 2274868

unforced attention精力不集中 嘿嘿  精力不集中怎表达?
谢谢你的细心批改，很受益！！赞！！

lemon1kgUID: 2309820

我的语言都是自己编的，呵呵~ 大概变成lack of concentration 或者 less concentrated~
周天作业的观点我改了下，帮我看看行不行吧，谢啦！