common小组作文,9月8日,layfolk

layfolkUID: 2418021

Does study of animals help us to learn human nature?(2007.10.27

     As there are lots of differences between human beings and the animals,I don't agree

the idea that the study of animals can help us to learn human nature.As for the reasons,I will make several reasons as below.

     The first reason is that although the human beings evolved from the animal,they have the very paticular characteristics that does'n exist in the animals.For example,man can

make tools and communicate unlimitedly with each others in the use of languages.And

most important to the human beings is that they are the labour man,which,I mean they

have the labour ability,they can invent and produce a lot of things,such as the very

complex tools,the spaceship,which is not being found in animals  so far.

      The second reason is that human beings' spirits and culture heritages is the resouce

which make the significant divisions between animals and human beings.For example,the

same phenomenon that both animal mothers and human mothers feed their babies,the

first is just an animal action,and the second one is full of the anthropological meanings

such as the human emotion,the life span continuing,ect.People themselves create the

human heritages that help them form their own particularities which signify the meaning of "human being".

      In summary,maybe the study of animals have its worth in some other aspects,but I

can't see that it can help the us to know more about the human beings.

   

candiceheUID: 2543359

As there are lots of differences between human beings and the animals, I don't agree with
the idea that the study of animals can help us to learn human nature. As for the reasons, I will make several reasons as below.( There are several reasons as discussed below.)

     The first reason is that although the human beings evolved from the animal, they have the very particular (particular) characteristics that does'n (does not学术文章不要用缩写) exist in the animals. For example, man can make tools and communicate unlimitedly with each others in the use of languages. And most important to the human beings is that they are the labour(labor) man,(不知道可不可以像你这样使用，they own the ability of creating new tools to explore the world) which, I mean they have the labour ability, they can invent and produce a lot of things, such as the (划线部分去掉，再喝后面连读)very complex tools , (such as) the spaceship,(后面再写几个例子) which is not being found in animals(the animal could not)  so far.

      The second reason is that human beings' spirits and culture heritages is the resouce
which (we used to) make the significant divisions between animals and human beings. For example, the same(去掉吧，感觉和后面的both重复) phenomenon that both animal mothers and human mothers feed their babies, the first is just an animal action,（蓝色部分有语法问题）and the second one is full of the anthropological meanings such as the human emotion, the life span continuing, ect. People themselves create the human heritages that help them form their own particularities which signify the meaning of "human being".

      In summary, maybe the study of animals have its worth (is worthy) in some other aspects, but I can't see that it can help the us to know more about the human beings.

1．有拼写错误，放到word里看一下。稍微注意以下，我这点做得也不好。
2．有些词的用法我也不是很确定，划线的部分都是我觉得有问题的地方。
3．感觉论证不是很充分，个人观点，我写文章的字数比较多，可能看到字数少的就会有这种幻觉。J

第一次改别人的文章，改得不好，别见怪。

[ 本帖最后由 candicehe 于 2008-9-9 12:57 编辑 ]

layfolkUID: 2418021

你改的很认真,谢谢!