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university students should be reqired to thake basic science class.....



In contemporary university, students should learn some basic science despite that they are not part of the field of study. You may say that studying this knowledge is a waste of time and pointless in students' major. However, as far as I am concern, this extra knowledge will have a mutual effect on the majors and make learner omnipotent. Sometime, they can help to find a true interest in the academic study.

To begin with, all the science is interaction .They share something in common in spite the fact they came from different subject. Let us take Chemistry and Physics as examples. They seem to be two independent subjects and have their own academics system. But in fact chemistry is something that was separated from physics. As we can see from Marie Curie that she was both a chemist and a physicist. These two subjects are unbreakable. So if a chemistry student study basic physics course, it is not pointless or a waste of time but a reasonable learning. So, requiring students to study the extra basic science is essential.

In addition, the whole education system is a big integrity. The foundation of university could be traced back to the ancient Greek college. The students were arguing their philosophy idea as well as studying geometry. The purpose of setting up the college was not simply for a specific subject but for a universal knowledge. That was such an important point to turn out omnipotent talent. Back to the modern life, this purpose has not been changed. This extra basic science studying ensured the graduates survived in the fierce competitive society. So, requiring students to study this is reasonable.

Last but not least, through this kind of subject, one may probably find their truly majors which is a great turning in one's life. My brother Mike is a vivid example to illustrate my point. He used to study literature in college which was his major subject. But his school required their student to take computer science as an extra course. Generally, he found his strongpoint is computer. Finally he change his major and become a great computer operator now.So the basic science helps he find his direction in career and totally change his life. So, requiring students to study this is beneficial

In conclusion, the issue that university students should be required to take basic science class ever whey are not part of the field of study is essential ,reasonable and  beneficial because it passes on the tradition of college, enhances the major subject and even changes our lives.

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In contemporary university[universities], students should learn some basic science[sciences] despite that they are not part of the field of study. You may say that studying this knowledge is a waste of time and pointless in students' major. However, as far as I am concern, this extra knowledge will have a mutual effect on the majors and make learner[learners] omnipotent. Sometime, they[谁?] can help to find a true interest in the academic study.注意一下复数的使用 因为这里面你指的学校,学习者都是一类人.

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To begin with, all the science is interaction .They share something in common in spite[in spite of] the fact they came from different subject[they, however, came from different subjects actually]. Let us take Chemistry and Physics as examples. They seem to be two independent subjects and have their own academics system. But in fact chemistry is something that was separated from physics. As we can see from Marie Curie that she was both a chemist and a physicist. These two subjects are unbreakable. So if a chemistry student study basic physics course, it is not pointless or a waste of time but a reasonable learning. So, requiring students to study the extra basic science is essential.留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAg
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In addition, the whole education system is a big integrity. The foundation of university could be traced back to the ancient Greek college. The students were arguing their philosophy idea as well as studying geometry. The purpose of setting up the college was not simply for a specific subject but for a universal knowledge. That was such an important point to turn out omnipotent talent. Back to the modern life, this purpose has not been changed. This extra basic science studying ensured the graduates survived in the fierce competitive society. So, requiring students to study this is reasonable.

but not least, through this kind of subject, one may probably find their truly majors which is a great turning in[啥意思?] one's life. My brother Mike is a vivid example to illustrate my point. He used to study literature in college which was his major subject[DEL]. But his school required their student to take computer science as an extra course. Generally, he found his strongpoint is computer. Finally he change his major and become a great computer operator now.So the basic science helps he find his direction in career and totally change his life. So, requiring students to study this is beneficial[具体化,不要用代词]留学|签证|TOEFL|GREl0dT
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In conclusion, the issue that university students should be required to take basic science class ever whey are not part of the field of study is essential [两个谓语],reasonable and  beneficial because it passes on the tradition of college, enhances the major subject and even changes our lives.

全文整体的框架是有  但是2.3 段的主题句有问题,最好直接表明观点 如2段:  learning other basic sciences coures could improve understanding the major because sciences courses are all intersection and penetrate each other.
全文中多处词的单复数运用不得当 可依照第一段修改的方法再检查一下.
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