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Movies and televisions have more positive or more negative effects on young people's behaviors.（与经典185神似， 周三作业）

Nowadays, movie and television industry is becoming more and more flourishing and there are so many people choosing movies as their main relaxing way. Therefore, a new hot debate about the influence of movies and televisions on young people is under way, at the same time, different people hold different attitudes according to their experience and judging standards. As far as I am concerned, movies and televisions are good influences on people's behaviors.

To start up, when it comes to amusing movie, we can find its positive effect on the cultivating of young people's healthy psychological conditions from their behaviors. Young people who are crazy about amusing movies tend to be open-minded and prefer to outside activities and making a lot of friends. According to an investigation in my college, the number of people, who were inclined to kill their leisure time by the way of climbing mountain, visiting park, attending outdoor sports and so on, was three time as more as who weren't. Meanwhile, this proportion was the same as the people who frequently watch amusing movies and TV programs to who didn't. Through interviewing a large number of students in my college, we discovered that people who appreciated a lot of amusing movies and TV programs considering public and outdoor activities as a good way to keep good conditions as the roles in programs had.

Another part of people often watch serious movies, this kind of movies and TV programs make them decent in dressing and personal behaviors. They learn a lot of customs of people who possess different culture backgrounds, this knowledge allow them to communicate with various friends effectively and successfully. If young people are businessmen, they can easily get familiar with their customers and sell their commodities. If youngsters are government officers, they are able to explain government policies or execute rules by means of civilians' customs and special notions. Take tearing old buildings for example, people may have distinct opinions about demolish a certain old tower which belongs to one minority.

Last but not least, history movie is also a important genre and recording some essential events about our social history. By look at them, young people learn many lessons such as keeping peace from World War Two and concerning our earth from polluted atmosphere and extending of hole in ozone layer. with a increasing number of young people can access to these movies or TV programs, we find that even more young people are friendly to other people and contributing their efforts to reducing the usage of gas and oil, to throwing waste into bins rather roads and to proposing people to abstain smoking in public. So, these programs and movies have great good impact on our young people's behaviors and educate them to undertake more responsibilities.

To sum up, when taking amusing, serious and history movies or TV programs into consideration, we can conclude that young people's behaviors are indeed affected by them. Young people acquire a large amount of knowledge from them and express it in their behaviors.

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Nowadays, movie and television industry is becoming more and more flourishing and there are so many people choosing movies as their main relaxing way. Therefore, a new hot debate about the influence of movies and televisions on young people is under way, at the same time, different people hold different attitudes according to their experience and judging standards[在网上看到的多为standards of judgment 或criteria]. As far as I am concerned, movies and televisions are good influences on people's behaviors.[电影和电视不是一种“影响”，are改为 have]

To start up, when it comes to amusing movie, we can find its positive effect on the cultivating of young people's healthy psychological conditions[赞~我自己不容易想到~] from their behaviors. Young people who are crazy about amusing movies tend to be open-minded and prefer to outside activities and making a lot of friends. According to an investigation in my college, the number of people, who were inclined to kill their leisure time by the way of climbing mountain, visiting park, attending outdoor sports and so on, was three times as more as[as many as] those who weren't. Meanwhile, this proportion was the same as the people who frequently watch amusing movies and TV programs to who didn't[仅仅是比例一样麽....这样子其实不一定说明爱户外运动的就爱看amusing movie。。。]. Through[By] interviewing a large number of students in my college, we discovered that people who appreciated a lot of amusing movies and TV programs considering public and outdoor activities as a good way to keep good conditions as the roles in programs had."F4Uc
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Another part of people often watch serious movies, this kind of movies and TV programs make them decent in dressing and personal behaviors. They learn a lot of customs of people who possess different culture backgrounds, this knowledge allow them to communicate with various friends effectively and successfully. If young people are businessmen, they can easily get familiar with their customers and sell their commodities. If youngsters[学习~] are government officers, they are able to explain government policies or execute rules by means of civilians' customs[是指民族习惯吗？] and special notions. Takeing tearing old buildings for example, people may have distinct opinions about demolishing a certain old tower which belongs to one minority.

Last but not least, history movie is also a important genre and recording some essential events about our social history. By look at[watching] them, young people learn many lessons such as keeping peace from World War Two and concerning [加上for/about] our earth from polluted atmosphere and extending of hole in ozone layer. with a increasing number of young people can access to[can access/ have access to] these movies or TV programs, we find that even more young people are[become] friendly to other people and contributing their efforts to reducing the usage[是“作用”，用waste] of gas and oil, to throwing waste into bins rather [加than] roads and to proposing people to abstain smoking in public. So, these programs and movies have great good impact on our young people's behaviors and educate them to undertake more responsibilities.

To sum up, when taking amusing, serious and history movies or TV programs into consideration, we can conclude that young people's behaviors are indeed affected by them. Young people acquire a large amount of knowledge from them and express it in their behaviors.

[ 本帖最后由 雪羽酒 于 2008-8-21 16:19 编辑 ]

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Nowadays, movie and television industry is becoming more and more flourishing and there are so many people choosing movies as their main relaxing way. Therefore, a new hot debate about the influence of movies and televisions on young people is under way, at the same time, different people hold different attitudes according to their experience and judging standards. As far as I am concerned, movies and televisions are good influences on people's behaviors.

To start up, when it comes to amusing movie, we can find its positive effect on the cultivating of young people's healthy psychological conditions from their behaviors.[这句话没看懂,有点奇怪] Young people who are crazy about amusing movies tend to be open-minded and prefer to outside activities and making a lot of friends. According to an investigation in my college, the number of people, who were inclined to kill their leisure time by the way of climbing mountain, visiting park, attending outdoor sports and so on, was three time as more as who weren't. Meanwhile, this proportion was the same as the people who frequently watch amusing movies and TV programs to who didn't. Through interviewing a large number of students in my college, we discovered that people who appreciated a lot of amusing movies and TV programs considering public and outdoor activities as a good way to keep good conditions as the roles in programs had.
[amusing movies- comedies?]

Another part of people often watch serious movies, this kind of movies and TV programs make them decent in dressing and personal behaviors. They learn a lot of customs of people who possess different culture backgrounds, this knowledge allow [allows]them to communicate with various friends effectively and successfully. If young people are businessmen, they can easily get familiar with their customers and sell their commodities. If youngsters are government officers, they are able to explain government policies or execute rules by means of civilians' customs and special notions. Take tearing old buildings for example, people may have distinct opinions about demolish a certain old tower which belongs to one minority.
[young people 的话,是不是用将来时更好, 他们如果将成为XXX, 那么; 他们如果将成为XXX,如果...?]

Last but not least, history movie is also a important genre and recording some essential events about our social history. By look [watching] at them, young people learn many lessons such as keeping peace from World War Two and concerning our earth from polluted atmosphere and extending of hole in ozone layer. with a increasing number of young people can access to these movies or TV programs, we find that even more young people are friendly to other people and contributing their efforts to reducing the usage of gas and oil, to throwing waste into bins rather roads and to proposing people to abstain smoking in public. So, these programs and movies have great good impact on our young people's behaviors and educate them to undertake more responsibilities.

To sum up, when taking amusing, serious and history movies or TV programs into consideration, we can conclude that young people's behaviors are indeed affected by them. Young people acquire a large amount of knowledge from them and express it in their behaviors.

感觉还可以,用词上再多注意下. 加油!